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After testing another spell, it ends in a strangely common outcome:
Somepony ends up in another universe.

But this is different.(Or is it?) Twilight becomes one of the dominant species, in this case, an Espeon. And just who does she find? Pikachu and Fennekin.

(Pokémon from X & Y will be added as they are posted on the Internet. This is basically PMD: Darkness/Time/Sky, but with Gates to Infinity added as time goes on.)

Chapters (3)
Comments ( 72 )

My only real complaint at this point is that the chapters are a bit short for my liking. Otherwise, this is a good start, and I'm looking forward to seeing where you take this.

Remind me the species of Fenneken if you don't mind.
One suggestion though. Your next chapters... try combining some of them for a bigger word count.

Thank you, my chapters may not be the longest, but I am trying my best to increase the size. I'm glad that my story has gotten this much good review in such a short time.:pinkiesmile:

celestia should send the rest of them to go get her and form different teams

fluttershy rainbowdash

rarity applejack

and twilight will join the fannekin pikachu and spike will join them as an axew or something

Interesting, I thought you're going to do a alternet version of Gates of Infinity, then again it's much more easier to do a sequel to Explorers of Time, Darkness and Sky versions

2258112 fennekin is the fire starter for pokemon X&Y

Very good story so far. Lengthen your chapters and I will be satisfied.As for your Exploration team request from last chapter...

Team Aura Storm
Team Members:2
Team Rank: Master

Lucario:
Gander:Male
Nickname: Anubis
Ability: Steadfast
Moves:Aura Sphere
Dragon Pulse
Extreme Speed
Metal Claw

Blaziken:
Gender:Male
Nickname:Fawkes
Ability:Blaze
Moves:Blast Burn
Brick Break
Flamethrower
Aerial Ace

Omg you stole my idea only it wasn't going to be like this--it was going to human becoming a pony thing instead but I do love your story! Hoping for more. :heart:

Nice one! Keep her a going!

...Please don't call me useless like all authors do. I don't want another argument.

2258112 Fennekin is the Gen 6 fire starter.

Interesting… let's see what happens next!

BTW, my team in Blue Rescue Team is Treeko, Squirtle, Poochyena.

You have picked my interest with that story of yours. Consider yourself followed.
As for my Exploration teams...
Team Razzia / Rank Gold
Persian (female) - Limber
Seductress. Loves Money. The Brain.
Moves : Pay Day / Thunderbolt / Fake Out / Fury Swipes
Gengar (male) - Levitate
Prankster. A bit childish. Wears Sunglasses on all circumstances.
Moves : Hypnosis / Dream Eater / Shadowball / Night Shade
Charizard (male) - Blaze
Hot blooded. Brags a lot but means well.
Moves : Fly / Heat Wave / Flamethrower / Metal Claw
And
Team Shelling / Rank Gold (same as Razzia)
Shuckle (female) - Gluttony
The voice of reason. Really Smart. Looooves Berries.
Moves : Wrap / Rest / Toxic / Return
Shedinja (none) - Wonder Guard
Quiet. Shy. Altruistic
Moves : Leech life / Fury Swipes / Confuse Ray / Dig
Dragonite (Male) - Inner Focus
Dependable. Honest but a little too impulsive.
Moves : Fly / Dragon Dance / Outrage / Hyper Beam
Do as you want with them, change a few things, make them evil, don't use them at all. I hope it'll be support enough. :twilightsheepish:

(Also i totally ship Persian with Gengar, and Shuckle with Dragonite. I don't even know why.)

2261295 i like your idea but couldnt you have blaziken have flamethower instead of slash and aerial ace instead of peck?:twilightsheepish:

this is an awesome idea man cant wait for more also a fan of the mystery dungeon series and pokemon so keep up the good work man:twilightsmile:

2263231 Sure I guess that could work. I will edit my comment.

Team Request? HURRAY!

->Team Profile

Team: Omega
Team Members: 3
Team Rank: Master

->Members

Species: Typhlosion
Gender: Male
Nickname: Alpha
Ability: Blaze
Moves:
-Flamethrower
-Agility
-Shadow Ball
-Eruption

Species: Empoleon
Gender: Male
Nickname: Zeta
Ability: Torrent
Moves:
-Metal Claw
-Drill Peck
-Bubblebeam
-Hydro Pump

Species: Leafeon
Gender: Female
Nickname: Phi
Ability: Leaf Guard
Moves:
-Giga Drain
-Leaf Blade
-Toxic
-Shadow Ball

Additional Info: Now these guys go WAY back, and they've seen shit things. You have my full support if you to want to make them a plot device or... Something else.

Team: Fightfire/Master rank(3stars)
Lucario(named 1 Hit K.O.)(Male)-Inner Focus and Steadfast
Caring, never give up spirit, and mastermind of the team
Moves: Aura Sphere / Force Palm / Wide Slash / Dragon Pulse
Ninetales(named Tentales)(female)-Flash Fire
Shy but Deadly If Mad, and Always want to down outlaws
Moves: Faint Attack / Flamethrower / Extrasensory / Fire Blast
Lapras(King Lapras)(Male)-Water Absorb and Shell Armor
Powerful, but defensive, cares greatly for friends
Moves: Withdraw / Safeguard / Ice Beam / Hydro Pump

Have them teach the up and coming team how to be a proper Exploration teams

Thanks all of you for sending in teams! I'll do my best to get as many as I can into the story!!

If you'd like I will msg you about it if ya want I have Explorers of Sky on me right now if you ask.

2282087 Hey this isn't that bad here is my Team

Name: Timeshift
Rank: Master
Members: 2


Species: Lucario
Nickname: Chance
Abilty: Inner Focus
Team role: Leader
Move set: Aura Sphere, Close Combat, Giga Impact, Earthquake


Species: Zoroark
Nickname: Shade
Ability: Illusion
Team role: Scout
Move Set: Foul Play, Punisment, Dark Pulse, Imprision




Note: These can be used but I must be notified of their use remember Copyrighted.:scootangel:

Here is my team.
Team name: Arcticbird
Rank: Whatever you want it to be. After all, It's your story.

Members:
Species/Name: Riolu/Riolu
Gender: Male
Abilities: Steadfast, Inner Focus
Leader
Moves: Focus Punch, Force Palm, Shadow Claw, Rock Slide

Species/Name: Cubone/Cubone
Gender: Male
Abilities: Lightning Rod, Rock Head
Moves: Double-edge, Bone Club, Bonemerang, Hidden Power (Attack: 90, Type: Grass)

Species/Name: Absol/Dangerzone
Gender: Female
Abilities: Pressure, Super Luck
Moves: Quick Attack, Bite, Ariel Ace, Thunderbolt

Will you be including my team soon?:fluttercry:

2336123
I only just got this one chapter out, I might end up adding a team in each chapter if I must. I'll add your's next. :raritywink:

2336180 Could ya insert creds nxt time *points at the prereader*
Please:applecry:

Creepy appleface that agrees.

Great work on your part.:twilightsmile:

Special mark of Pinkimena: :pinkiecrazy::pinkiecrazy::pinkiecrazy:

2336233 No prob. Anyways I feel proud to say good work.:scootangel:

This is my team. Add it if you want.
Team name: The Flares
Rank: Rookies
Members: 3

Species: Cyndaquil
Gender:Male
Nickname:Sonic
Moves:Ember,Quick attack, Leer and Flamethrower

Species: Vulpix
Gender: Female
Nickname: Amber
Moves: Will-o-wisp, Flamethrower, Confuse ray and Quick attack

Species: Gible
Gender:Female
Nickname: Skitty
Moves: Fire Fang, Sand attack, Tackle and Dragon Claw

Put my team in a chapter, to assist your team on a mission against hard outlaw like a Salmence or something. Put my team in a chapter if you want. You don't have too.

Hi friendly friends~♪! I'm Pokémon, the Guildmaster!

Don't ya mean Wigglytuff?

You shouldn't need to be aquatinted with Pokémon Square, since I know you tw have lived here for so long,"

it's acquainted and two.

And also, did you get my PM containing my team info? Wait a sec... blast I forgot to add a third party member. Just go ahead and add a Gardevoir in there.

I've only really played Red Rescue Team seeing as my DS sort of turned to crud before I could play any of the other ones. (It broke) But, here's my team. It's good by my standards. (Did take a liberty with the third member though seeing as I really only used the first two.)

Name: Everhart / Gold Rank
Leader: Espeon/Ruby (Female)
Ability: Synchronize
Naive, caring, good with children.
Moves: Psybeam, Recover, Helping Hand, Body Slam

Partner: Raichu/Sparx (Male)
Ability: Static
Brave, easy to anger, determined to help everyone.
Moves: Thunder, Volt Tackle, Quick Attack, Glare

Egg: (It's been a few years and I'd imagined they'd have settled down the way Sparx hit on Ruby. So you're free to pick what it becomes.)

I have a question, would Teams from older games be considered old pros? As in they stick around the guild and teach newbies. Seeing as the team I'd submitted was from Red Rescue Team and contained a Espeon and Raichu (Oddly enough that was my team for the whole game.) And their egg (I didn't have a third member I liked so I had them set up to not really be explorers anymore and have settled down.)

2337184
Will fix, and then blame Word. I'll add your team, with Gardevoir, eventually. XP

u got my PM with my team,right?

2336180 did you see my Pokemon Team comment?:unsuresweetie: I want to see how my Team (Fightfire)trains your Team(Fireworks):pinkiehappy: if you want have them be friends with Team Aura Storm.

2340829 You spell my name wrong.:rainbowhuh: Alicon, NOT alicorn.:flutterrage: Remove the R please.


Flutterrage to empathsize how i feel. (no not really)

But hey everyone will get my name wrong at least once.:pinkiecrazy:


Now :rainbowkiss: kiss Dashie!:pinkiecrazy:

Maybe that's not the best idea Fennekin, we don't want something like that team from Pokémon Square years ago*. I know you don't want to be outlaws." Pikachu said to the fox Pokémon.

What did you mean by this statement. I played explores of sky and time and that did not happening in the game. I know its not like the game, but its not clear what you mean :rainbowhuh:

2351674
See the new edition I meant to add earlier.

2349062
Blame the iPod. :facehoof:

2348861
Eeyup :eeyup:

2360356 Okay. Also *points at prereader* he currently does not have an active pc to preread your stuff but can aquire one as soon as he can.:scootangel:

A just so you know of my predicament.:eeyup:

2360734
Okay, hopefully my use of iPod and MS Word should help my occasional mistakes. :derpytongue2:

2365750 I am currently using one so if ya need anything do it now.

2365822
Sorry, no. I don't have much written for the newest chapter yet. My top priority is My Little Warrior Cats at the moment.

2365846 Then congrats.:pinkiecrazy:



Look at your comment then mine.(look at the top part for this to make sense)
They rhyme.:pinkiecrazy:

I can't believe i missed an update...
Either way, i'm squeeling so much right now :3

2413193
Maybe later in the story, who knows? :discord:

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