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Fave and thumb up.dl.dropbox.com/u/31471793/FiMFiction/Scootaloo_lolface.png
Because I loved the first and I've been waiting for this for like forever!
same
Whooo new Belle tolls!!!
You got like no capital letters in the first one and all caps in this title.
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eh? I'm not following.
1798718 The title of the first story only had one single capital letter whereas this title is all caps.
Well, glad to see this back up again, even if on a new story. Had worried some reviews (mine included), had made you want to change the route or whatever. Anyway!
I see you reposted first chapter and combine the second and third, with an extension. A bit more funny, especially with the added parts, when Twilight found Sweetie defaced one of her books (which she somehow didn't notice the first time dl.dropbox.com/u/31471793/FiMFiction/emoticons/sillyfilly_Twilight_Sparkle.png ) and Spike's nonchalant attitude toward it, as with few events in canon. dl.dropbox.com/u/31471793/FiMFiction/Spike_lolface.png But maybe Sweetie's childlike belief will fix things and restore their memories, for all we know at this point. Well, curious to see where it goes from here and how things will go back to normal (despite possibility of the special cases worker that's called when something goes wrong, showing up again), with what you said about how things right now won't last for long. Not to mention what happens with Rainbow Dash, when the truth comes out, even though Scoots forgot about her for the better part of three months or so. dl.dropbox.com/u/31471793/FiMFiction/emoticons/misc_rainbowderp_flip.png Anyway, tracked!
This got featured. It's certainly isn't NOT feature worthy... but... I dunno, man.
(Joke) Alt. Title: For Whom The Belle Tolls Get Featured
i like this allot keep it up
okay yes, so far, the second one is just as good as the first. cant wait for more
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This story got featured BECAUSE of the amount of views it has and the amount of favs it has received. The system is NOT flawed and if you wish to discuss why it might be(even though it's not) you can do that HERE and NOT on my story page. Thank you for your consideration and no offense but the comments have been deleted due to be irrelevant to my story.
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Jesus, overreaction much? As I recall, my comment wasn't even related to your story getting featured; I couldn't care less. It was just a poke at your extremely loud ALL CAPS TITLE.
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Which is not relevant to my story. hence why it was deleted.
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lol
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Don't want to seem like a bitch, but I don't like it when trolls invade my story page in an attempt to discredit it. (not saying you are but still)
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I don't usually become a grammar nazi, but when I do, its becuase something hillarous comes to mind.
I loved the first one, and now I am loving the second one as well. But the grammar does kind of take away from it for me. I really hope you don't take offense to this, like I said I love the plot and can read through the constant run ons, and overuse of "in a ___ tone" and overall awkward wording.
This is off to a wonderful start and expect a great story, just try to touch up the grammar and sentance building a bit.
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*dies laughing and fixes error*
HA BUSTED! I knew that trying to erase there memories would fail. silly twilight still hasn't learned that magic can't change everything. tho I gotta say sweetie's idea is spot on. if scoots and rarity share a kiss I'm sure it will bring back all there memories. they'd just have to wipe out the social workers memories when she catches rarity and scoots eating each other out on one of rarity's sewing tables lol. really nice chapter can't wait to see what hair brained idea's the pony's come up with to reunite rarity and scoots.
so when can we see chapter 3 *scoots red bull and type writer to you* and 4, and 5, ya know not that I'm waiting or anything hehe
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lol well it's 1k words in so far and i plan to work on it more later today^^
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sweet so only 10k more and it'll be done huh ^^ (I love the longer chapters)
but you take the time you need we don't need you rushing and having to redo it all.
Note to self.....never ever write in any of the books in the library....also...just how pale did spike get as he saw his short life flash before his eyes
Okay, few things need to be said, ahem.
1. Loved the first story, loved the feels!
2. I'm liking where this is going, so far.
3. Rose Pettleworth possible addition to S*** List, I'll decide depending on how the story progress.
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You so got that off of Lilo & Stitch, Cobra Bubbles!
i have to ask was the subliminal lilo and stitch joke really necessarily for the social worker?
Is it just me or is Twilight taking a lot of shit from everypony?
I mean, Scootaloo, Cheerilee, Sweetie Belle and Rarity all seem to vent out on her like she's responsible for all their problems when she's in fact doing all she can to make them all happy.
She's putting her reputation on the line to help these ungrateful mares and fillies and all she gets back is shouting, complaining and unjust remarks.
Sweetie Belle talking to her in a mocking tone surprised me a lot, I wouldn't expect her to speak to Twilight, whom she owns so much, with so little respect.
Now, not trying to judge or anything but, do you have something against Twilight or is she suppose to be the butt of all negativity?
clever now you did the social worker scene from "Lilo & Stitch" movie only thing missing is the 3 day warning
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Well that answers my last chapters question. And now Sweetie dies. Poor filly forgot that you never bend, crease, dog ear, or stain the sanctity of Twiight Snarkle's books. For her wrath is even more greater than that of the Pinkest of Pies over a broken Pinkie Promise.
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What in the hay does Rose look like? And the social worker who came to visit? Other than mare we're given no physical descrpitors / color palettes.
You mimicked that last part from The Crystal Empire when Twilight overreacted after Spike told her it was just a regular test.
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I hope you weren't trying to hide your reference. Are aliens involved later in the story?