The terror, which would not end for another ten years, began, as far back as I know or can remember, with me slowly waking up in a pitch black and totally unfamiliar cavern, all around me the smell and presence of a damp, deep evil.
Wow, this took a long time to finish. I started it all the way back in November, I think. Please comment and rate fairly to tell me what you think! Any edits are appreciated too.
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Those Once Loyal - Bolt Thrower
I'm reminded of a flash game.
2216141Yeah, I did run into a problem with the limited amount of description I could give.
For a little while, I started to rewrite all of the dialogue like a "proper" fanfiction, written with description and not just dialogue. It didn't really work out, though...I suppose in the future I could add a second chapter with that description. Would you be interested in seeing that?
And SMD doesn't stand for anything. The acronym just popped into my head one day.
Is that it?
I'm glad you liked it, though!
2216187check out the link at the beginning of the fic.
2216107I'll listen to that when I get out of school...shh.
I remember this game.
2217566Um, um, um.
Semi - Mechanical Discordling?
2219622Not many people do, surprisingly enough. Thanks for reading it!
This has raised my interest on possible robo-mane 6 fics, does anyone know of any more?
Like many people, I have been waiting for this for... (November, December, January, February, March 6th) five months now. I was a pretty good story. The story is interesting, the sad moments are there, and that god damn ending. The only bad thing I could see in it was it lacked detail, meaning you didn't really tell us exactly how it looked like. Was it a big metal test chamber like in Portal? Or was it a stone temple. I have no clue. But the main thing that caught my attention was that the story was only told through speech. You get my thumbs up, but just wouldn't satisfy for a favorite.
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2221631Hm...There was one about Sweetie Belle being mechanical that was featured a little while ago, but I can't seem to remember its name. Does that ring a bell? I don't know of any fics that are robo - mane six, though.
2223415I'm glad you liked it! Also, when Dash mentions that Twilight was where Dash was once before and Nova mentioning that he teleported the sacred grounds beneath Canterlot, that was supposed to imply that they were in the caves - that is, the caves Twilight and Cadence were in during the season 2 finale. I might have not been clear in that, though...so no, they're not in test chambers. And yes, I did run into the problem of detail. The dialogue-only bit was sort of a double-edged sword - it added a unique level of mystery to the fic, but it also didn't leave many openings for me to write description in. If this was written like a traditional fic, I assure you, I would have put in a LOT of description. If I write a sequel, I will find a way to remedy that problem somehow. I might add description to the fic and then add it as a sort of "alternate version" chapter. Would you be interested in seeing that?
2223652Huh...that sounds good.
It's a possibility!
Also, as a note - I like that because I have some leeway with that sequel, because it's not specified which SMD was the one that Dash disabled instead of destroyed. Also, the princess who "stopped" the explosion is not specified, and we don't even know if the bomb went off or was deactivated or Dash was teleported like you said or what. I'll see what I can do with that...
2224374Yeah, she would. When I was originally writing Dark Loyalty, I purposely chose Twilight to be the deactivated one. It didn't factor into the plot at all, but I just chose it. If I make a sequel, which I probably will, I'll use her.