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  • 40w, 2d
    I Cavd In

    So, I finally got a phone.


    Also, Gameloft pony game is best game ever. Add me? Name's RavenDagger sans the S

    10 comments · 281 views
  • 43w, 4d
    How to Make YOUR Blurb/Description Better

    So, I've been spending a fair bit of time here. It's a site for writers, similar to Fimfiction, but a tad more... general.

    While there, I found threads where people needed help with various things, from summaries to blurbs to whatever. And I love helping them. While showering today, the thought crossed me, why was I helping them instead of the people here? This is my home on the internet and these are my ponies. This is the place I should be helping.

    So, with a thin, thin layer of egotism wiped off, I decided to drag the thread here.

    Post your summary/description/blurb below and I'll tell you what I think.

    DO NOT post links, DO NOT post an entire chapter and DO NOT ask me to read your entire story. If I like what I see, I'll check it out on my own terms.

    I don't want anything in return. The responses will be quick, but if it gets busy, please give me a few hours to post back to you. I do have stories of our own, and, on occasion, enjoy a leisurely amount of sleep.

    Thank you and post away!

    37 comments · 263 views
  • 44w, 10h

    So, My friend Malus did a thing.

    You're not obliged to, but if you feel like it, take a gander. It's a letter, of sorts.


    0 comments · 136 views
  • 44w, 4d
    How You Go About It - The Editing Process

    I've been writing for a little over two years now, both as a terribly time-consuming hobby, and for work. When I started, I thought that rereading, editing and drafting were sins. They were wastes of my precious time. Now, after many a mistake, my views have changed.

    Editing is a big, if not the biggest, part of the writing process. It's the final step before publication and maybe the most important. It's also thanks to editing that I've found some of the greatest people and that I've learnt the most about writing.

    I was curious, fellow Fimfic-ers. (need a word for that) How do you go about polishing up your stories?

    22 comments · 201 views
  • 44w, 6d
    Hey Folks

    I have a story that I've written.

    Short, about 7K. And I've no idea how to end it.

    I was wondering if any of you felt suisidal enough to give it a read and your opinion on what sort of ending this fic would need? It's for a contest outseide the pony fandom, which means no pony. But plenty of Cyberpunk and the likes!


    It's going around, and someone's going to link you to it eventually. Might as well be me, eh?

    7 comments · 158 views
  • ...

Ravens. The most intelligent creature to take to the air. Creatures that strike fear and give rise to superstition in the hearts of the weary and weak.

One of these creatures, Lord Noble Eyes, is a bird in need. To accomplish his mission, and to save his murder, he must come into contact with six mares.

But how does communication work, when both sides are so different?

Everything is a matter of perception.

First Published
11th Dec 2012
Last Modified
11th Dec 2012
#1 · 101w, 6d ago · · ·

Favorite this, read later. I got a feeling this is good

#2 · 101w, 6d ago · · ·

As always, you have done an awesome job!

#3 · 101w, 6d ago · · ·

Ahaha, oh boy, here we go!

Comment posted by Morgie93 deleted at 12:03am on the 12th of December, 2012
#5 · 101w, 6d ago · 1 · ·

I read the premise, and I was all like: "Whaaaaa?"

And then I read the story and I was all like:

"He knew that Equestria was not for him."

You have made me realize that all of us, we are Ravens.

We are Ravens.


#6 · 101w, 6d ago · · ·

Pro Corvo. The object of the preposition 'pro' takes the ablative case. :twilightsmile:

#7 · 101w, 6d ago · · ·

Dear loyal customers, interested visitors, and confused passersby,

Jeez, what kind of personal talks or writes like that. Man, talk about needless.:raritywink:

Quite interesting, Dag! I really liked how Noble's worldview was so utterly different from the cast's. In a way, that is quite sad. This was right on par with your usual stuff, it was very unique. Good on ya'!:twilightsmile:


That very well may be the single most profound observation I've yet seen on this site.:pinkiegasp:

#8 · 101w, 6d ago · · ·

For a second there I was expecting another collaboration with Descy. Haven't read it yet but consider it bumped up to next on my reading list. Sounds most interesting.


HANG ON A SECOND! There's no "Of" in the title :pinkiegasp:

Everything I knew about the world has suddenly turned to lies. I'mma go sit in the corner and cry for awhile.


#9 · 101w, 5d ago · · ·

And here I was expecting a self-insert.

But then that pompus raven jumped into Ponyville with his half-baked plan, got the elements all wrong, ignored Pinkie Pie, lost his head in technicalities, jumped from one pony to another without resolving the present issues and was generally much to full of himself.


Maybe I just read a self-insert? :trollestia: :pinkiegasp:


You sir, are a scholar and a gentlem ... moon.

#10 · 101w, 5d ago · · ·

Yay! This is here! Let's see where this goes.

#11 · 101w, 5d ago · · ·

I'd just like to comment, crows =/= ravens, and its a murder of crows, and an unkindness of ravens. Good story though, a bit to pointless for my tastes, but a decent read.

#12 · 101w, 5d ago · · ·

He needs a dagger!!!!

#13 · 101w, 5d ago · · ·

>>1781162 I for one welcome our newly found sense of self. My mind opens and expands, I can see clearly now. The Rain is gone.

I would like to be a Raven.

I'm joining the Raven fandom because of this. Good show Mr. Dagger

#14 · 101w, 5d ago · · ·

>>1781197 hurray another Latinist

#15 · 101w, 5d ago · · ·


Caw Caw, my brother, caw caw.

#16 · 101w, 5d ago · · ·

Seems like a low like-dislike ration to be featured - one of my stories had about 40-something likes and 1 dislike in that same amount of time and it didn't get featured... but who am I to complain, it's a new feature system, it could be different now.

Besides, ravens are cool. :scootangel:

#17 · 101w, 5d ago · · ·

How disappointing. I fully expected Pinkie to be the one who'd make everything turn around and wind up okay after all. Everyone would realize the misunderstanding and laugh it off.

Nope. *sigh* :ajsleepy:

#18 · 101w, 5d ago · · ·

Well hat was... different. in a good way mind you. I can certainly see the potential for expansion, if you so choose. Yet, you kept the ending closed enough so as to make it satisfactory to those who wish for a brief bout of reading entertainment. Brilliant. Bravo, good sir. Bravo!

#19 · 101w, 5d ago · · ·

Geez talk about culture shock.

#20 · 101w, 5d ago · · ·

Nopony expect the raven inquisition.

Good story.

#21 · 101w, 5d ago · · ·

>>1783159 It all comes down to timing and to how fast you get them, here. He got all of those really quickly and so up it goes--

but partially it is also a slow day/few days for super popular stories. I got one up to because of it. You probably released something that was overshadowed by popular fics that all got released on top of it. That's happened to me before.

#22 · 101w, 5d ago · · ·

>>1783741 True, good point.:scootangel:

#23 · 101w, 5d ago · · ·

We should make a group for people with corvid-themed names. We could meet regularly and discuss corvid-related topics and write corvid-based fics such as this one.

But most importantly, we could brainstorm corvid-related puns.

#24 · 101w, 5d ago · 2 · ·

Hot damn. I love this like you wouldn't believe. +100000 for the Edgar Allen Poe reference at the end.

#25 · 101w, 5d ago · · ·

Alt. Title: Procreatinally Blind Crovotion: The First Ever Featured Crow Fic

#26 · 101w, 5d ago · · ·

I approve of this story.:ajsmug:

#27 · 101w, 5d ago · · ·

And then came the budgies.

Comment posted by Oni deleted at 2:45am on the 12th of December, 2012
#29 · 101w, 5d ago · · ·


of what to think....

#30 · 101w, 5d ago · · ·

so awesome!

and yes, Ravens are cool.

#31 · 101w, 5d ago · · ·

No has happy ending?


#32 · 101w, 5d ago · · ·

Liked the reffrence to Poe, kinda hard not to see one coming though. Still nice job!

#33 · 101w, 5d ago · · ·


Couldn't resist.

I drop lots of them across my work.

#34 · 101w, 5d ago · · ·

Upon actually reading this, I've discovered that I really like this story. I particularly enjoyed how you gave voice to the stereotypical behaviors of a Raven. If Ravens could talk as we do, they would probably talk like this.

Cool little fic. Liked/favorited.

#35 · 101w, 5d ago · · ·



They can!


#36 · 101w, 5d ago · · ·

I'm reading this simply because it's a Raven...and who doesn't love Raven's....but I can't read it NOW ;_; So it's in my "to read list" ^_^

#37 · 101w, 5d ago · · ·


That's why I said "as we do". I assumed that, having an interest in Ravens, you might have also read that our avian friends are somehow able to communicate with each other, and seem to have regional dialects.

Ravens are cool.

#38 · 101w, 5d ago · · ·



Smarter than dogs and the likes.

I want one.

Silly laws. I can have a hundred types of birds, but not a raven...

I'll paint it yellow and call it a parakeet!

Also, teach it to say 'nevermore, and to perch on a bust of Pallas.

#39 · 101w, 5d ago · · ·

Whenever I see Ravens or other Corvids, I try to lure them towards me by tossing them food. Unfortunately, they're not nearly as easily convinced as ducks and geese. I haven't yet managed to convince one to approach me.

There's a video floating around on youtube of somebody's pet Raven; they actually taught it to say "nevermore". Let me see if I can find it...

#41 · 101w, 5d ago · · ·

To accomplish his mission, and to save his murder

Just out of curiosity... Did you mean mother?

#42 · 101w, 5d ago · · ·


:trollestia: I see what you did there!

#44 · 101w, 5d ago · · ·

>>1787324 Oh well, this teaches me to not read before commenting again:facehoof:

#45 · 101w, 5d ago · · ·


He did not. Murder is the collective known for a group of crows, which he chose in favour of an unkindness, the correct term for a collective of ravens. He mentions this in the author's notes. Personally I prefer the slightly more archaic form 'a conspiracy of ravens'.

#46 · 101w, 5d ago · · ·

There should be a sequel for this

#47 · 101w, 5d ago · · ·

>>1787331It's alright! Happens to the best of us.

#48 · 101w, 5d ago · 1 · ·


To be fair, there wasn't so much a misunderstanding as there was a negative reaction to his rampant douchebaggery. It's one thing to hope for charity, it's another to waltz into a store and request everything inside because you heard the owner was generous.

#49 · 101w, 4d ago · · ·

In the defense of the ponies...that raven was rather narrow-minded and self-centered about it all and that was what really fouled things up. He refused to look at things from the point of view of the ponies, and further still, interpreted the elements they represented either too literally, with underestimation, or again failing to look at it from any viewpoint but his own.

In actuality, they all pretty much stayed true to their elements. Fluttershy WAS being kind, kind to ALL, which is why the raven's "vermin" talk offended her so. Applejack WAS being truly honest, and knew that the thievery of the ravens was dishonest and thus didn't tolerate it. Rarity, if viewed from strict LITERAL terms, wasn't being generous, but when you looked at the bigger picture, it's justified, and Rarity rightly noted that it wasn't TRULY generous to just donate freely such things to people who clearly didn't need it (furthermore, the raven was being a bit contradictory with himself, because earlier he was insulted at the idea of accepting acts of charity, and then turns around and expected it from somepony else). Twilight showed interest in the raven's magic, until she realized it was used for harmful purposes, and her reaction and opinions on that had nothing to do with her element per say. And Rainbow wasn't really given a fair chance to demonstrate loyalty, as why would she show demonstrate loyalty to someone she didn't know and as far as she knew, had no need for it (because Rainbow never gave the raven a full chance to explain himself)? Besides, being loyal doesn't necessarily make you a good diplomat, which we all know Rainbow is not. In fact, it's probably because of her loyalty that she's not the greatest of diplomats. And I can't blame the raven for trying to avoid Pinkie, for anyone meeting Pinkie for the first time is gonna be seriously intimidated by her, Pinkie's actions around the raven were enough for the raven to reasonably question their intentions, and the raven's logic is sound enough to see that Pinkie couldn't really provide the assistance he needed (although it is possible that had the raven given Pinkie the chance, she could have gotten him to see things a little differently and maybe work something out with the other ponies, but honestly I'm not surprised he didn't).

He probably would have been better off going to the princesses, as they would probably be more patient and political about it, but even then I have my doubts something could've been worked out, especially if the raven continued to be as closed-minded as he was.

So in a way, he really brought his failure down upon himself.

Nice story, BTW. :twilightsmile:


Apparently Twilight talks like that.

#50 · 101w, 4d ago · · ·


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