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Snowflake is many things: an athlete, a hard worker, a friend. He isn't, however, a father. Not a good one, anyway.


A commision for sir Malus Scriptor

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Wow! Very, very well done! You, sir and/or madam, get all my thumbs up. :pinkiehappy:

Also, FIRST!! XD

Excellently done, and it explains both Snowflake's presence in Flight to the Finish and his fear of butterflies. Or, more accurately, the mare they represent.

Though you'd think he'd be able to teach his daughter how to fly with tiny wings...

Fit's my head canon that Snowflake is her dad.

Question: Why do you keep calling him Snowflakes?
Shouldn't it be Snowflake?

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Because I'm silly.

I'll fix it if you give me a moment; thanks for pointing it out!

HUGS GOD DAMNIT ALL THE FUCKING HUGS IN THE WORLD!

THAT IS WHAT YOU GET FOR WRITING THIS AWESOMENESS!


YEAH!

Ahahaha, yes! You went through with it! :rainbowlaugh:

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it's because he's hoping he'll get snow IRL
I know that feel :trixieshiftleft:

Oh dear.
You punched me in the feels so hard I'm coughing up blood.
I should probably go to the hospital for that, but I wanted to tell you that you did an excellent job before I do that.

That was dark, even if it ended on an upbeat note, but some of that darkness is glossed over. I think it might have even more punch if you focus a little more on the harshness and bitter logic that's taking Snowflake down that path. That said, it was still a brilliantly gut wrenching premise, and well executed to boot.

Hi there! You know, Fimfiction now have Bulk Biceps (ex-Snowflake) character tag! You can add it to your story!

Hey, I wrote a review of this story. If you are interested, it can be found here.

Overall, I thought that it was a little bit too superficial. Also, I simply can't believe that Fluttershy would just let them go like that.

I’ve decided to do this.

Missing s.

"But, but mister Snowflakes, why?”

M not m.

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