One Last Gift

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psychobyte00

psychobyte00 #1 · Dec 26th, 2012 · · ·

No comments on this greatness? Fuck man, keep writing, Cereal! Your imagery of Twilight's body is top-notch! Something about how you described Twilight's pleasure was just so hot! Just the whole scenario arousing as hell! Cheers, Friend!!

SW #2 · Dec 26th, 2012 · · ·

- I Approve

kalash93

kalash93 #3 · Dec 26th, 2012 · · ·

Pretty damn good. Hell, you didn't even suddenly include hands of breasts. And you even bothered to be fairly realistic with the actual sex.

QuakeScape

QuakeScape #4 · Dec 26th, 2012 · 1 · ·

Oh fuck yes! Once again, Spike invaded Twilight's purple mountain majestique with his swell of patriotism.

Avid Reader

Avid Reader #5 · Dec 26th, 2012 · · ·

Commence read.

Thegodhand

Thegodhand #6 · Dec 26th, 2012 · · ·

Always up for a good Spilight

Rennes le chateau

Rennes le chateau #7 · Dec 26th, 2012 · · ·

Way to rush and short.
Where is the romance suppose to be, anyway?

The Dragon Warlock

The Dragon Warlock #8 · Dec 26th, 2012 · 6 · ·

This seriously needs a second chapter.

Inferno demon Dash

Inferno demon Dash #9 · Dec 26th, 2012 · 2 · ·

You have my full attettion friend, my favorite pairing of all time, Spike did well for being a virgin as did Twilight, to bad she did not get to cum with him I really enjoyed this, thank you and I'll be awaiting to se what else you got for other stories

Thegodhand

Thegodhand #10 · Dec 27th, 2012 · 2 · ·

It was good, but I would say it felt kinda rushed. Could use additional chapters to build romance.

DarkDMan

DarkDMan #11 · Dec 31st, 2012 · 2 · ·

Well that was really rushed.
You even skiped the first make-out scene.
And even if Twilight is older then Spike by a few years, I find it hard to believe that she's not a virgin too.
Also that was a messed-up ending, 10 seconds flat! Really!

(Sigh) Take my like on this story for the effort and idea.

Author of MADness

Author of MADness #12 · Jan 5th, 2013 · 1 · ·

OH MY!!!!!!
That was sexy dude!

Cereal

Cereal #13 · Feb 3rd, 2013 · · ·

Thanks for the well wishes and comments friends. I understand it was short and rushed. It wasn't necessarily intentional but I just wanted to write a quick christmas clop and get it out asap while I'm usually more of a slow writer, so it was kind of unavoidable and I ignored it. I will admit I regret forgetting a make out scene.

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