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Pinkie Pie discovers that Rainbow Dash keeps a small box with a hidden secret. Unfortunately, she is not allowed to see what's inside her box. Discover what great lengths Pinkie will go to have Rainbow reveal the contents of her mysterious box in this spectacular adventure. Secrets will be revealed! Friendships will be tested! What's inside that Box?
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*reads title and summary* Remake of the Spongebob epi? Will read later.
For some reason this reminds me of Spongebob
Is it an embarrassing picture of Pinkie Pie at a Christmas party?
For the LOVE OF GOD!! Rainbow Dash DOESNT live in Cloudsdale she lives in a cloud house above Ponyville
Cloudsdale is a CITY in the sky that's no where near Ponyville
Dasgph's House/Mansion/Castle is just that and all I does is float above Ponyville
Ok let me correct that last sentence on that last comment
*Dash's House/ Mansion/ Castle is just that, nothing else. It floats above PonyVille
1826570 Oh, well I'm sorry about that.
I'll be sure to revisit that mistake as soon as possible. 
Thanks for the advice.
The thing that Peeves me off is that nearly everybody on this site makes that mistake
They think RD live in Cloudsdale when Cloudsdale is no where near Ponyville
If it was that close why would Dash have to travel to Cloudsdale to do the best young flyers compitition
And in the Episode the Wonderbolts academy it shows Dash's house above Ponyville not in Cloudsdale
Sorry I just need to rant to blow off some steam you don't mind do you??
1826617 Not at all. What I meant to say is that I'm open to any criticism.
1826631 so will you report that guy????
The above comments are right. Totally Spongebob.
I like this, though. I can easily see Pinkie doing this in the show.
1826645 I was going to add "inspired by SpongeBob" on the description, but I thought it would be best if readers figured it out themselves.
1826680 Well, you have my fave. Just don't make it like the actual episode and it actually IS that embarrassing picture, cleverly disguised as a string.
1826694 Don't worry. I assure you, you will be pleasantly surprised when part II comes out.
1826708
1826507 It's obviously just a piece of string
1827016 but what happens when you pull the string
Will a secret compartment open revealing a Pic of Pinkie Pie drink at the Heart Warming eve party?
1827032 We'll never know, or will we, or will we never no about not ever knowing! I'm confused now
SO MUCH YUS.
:D
I love old spongebob episodes! You sir, deserve a new follower, a like, a favorite, and a positive comment!
its a stick or a cat or *mindblow* a string!!!!
A STRING?!
Spoiler: It's a useless mannco crate actually
I read what Twi said and died of laughter. This website is in heavan.
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Can't wait for more!)
(Other than that, awesome job!
1827218>>1826617 One question - did the first chapter seem a little fast paced to you? I'm trying to make the second part longer.
1830972 not at all really it was alright
Susie? Why not Mandark?
Two mistakes in the first paragraph see if you can find em
1838901 Susie is what Mandarks parents called him
Was the Cupcakes vibe on purpose?
1839043 Thanks for pointing that out. I'll fix them as soon as possible.
1839289 I GOT IT 2
Lol for some reason I though you would use Betty but Susie is just as good.
This makes me want to rewatch Se7en.
Gamma Ray reminds me of Doctor Fate.
I hate you
1916419 I know.
1916419 Look on the bright side, I least didn't take the Spongebob route and it's an embarrassing photo of Pinkie at the Christmas party.
Don't worry, this is just fic to test my skills as a storyteller. Hopefully, I will get better.
Sorry to disappoint you.
I think this could really benefit from a proofreader. There are quite a few odd grammatical things, some spelling/typos, and a number of short sentences that could be compressed or fused into longer sentences to improve the flow. I'd also not use "x"/"x" in actual stories. It's more of a shorthand typing thing and feels out of place in an actual work.
1916503 Thanks! I'll remember that next time.
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... I am so sorry....
Dang I wanted to know what was in that box! But very nice job on the story!
.... WHAT WAS IN THE BOX?!?!?!
1919555 Everything anyone has ever valued in their life. All your thoughts, dreams, desires, and fears all wrapped in one closed space. An entire universe where none suffered, and angels sing of the wonders of everlasting life.
Of course, that's just one of many interpretations.
1919555 My guess, Solid Snake.
1921085 Psht, The box was the wrong way up though. So it'd have to be him on his back flailing like a turtle. n_n
very cute fic but grammar kinda went nuts toward the end of things.
am I wrong in assuming that this is based on a Spongebob episode..... because that is the first thing that popped into my head.