• Member Since 25th Feb, 2012
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LightStriker


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Lightning Dust is a rebel that has no place in the Equestrian armies. But something else might need her ability to do what must be done.

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Why? Because I just got Netflix and watched the season 3 and 4 of Torchwood. :twilightsmile:
It's impressive how bad those two seasons are. Mostly the last one which has more plotholes than the changelings. :trollestia:

Well, I still like that series and the concept behind it, even if it started to suck bad. :twilightangry2:

I haven't forgotten my other stories. I'm just an idiot with a short attention span. :rainbowderp:

Note: I've checked Spitfire's uniform and while it's not a direct link to the US or Canada aviation's rank, I feel the symbols they used are closed to the Major rank. Also remember that being a captain or a squadron or a ship doesn't mean you have the captain rank.

P.S.: I have no plan for this story. It hasn't been pre-read and I don't intend it to be. It's just a quick silly thing.

That last scentence of your description sort of reminded me of Half Life Full Life Conciquences.

1912383 It's a total coincidence. But I would lie if I said I'm not a fan of HL.
Gaben! Me want HL3! :twilightangry2:

Oh, and being a huge fan of Torchwood myself I simply must give this a thumbs up.
That, and it's not half bad.
Well done :twilightsmile:

Wait, I feel like I should remember what Torchwood was...

1912414 Spin-off series of Doctor Who. Torchwood is an anagram of "Doctor Who". An organization founded by the Queen of England, to defend the United Kingdom against aliens like the Doctor. :rainbowlaugh:

1912422
I knew it! It was that Torchwood I was thinking of!

Within the actual show, the anagram is coincidental, as the Torchwood insitute is named after a house in Scotland.

Personally I thought that season 3 was the best one - diabolical enemy, a realistic view of politics in an extreme crisis situation and a license to go dark on the final ending.
Originally the child was meant to be ok, until Davies said that was what would happen in an episode of Dr. Who, not an episode of Torchwood.

Season 4 was full of contradictions though

About this chapter though, it's an interesting start off. Lightning Dust just needs to get over her pathological desire to be the best at the expense of anyone else.

1912422 And the sad part is. I never even noticed it was an anagram. :moustache:

your language is occasionally awkward
but for the most part
it was enjoyable
intelligent
original
and well written
i look forward to more

Lightning Dust is a rebel that has no place in the Equestrian armies. But something else might need her ability to do what must be done.

Heeee ha ha! :rainbowlaugh:

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