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Soarin' is just your average pegasus. He lives in Cloudsdale with his grandpa and his best friend Spitfire, aspires to be a member of the esteemed flight group the Wonderbolts, and he loves pie. But all that is about to change, as a mysterious voice calls out to him to warn him of his "destiny." Whatever could that mean? Like it or not, he and his friends are going to find out.

Chapters (4)
Comments ( 19 )

Good story so far. I can't wait for more.

good story, though, it feels kinda slow:applejackunsure:

The trio of pegasi flew smoothly and calmly through the clouds.

Bleh. That is so dry I had to drain the Pacific Ocean just to re-moisten my eyes. Get some emotion in that cracka.

I like where this is going.

Excellent chapter! Looking forward to more!

Nice! Sucks to end up waking up as early as 4:13 or 6:12 well i hope summer break gives this website more updates and the ability to sleep till about 10:25 or 11:11. Untill then i shall ponder Soarin's situation, and numbers:ajsmug:

I like this! *likes story* lets see what destiny Soarin has ahead of him. Alsi did Soarin see his parents die are did they disapear not to be found???

Windbreaker?

That's... hilarious.

638326 Better that than Breaking Wind. :rainbowlaugh:

WIND SHALL BE BROKEN :pinkiecrazy: Cant wait for the next chapter!

:yay:: A SONIC RAINBOOM! SHE DID IT! WHOOOOOOO!

KA-BOOOOOOOOOOOOOM! *does best to interpert sonic rainboom sound on cell phone* :yay:

Stories that are built around one's past is not my favourite although I'm enjoying this quite alot.

Good show! :yay:

Okay, okay, okay so let me get this straight...

"He sighed, his mind trying to come up with some way to do damage control. "First off, you sound like my teachers. Second, isn't having my head in the clouds a good thing? You know, since we're in the clouds?""

So they are IN Cloudsdale? How can clouds have solid rock caves?

Meh, screw it. For me there is only one logic: Potato = The Big-Bang :pinkiehappy:

I sincerely hope you intend on continuing this story. There are to few stories with Soarin' and Spitfire in my opinion. Plus I really like the setup and plot thus far, the mystery is also well done so far. Also, do I detect a hint of Soarin'/Spitfire? Hope so, I'm kind of a sucker to that ship. Looking forward to more, the anticipation is killing me!

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