Chapter III
Twilight and her friends stood there, shocked expressions on their faces. Twilight had never seen such an attack. The robot
had just killed three Timber wolves with ease! Fluttershy was crying from the stress of the situation.
"What was that?" Rainbow Dash and Spike both exclaimed, just as shocked as the others.
"How did you do that? That was awesome!" Rainbow said, for now her shock was replaced with awe and curiosity.
"This thing must come from an advanced society!" Twilight exclaimed, and then she, too, became more awed than stupefied.
"Oh, we could learn so much from it! If only we could understand it!"
They stopped talking among themselves when they realized their visitor was gone.
"Hey, where in tarnation did it go?" asked Applejack.
They all stared, looking around and trying to find some trace of it. "Something that big should not be able to simple walk
away that easily!"
Meanwhile, 65 left the ponies to their conversation, walking to the nearest hint of a settlement: a barn.
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The Sith stood at the bridge of the ship, contemplating the events so far. They had found a habitable planet, which turned
out to be a home ruled by ponies; and not just that, but force sensitive ponies!
He had requested his padawan up to the bridge. His plan was to send her down to the planet to make some sort of
relationship with certain members of this new species. He knew better than to just land a few hundred troops on the planet.
He had no idea how to gauge the locals' reactions, so he would send the only one on board he trusted completely.
Another presence entered the room. "Hello, Kira,” he said, turning around and smiling.
She was dressed in black Sith robes. She had calculating eyes, as well as a beautiful face. She smiled. "Hello."
"I am sending you to the planet below. You are to stay out of sight from the general population and learn what you can. But
also, I want you to build a re pore with them.”
She bowed. "Yes, master," she said, grinning before she left the room. She could take care of herself; he had no doubts of
that. He was more worried that she would scare the locals.
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"Look, there it is!"
The call sounded through 65's receptors. Turning, he saw the group he thought he just left. The ponies ran up to him
panting. He made a calculated guess that they where looking for him for a while. Suddenly, his receptors alerted him to a
high energy build up, and a flash of white signaled the arrival of another.
Twilight sighed a breath of relief, having found the alien. Running up with her friends, a flash of white light temporarily
blinded them.
"Princess Celestia!" Twilight shouted, surprised by her speed in reacting to her letter. She, along with her friends, bowed.
"Yes, I came as soon as I could. It isn't every day such odd events occur. So, this is the alien you spoke of?" Princess
Celestia asked, walking up the the tall metallic creature. It stood a little higher than her, which was something she wasn't
used to. "Hello. I am Princess Celestia the co-ruler of this land."
The creature turned to her, garbled something unintelligible, and then returned to examining some plants that were nearby.
"I bid you welcome,” she said, but it simple ignored her.
"Princess," Twilight began, trotting up to the Princess, "it arrived about an hour ago, and we were soon after attacked by
some Timber wolves. But this alien killed them with that thing on its back without touching them!" she informed the princess.
The princess frowned. "Do you think it is a threat?"
Twilight shook her head. "No, and it doesn't seem to understand us just as we don't understand it."
It was then that Celestia turned to Twilight's friends and proceeded to ask that the CMC go home; it was for the best, since
they still didn't know if the thing was a threat. Once again facing the creature, she found it standing a mere few inches from
her face. Surprised, she took a step back, acting calmly and slowly, so as to not cause it alarm.
It reached up and took the tiara from her head and examined it. "That is my tiara. It signifies me as co-ruler."
After taking a few second to look at it, it dropped it. Celestia reacted quickly, catching it with her magic. The ponies gasped,
but Celestia was fine with it.
"Twilight, how do you suggest we proceed?" she asked, turning to Twilight.
"Me?" Twilight asked. After a moment, she decided, "Well, I suggest we study it. We could learn so much from it. It could
even unlock new technology! But also I think it is dangerous, if provoked.” There was a large amount of enthusiasm at the
technology part.
Fluttershy, who had remained quiet up to this point, finally spoke up. "Umm, what if it doesn't want to be studied? What if it
just wants to explore? I mean, if I was in a unfamiliar place, I wouldn't want to be captured and studied,” she said softly.
Everypony looked at her, which caused her to make herself as small as possible.
"Fluttershy, how can you say that? This thing just killed three Timber wolves!" Rainbow said.
"Well, umm, I can forgive it. It could have thought they were savage, and it might not have known that I could calm them
down."
A loud scream came through the air, followed by the stream of smoke from the air. Looking up, they caught sight of another
object coming down from the sky, but this time the object was much larger than the last.
Their large metal friend took off at large speeds, heading towards the same direction the object was headed... Ponyville.
Celestia sensed something dark and dangerous in it. Whatever or whoever was in that object was very powerful. "Come with me, my little ponies. It seems we have more visitors."
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1847954 Why do I smell a "Star Wars: The Forced Unleashed" reference?
1853438 I can sense it!
1853463
1853485 lol
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:3
1853561
This formating got REALLY odd man. Fix it?
It seems that despite how you spaced out the paragraphs, some sentences got cut off into its own paragraph. They are all obvious, and you can just go back and click them back to where they belong. The format of this story really doesn't seem to get along with you at all.
Hopefully, you can get something sorted out eventually.
1854434>>1854120 ok thanks, tomorrow i will fix it!!!!!
meh now I just don't like it :/
1858775 umm not really that's pretty much how someone would react to the approach of a sith. Its not even danger. Just the entry of a powerful being.
1858775 I mean dark and dangerous describes most sith lol.
You should be aware show don't tell is preferred on these parts, saying something like how she turned to see the three dead timberwolves, instead of announcing how she things it might be a threat. That way we can draw our own conclusions, and feel more integrated in the story.
Also, you should fix the lines, I am almost certain those are from when you transferred it over to fimfic, the line ends became spaced oddly so it cuts to a new chunk of text mid-sentence.
Yeah, the paragraphs in this chapter are still disconnected. Pretty disappointed they still are
The Sith cometh