Rainbow Dash is prepared. Her craft is as ready as it will ever be. The Ponyline course is set, the competition is there. Her hopes are high, but... is victory that simple?
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First one to read it! *squee*
As you mentioned, not a true plot, but my heart's still beating rather rapidly. That was exciting.
What was it a crossover with? The Pod Race scene from Episode I?
Edit:
I need to learn to look at the links, don't I? I'm just going to go to bed then, I think I'm slipping even worse than normal...
Its not that bad...IT GREAT!
Redline crossover
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Ah, that feeling of being able to read something before it's posted... It was a fun read too.
Well, a bid of farewell, from your "testing editor." Alas, my final post.
I say this music makes it even better: http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=6Gp3QuhIY54&hd=1
I still like the classic Ride of the Valkyries.
May I ask......... how did they land?
Where did Trixie get her hands on a P-51 Mustang (it could go in a dive about as fast as the ME-262)
Next race, I want to be in it!
My ME-262 shall shame them all! MUHAHAHAHAHAHA
Hm. Interesting. I shall give you a brohoof!
The music goes so well with it as well
And I'm spent.
Very exciting, very riveting. Once the parts after the hanger were done, it was non-stop adrenaline till the end. There's not much of Tank left, but hey, they won! I think the next scene should be, how they land without any gear!
Oh, and "Do a barrel roll!"
Edit: You know what? The heck with it. You know what I was going to post anyway.
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You forgot the = sign there...
Red Devil - Yngwie Malmsteen's Rising Force
So. Fully. Awesome!
AWWEEESSOOOMEME!
Man, you are great at action stuff. The music helped tons too. The first half I thought the music was weak, but then I turned up the volume, and now...THAT WAS SO INTENSE!
I'm way to pumped for my own good. Bleh.
I thoroughly enjoyed this. It really did get a bit tense in there and overall, it was rather enjoyable. I'm glad that I finally got to reading it!
I also noticed somewhere where you had "untiluntil" instead of just one.
I helped edit this... I feel betrayed.
Fluttershy, behind her, coward behind...
It should be 'cowered'
Other than that and a few typos, lovely little high octane adrenaline rush^-^
Oh man that was so cool!
I almost wish that this was a series. Plus we have mechanics!Twilight and Applejack and Pilots!RD and Fluttershy, which is just perfect.
Well done!