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Fave and thumb up.dl.dropbox.com/u/31471793/FiMFiction/Scootaloo_lolface.png
Because I loved the first and I've been waiting for this for like forever!
same
Whooo new Belle tolls!!!
You got like no capital letters in the first one and all caps in this title.
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eh? I'm not following.
1798718 The title of the first story only had one single capital letter whereas this title is all caps.
Well, glad to see this back up again, even if on a new story. Had worried some reviews (mine included), had made you want to change the route or whatever.
Anyway!
I see you reposted first chapter and combine the second and third, with an extension. A bit more funny, especially with the added parts, when Twilight found Sweetie defaced one of her books (which she somehow didn't notice the first time dl.dropbox.com/u/31471793/FiMFiction/emoticons/sillyfilly_Twilight_Sparkle.png ) and Spike's nonchalant attitude toward it, as with few events in canon. dl.dropbox.com/u/31471793/FiMFiction/Spike_lolface.png But maybe Sweetie's childlike belief will fix things and restore their memories, for all we know at this point. Well, curious to see where it goes from here and how things will go back to normal (despite possibility of the special cases worker that's called when something goes wrong, showing up again), with what you said about how things right now won't last for long. Not to mention what happens with Rainbow Dash, when the truth comes out, even though Scoots forgot about her for the better part of three months or so. dl.dropbox.com/u/31471793/FiMFiction/emoticons/misc_rainbowderp_flip.png Anyway, tracked!
This got featured. It's certainly isn't NOT feature worthy... but... I dunno, man.
(Joke) Alt. Title: For Whom The Belle Tolls Get Featured
You basterd....
i like this allot keep it up
omg a sequel..... my body is ready. lol Havent read this yet, but wanna say i hope its as good as the original was
okay yes, so far, the second one is just as good as the first. cant wait for more
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> reading this before the original
what the hell...
i'll have ta take a lok
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This story got featured BECAUSE of the amount of views it has and the amount of favs it has received. The system is NOT flawed and if you wish to discuss why it might be(even though it's not) you can do that HERE and NOT on my story page. Thank you for your consideration and no offense but the comments have been deleted due to be irrelevant to my story.
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Jesus, overreaction much? As I recall, my comment wasn't even related to your story getting featured; I couldn't care less. It was just a poke at your extremely loud ALL CAPS TITLE.
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Which is not relevant to my story. hence why it was deleted.
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lol
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Don't want to seem like a bitch, but I don't like it when trolls invade my story page in an attempt to discredit it. (not saying you are but still)
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I don't usually become a grammar nazi, but when I do, its becuase something hillarous comes to mind.
I loved the first one, and now I am loving the second one as well. But the grammar does kind of take away from it for me. I really hope you don't take offense to this, like I said I love the plot and can read through the constant run ons, and overuse of "in a ___ tone" and overall awkward wording.
This is off to a wonderful start and expect a great story, just try to touch up the grammar and sentance building a bit.
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*dies laughing and fixes error*
not bad like how this is going except twilight does realize that you can't totally wipe away memories right? its like in a filly's tale (secret to mah success more accurately) when celestia removes all memory of bloom and scoots child from there memories. sure they don't out right know but deep down in there heart they still do. I wonder what twilights going to do when scoots and rarity discover she attempted to remove all there memories? I sense a shitstorm for twilight messing with there memories.
also why ya drop the best filly? ya know she's my fave. you trying to make this puppy sad ;_; *runs off to comfort poor bloomy*
HA BUSTED! I knew that trying to erase there memories would fail. silly twilight still hasn't learned that magic can't change everything. tho I gotta say sweetie's idea is spot on. if scoots and rarity share a kiss I'm sure it will bring back all there memories. they'd just have to wipe out the social workers memories when she catches rarity and scoots eating each other out on one of rarity's sewing tables lol. really nice chapter can't wait to see what hair brained idea's the pony's come up with to reunite rarity and scoots.
so when can we see chapter 3 *scoots red bull and type writer to you* and 4, and 5, ya know not that I'm waiting or anything hehe
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lol well it's 1k words in so far and i plan to work on it more later today^^
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sweet so only 10k more and it'll be done huh ^^ (I love the longer chapters)
but you take the time you need we don't need you rushing and having to redo it all.
Wow... quite a bit of drama in this chapter.
Not that it's bad, but certainly makes things... intense. 
Well, surprised that everything that was hidden was brought out into the open again so quick, but I suppose that when plans're bad, no doubt things'll happen that way.
Also would've been nice to see Spike's reaction to news about Rarity and Scootaloo, though I suppose that probably happened in the month they were together before this story started, so I digress. Just idly wondering. 
Interesting to see about Rose again, even if her role was surprising. I have to wonder what sort of plot you have in mind (trying to gain leverage to topple Equestrian throne?), or if Rose and the one who assigned her to look over Rarity's and Cheerilee's relationships with fillies are the unicorns who did the age-regression thing. Though you never said if they were even unicorns in the first place... and also have to wonder if Twilight is gonna complicate Cheerilee's relationship with Sweetie Belle, now that they're closer to each other's age again (I think). Not to mention: how is them being fillies gonna affect things or be explained, at least in your way of writing it? So many questions! dl.dropbox.com/u/31471793/FiMFiction/emoticons/sillyfilly_Rarity.png dl.dropbox.com/u/31471793/FiMFiction/emoticons/sillyfilly_Sweetie_Belle.png dl.dropbox.com/u/31471793/FiMFiction/emoticons/sillyfilly_Scootaloo.png dl.dropbox.com/u/31471793/FiMFiction/emoticons/sillyfilly_Twilight_Sparkle.png
Well, continuing to look forward to see where things are going from this point on!
What's with all the swearing? Also, Rarity doesn't get pissed off, a lady should never lose her temper
Also you should spell it as 'oops', not 'ops'
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Well bare in mind as i said previously, I'm trying to get rid of the whole "memory wipe" plot element as quickly as possible to move onto the better one.
DRAMAAAAAA!!!!
Note to self.....never ever write in any of the books in the library....also...just how pale did spike get as he saw his short life flash before his eyes
Ok I got kinda lost part way through reading so i had to read it again to clear it up, but as for those two unicorns...I see a lot of problems later on....I can not freaking wait!
Just want you to know that I loved the first story and I really enjoy what I have read of this one. Keep up the good work.
Wow... just wow. I don't even know how to begin besides with the words: "loooooooooooooooooooooooooved it!"
I know who's gonna be keeping an eye on all these fillies though.
I'm just going to put it out there. those unicorns remind me of flim and flam. when i read that I just pictured those two being behind the trouble. nice to see how this is progressing and nice to see sweetie still being mature. wouldn't of thought she planted all those things tho I figured it was all done on its own. tho sweetie may need some cheerilee time after going off on her sister like that, she should totally invite cheerilee over and go at it in rarity's room on her bed just to push her sisters buttons further. keep up the good work you've defiantly got the suspense going
Okay, few things need to be said, ahem.
1. Loved the first story, loved the feels!
2. I'm liking where this is going, so far.
3. Rose Pettleworth possible addition to S*** List, I'll decide depending on how the story progress.
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You so got that off of Lilo & Stitch, Cobra Bubbles!
Rarity, in regards to Sweetie's relationship, I only got three words for you...
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well buck
Sweet chapter. Can't wait to see where this goes.
this is what this chapter makes me think of
look at what you have unleashed upon me author
and then they bucked the end jk