Rainbow Dash, Applejack, Pinkie Pie, Fluttershy and Rarity, all went to the same school at some point in time. Sadly their beloved teacher Cheerilee died there in a way they can't remember. Now -years passed the events- that very same teacher wants revenge. A revenge that can only be achieved by them bleeding to their death while screaming in agony.
Revenge on the five that ruined and eventually costed her, her life. But is everything as it seems to be? Or is this all, one big nightmare in and of itself? Frightened for their lives, the are willing to do everything to keep themselves alive and away from the killer. A killer who takes them in their very dreams.
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A story because I was bored alright, picture is a little unrelated for I couldn't really find a good one for it.
Yes, this can be considered a crossover, or at least Ponyfied version of 'A Nightmare on Elms street' and I agree, but given how I personally dislike it to make a character come from one universe in the other either staying normal or ponyfied, I went with for me the most logical thing.
Merry Christmas, my dear.
genius!
1847636 I am glad you like it darling.
i love it
Haha
was halfway trough the story Wien i realised it was a pony version of nightmare on elm Street
1853352 I am glad you do my dear.
1853376 Well, that is where it originated from, just looking at the glove replica in my room, and the idea was born to be honest, but changed up a lot of things, for I didn't want to just up Kreuger in Equestria in either human or pony form, so I went with my next logical choice, which being Cheerilee.
youre an amazing writer have you thought about doing this with again, but just with another horror movie?
i think it wpuld turn out great
1854098 Thank you darling, and truth be told, most of my stories do not have much thought in them, for I just begin and stop when it ends. Any other horror movie you ask? I have gotten a request once to make a 'Final Destination' one, but I placed that idea on hold, but I may or may not write a 'Saw' kind of story. I am still doubting for that.
Awesome! I loved it!
1909777 I am glad you did my dear.
A great story well done miss rarity
2223412 Thank you darling.
Rarity belle? i bucking love you! i mean i had read plenty of mlp crossovers with nightmare on elm street that made me hate the characters. but this one did not make me hate anyone and that in my book is good.
2377089 I am truly touched by your words my dear, for it are those kind of words you spoke that are my main driveforce to write.
But you also sparked my interest, (and being a sucker for feedback) what in your eyes did I do good that didn't make you hate the characters?
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so your welcome.
Well for one you didnt make them act like idiots to one another. and two in this story i actually felt like they were truly friends and that they acted in character most stories have the mane six acting out of character for whatever reason.
2379152 I thank you for the analyze for it truly helped me out more then you think. Nut too be completely honest, it is a tick I have while writing. I tend to keep my characters as close to the source material as possible. (Granted there are always exceptions)
And I think, keeping the word 'think' as the keyword, why in other stories they act OOC is because they are bend to the will of the author, instead of the reader.
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sometimes they would exaggerate the mane six's annoyance with Pinkie by having them not take her seriously. i mean didn't they learn that lesson about taking her seriously in the swarm of the century episode? i just don't like how some people write her the same can go with Rarity. sometimes when i do read a story where the characters are for whatever reason being ooc and nasty to one another i get mad and i tend to go on a rant to the author of course i feel bad later. i guess i just feel very protective of Pinkie because of what cupcakes did.
your welcome i am glad you like my analyzing of the characters.
Its how the writer themselves see the characters. like me i like to bring out Pinkie's serious side more while others would just make her overly stupid and crazy.
2379550 Every writer has its own look at the characters and take in mind that some stories are before or simply neglecting a certain episode.
Though I can understand your points very well.
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yup thank you for understanding. yeah someone told me the same thing everyone has different headcanons.
2379584 You are welcome my dear, and that everypony indeed has.
Great story I have to say I love how cherrilee is fready crugar good job!
2455796 Thank you darling.
You made me realize I don't like horror stories like this.
2833033 Glad I could be at your service.
Another one of your stories I love.
4583645 I'm truly glad to hear that dear.
Note to self: Stop reading horror stories at 11 at night with the lights turned off.....
7121553 But, but, but, what about 'immersion'?
7121834 I'm kiddin' I always read horror stories late at night and with the lights turned off. I find it gives it that "feeling of being watched" and every little noise and sound becomes more terrifying. I enjoyed this story
7121844 Immersion for the win! Though I'm glad to hear that you enjoyed the tale.
Wow. That was very bone-chilling, even I felt a few shivers run down my spine. I can't write horror since it's not my style, but you have the talent for it. Well done. ^^ (And for the fact that I'm reading this at 11:30pm, I may have nightmares tonight.
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7475968 Seems like the story did what it was supposed to do. Horror isn't really my style anymore either, but I still love to make spine-chilling tales. Funny thing, time. (I will not be held responsible for anything that happened after the reading of this tale, let that be clear, heheheh)
7476490 Haha, of course, I understand.