Wow... quite a bit of drama in this chapter. Not that it's bad, but certainly makes things... intense.

Well, surprised that everything that was hidden was brought out into the open again so quick, but I suppose that when plans're bad, no doubt things'll happen that way. Also would've been nice to see Spike's reaction to news about Rarity and Scootaloo, though I suppose that probably happened in the month they were together before this story started, so I digress. Just idly wondering. Interesting to see about Rose again, even if her role was surprising. I have to wonder what sort of plot you have in mind (trying to gain leverage to topple Equestrian throne?), or if Rose and the one who assigned her to look over Rarity's and Cheerilee's relationships with fillies are the unicorns who did the age-regression thing. Though you never said if they were even unicorns in the first place... and also have to wonder if Twilight is gonna complicate Cheerilee's relationship with Sweetie Belle, now that they're closer to each other's age again (I think). Not to mention: how is them being fillies gonna affect things or be explained, at least in your way of writing it? So many questions! dl.dropbox.com/u/31471793/FiMFiction/emoticons/sillyfilly_Rarity.png dl.dropbox.com/u/31471793/FiMFiction/emoticons/sillyfilly_Sweetie_Belle.png dl.dropbox.com/u/31471793/FiMFiction/emoticons/sillyfilly_Scootaloo.png dl.dropbox.com/u/31471793/FiMFiction/emoticons/sillyfilly_Twilight_Sparkle.png

Well, continuing to look forward to see where things are going from this point on!

What's with all the swearing? Also, Rarity doesn't get pissed off, a lady should never lose her temper

Also you should spell it as 'oops', not 'ops'

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Well bare in mind as i said previously, I'm trying to get rid of the whole "memory wipe" plot element as quickly as possible to move onto the better one.

DRAMAAAAAA!!!!

Ok I got kinda lost part way through reading so i had to read it again to clear it up, but as for those two unicorns...I see a lot of problems later on....I can not freaking wait!

Wow... just wow. I don't even know how to begin besides with the words: "loooooooooooooooooooooooooved it!"

I know who's gonna be keeping an eye on all these fillies though.

I'm just going to put it out there. those unicorns remind me of flim and flam. when i read that I just pictured those two being behind the trouble. nice to see how this is progressing and nice to see sweetie still being mature. wouldn't of thought she planted all those things tho I figured it was all done on its own. tho sweetie may need some cheerilee time after going off on her sister like that, she should totally invite cheerilee over and go at it in rarity's room on her bed just to push her sisters buttons further. keep up the good work you've defiantly got the suspense going

Rarity, in regards to Sweetie's relationship, I only got three words for you...
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well buck

Part One

Reminds me of recent movies
I personally would've named this chapter Rediscovering the flame within:Part the First

“I taught at Celestia's School for gifted unicorns for nearly eight years!

Cap.
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“Ops...” The filly remarked aloud as she scratched the back of her head with her right hoof.

“Ops? You call this ops?!” Rarity exclaimed outraged as she glared at her sister now.

“Yeah, opsie...” Sweetie Belle replied unable to think of anything else to say at the moment.

“Well un-opsie us right this minute!”

Oops / oops

oopsie
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“Oh horseapples, they heard us! Scam!”

Scram
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Nice.