On a trip to Rainbow Dash's house, Twilight and Rainbow end up in a gender-swapped world of Equestria. The two meet Rainbow Blitz, Dusk Shine, Bubble Berry, and the rest of the Stallion Mane 6 on their way back to their own world.
Note: I was NOT trying to rip off the original. I've never even seen the original, much less tried to copy it. I did use the original names from the original "On a Cross and Arrow", but I promise that's all that I am using in this strangely dream-inspired fic.
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You might want to change the name of this to avoid further downvotes and unflattering comparisons.
I fear that the title is already used:
http://www.fimfiction.net/story/755/on-a-cross-and-arrow
1825951 Agreed. I'd suggest something like "63 Skidoo" wait, that's not good enough... I'll get back to you.
Your just Ripping off the Original
On a Cross and Arrow
I find myself wondering:
Is your title intentionally misleading people into thinking this is the hugely popular fic of a very similar context, or did you simply fail to check if your title was already taken?
'Based on a dream you had?' Titled like a shameful rip-off of 'On a Cross and Arrow' no less?
And the story itself.... the writing isn't that bad. It just... didn't make much sense? And the pacing felt rushed.
If accidental, you should probably re-upload this fic under a different name so that people don't keep down voting it. The fic seems sufficiently good enough that it doesn't deserve the hate.
If purposeful, please go away.
WHEN will people learn that RD doesn't love I. Cloudsdale she live in a cloud house OVER Ponyville
Not Cloudsdale
And I guess while I'm hanging around...
You know, if your first chapter isn't long enough to meet the minimum, you can always write the second chapter as well before submitting. It might be good to do so in any case -- too many stories submitted to this site are rushed little first chapters that just meet the minimum length requirements and then they get downvoted to Tartarus because no-one likes a rushed story. You want comments and faves and thumb-ups, right? Well then don't just scrape by on minimums.
I mean, I don't expect you to slave over the beginning of your story for years or anything, but the minimum words rule is there for a reason.
1826094 Wait, wait... What?
Okay, I was reading through the comments, and the A/N says you had trouble meeting the whimpy 1k word minimum? REALLY? I'm sorry, but... That's pretty sad... I mean, not everyone can write 7 or 15, or 20k word chapters, but really? You don't know how to make a chapter longer than 1k? I know it's a tad shallow of me, but I'm not even interested in a story where the author has TROUBLE meeting 1k words. That's a sign that there's not going to be much detail, will be fast-paced, and just... No, I'm sorry. Even if you uploaded every day, it's not worth my time to read only 1k. Sorry. (If it makes you feel better, though, I'm not down-voting you, considering I didn't read it.)
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Okay guys, 1: I'm just trying to make a decent foc, which means being more descriptive and I wanted it to be a cliffhanger for the chapter.
2: I will change the title, but I didn't know the title was a fic. I just knew it was male ponies like this. And not trying to rip off the original though, I just used the same names.
I will try do do better after this.
Needs work but im an amateur writer to so... keep it up.
You looked like you needed an upvote so i gave you one.
Finally if your looking for title names try somthing to do with mirrors... Storm swapped? A Twidash adventure? The Rougher sex? The black cloud conundrum?
...Yeah... titles are hard...
how much longer until next chapter?
I dare say,
Moar plz
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