Today was colder than any night. ermm or morning i don't know which. All i saw outside was white, white windows everywhere. I looked at Rainbow and asked
"Rainbow hows your wing?"
"Oh i think its getting better every day i think i can fly soon"
Rainbow attempts to lift off the ground but with a depressing thud she slid back to the ground and hit her head on the floor.
"Rainbow stop doing that your seriously going to be hurt!"
"Oh cmon Nick i really want to fly!!"
I point to the window and she sadly walk towards the couch. I don't think were going to survive long with the fridge stocked with food. I mean sure it's a lot but i need to keep on giving her the limited supply of carrots, eggs, and toast i have left. The rest i have is a million beef burrito hot pockets and a few dozen frozen steaks. I cant turn on the stove anymore because the gas has gone dead. Im still surprised about the electricity working.And i have a microwave. But i guess that's going to be gone in a few more days of this.. this entrapment. I feel like someone just took us and put us in a cage locked us up and threw away the key.
"Rainbow wanna play some twister?" i said
"Sure! what's twister? can i make another water tornado?" asked Rainbow
At that moment i started cracking up and laughing as hard as a hyeina
"No it's nothing like that Rainbow here im gonna teach you how to do it"
I take out the twister mat and demonstrate to Rainbow how to play twister. At first she kept on tripping on me. Then she got the hang of it.
"Your a natural Rainbow!"
"Thanks!"
After another hour of mindless boring games and Futurama. I begin to play some halo 4. Rainbow watches me as i play Halo and see's im killing aliens and says
"what's the point of killing stuff anyways? i mean why not make freinds with them?"
I remember the whole story line for Halo and begin Laughing so hard i feel the ground rumble a bit. And i stopped laughing. But then it happened. The ground... It rumbled again.. and again. Rainbow suddenly felt the ground shake multiple times and got scared.. i mean really scared.... scarier than slender man himself greeting you at your front door. I swear at that time i pissed my pants. My pupils dilated and i looked outside of the window adrenaline hit my body like a stone wall and i felt i could jump a mile in the air. I stared competently at the window. And then i saw it. Not a face, not a monster, it was nothing. Then i looked up. ohoohooo noo. I looked up and i saw cracks in the ceiling. Large gigantic cracks in the ceiling. And where was it positioned? right over Rainbow's head.
"RAINBOW DASH GET OUT OF THE WAY!!!!"
I jump to save Rainbow's life and right after that, the house caved in.
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My legs were pinned under all of the debris and snow. I felt that my lungs were crushed. My body was in a state of immense pain and suffering. All i could see was a blue figure looking straight at me saying *IM GOING TO GET YOU OUT HOLD STILL* I felt blood rush from my face all the way down to my arms. Scarlet red blood flowed everywhere. Puddles and puddles. I fell asleep. Forever.
I've noticed that you seem to have problems with analogies. There's this example, and the one from the last chapter with the kiss analogy (which made about as much sense as this one). The problem is that they don't make sense. At all. As it is, this one isn't even worded right. Using scarier in the way you used it means it switched from Rainbow being scared, to Rainbow being scary. Basically, you just called Rainbow scarier than Slender. Even if it was worded right, it still wouldn't make much sense. Why the sudden reference? How does that random tangent relate at all to the situation they were in?
Oh well, good luck with the rest of the story.