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Hmm... I detect that someone has been playing 'Banned from Equestria Daily'...
Noticed quite a few mistakes in this chapter, I can't currently point them out but there's at least 5 or more.
scoots is got a lot on her plate and now the double date too. maybe she still get them both to agree to be her lovers in a sexy triangle.
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I do say!
Also, your story now qualifies for inclusion in the Futaquestria group.
Enjoy
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Yes! That means my chapter did what i intended it to do!
My intention from the get go from this chapter was to take my readers on a roller coaster so to speak with up and down moments and then take up WAAAY UP with an over the top clop scene and JUST WHEN they are at that peak going"oh this is awesome!" i grab em by the tail and send them plummeting down with the following leaving them going "well...fuck. now i actually feel bad for enjoying that clop scene so much.."
Though my intention is not to ruin a good clop scene, the path i took with this chapter I felt was necessary to bring a since of reality back to my fic which was slowly losing over the last chapter or so.^^
I'm sorry, what? Applejack and MacIntosh? No. Just No. And why does every story on this fucking site end up resorting to magic futa?
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Geez, sorry. I didn't know futa was that offensive, i threw that in there to provide some variety and plus it was used as part of the story subtly.
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Something about magically altering a person's genitals is just disturbing to me on a subconcious level. And it seems like so many writers use it as an easy way out of being creative with F/F sex.
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Given the fact i just written a F/F scene earlier in this story, I don't think this applies to me. But i do understand why it can bug you, I just hope you understand I didn't write the futa scene in there "just because".
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