I'm just... insane. 
Not the bad kind, just, I play the game by my own rules.Huzzah for fun! (I'm trying to bring "Huzzah" back)
Luna was always the Mistress of the Night, but she never took on a job this large before. In a minor scuffle with Celestia, she boldly proclaimed that she could help everypony more than her sister. Now she's off trying to solve people's dream-world problems, but the only question is: how can she help herself?
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It was only a matter of time...
1768248 ahh you again :O
This would make a great premise for an episode!!
Hats off to you. It's only been one day!
Oh, and um, that part in chapter 2 involving sweet Fluttershy.....
I would have never thought...
hmmm, can be longer, but otherwise I love it, it has that epic feeling about it that makes it awesome, but make them longer, describe the sauna, describe the woods, and in your previous chapter describe the castle the room or wherever they are because I didn't know the places they are in, And extend your scenes, seriously this looks good but a normal chapter is 2000 words give or take a few hundred, good luck
1768248 agreed
1768929 Thanks! She's OOC on purpose, though. My goal is to have it sort of like in Sleepless in Ponyville, where the problem just seems so... unusual for that particular character, yet you can still see them doing it.
1769073 Noted. Thanks.
1769073 Okay, I believe your criticism has been taken into consideration and thoroughly resolved (in the prologue). Am I correct in thinking this?
1768248 And of course it takes this long to get a real story out of it... I had such a quick start, too...
1768929 Soon. Soon you will get the expanded second chapter you were looking for. I just need to get a bit more time with my editor first.