I'm just... insane. 
Not the bad kind, just, I play the game by my own rules.Huzzah for fun! (I'm trying to bring "Huzzah" back)
This story is a sequel to Lost Kindness
After Fluttershy ran away, things start going wrong. Will she ever come back? Will Twilight regain her magic? And what is the story behind Empty Sound?
Direct Sequel to Lost Kindness and second book in The Saga of The Beast.
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Off to a great start so far. I'm so glad this is continuing.
1545576 Thanks, for the feedback, and the fave. Does it say that it's been submitted yet?
1545734 Not that I can tell.
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Still good.
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Well done; I should have said that earlier.
This is getting so good.
Very intriguing.
1606647 How could you have possibly read it already???
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Erm, it did only have barely over a thousand words...
1606657 Must have been more time than I thought...... Did I do good, mastah?
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Yes, you did well.
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Good luck on.
D'oh I'm So late, but on the bright side, 2 chaps in a row!
1607140 You're wrong on all accounts. The tradgedy tag is because I'm writing it.
Never tell Twilight she can't practice magic.
1721793 I'm unbelievably tempted to describe the entirety of my magical theory to you. Do you think that I should make a journal entry about it, then link it to the end of the new chapter?
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I'd read it.
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Now about this............Yes. This will work. IT. WILL. WORK! Honestly, I like how this is going, can't wait to see more and wouldn't mind to see your theory.
Okay, so it seems to me like you've gotten the characters right, given the emotional responses from all of them, but it feels as though this chapter had lacked in duration. But please do disregard that in the case that you've purposely made this a rather shortened chapter.
2075847 Thanks for the feedback! I'm glad I got through that well enough. I did make it short on purpose, but that's because I wanna give Dash a chance to cool off first.
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Ahh, wonder how they'll be able to calm her down, given that their blood don't boil when she tell them the story of what had happened. For she quite clearly knows about Empty Sound, being Flutters best friend and all....
2075910 As I said, the plot thickens. I did originally intend to have the Royal Pony Sisters get one more chapter in before this, but I couldn't find a way to make it work. My real concern is with Cleon. I just can't get a feel for his motivations as well as I used to. Maybe if I went and found his mentor's name again, it might help. I have it written down somewhere...
EDIT: found it, and made a one-sentance edit to the chapter to include it.
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Well, with going from what you said, the only problem, if any, was his anger. I mean, yea things didn't go as planned for him, but it's like he snapped, not a lot mind you, but in a way that was not hinted at. That was what I gathered from it anyway.
2075943 Well, if you look at it from his point of view, his idol, teacher, master, father-figure, and leader dedicated his entire life to finding out how to fix this inherent problem, and died just before the biggest breakthrough was made in it. He's desperate to finish Archelaus's work, but he can't do it without assistance. In this case, from someone who is inherently knowledgeable about Elemental magic.
Because this is pre-Discord-being-"cured"-canon, his fear is that the increased Chaotic magic will cause Discord to overpower the Elements. Quite a reasonable fear if you ask me. That's not all, though. He's also given the unnprecedented oppurtunity to observe and interact with a rare, dangerous type of magic, and possibly utilize it for the greater good of Equestria. Because of that, I think he's more than willing to take some risks, even if it means violating traditions and doing a small amount of wrong onto others.
Does that not sound fair?
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*Looks Sheepish* Well, when you put that way........
lol, I see what you mean. Yea, now I'm happy I added that "If any" in my previous comment, but I didn't put what he had said into context with my thoughts at the time(Which is a huge mistake on my part), I'd have to get my feels back in touch. thanks for the info.
2076048 Actually, this one's on me. I'm thinking about going back to redo this chapter (or making the next chapter along these lines) so that it has a flashback or two for him. Of course, I don't know if I should do that or a quick one-shot. Either way, it will be called The Death of a Master.
What do you think I should do? Next chapter, this chapter, or one-shot?
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I think you can go on ahead with the next chapter. you've got the mood set right with this and all, but if you feel as though you have more to add on to this chapter, then feel all obliged to do so. It may be best to wait, how long have you had this up, I'm expecting more feedback from others.
Wow. Great chapter.
2136996 You have no idea how much of a relief it is to hear that. I took out one line in this whole thing, other than that, it's unedited.
Terrible part is, that line was a dealbreaker for the whole chapter.
So what do YOU think is gonna happen next? In any/all of the plotlines. I think I have a good idea, but I'd love to hear where it looks like its going.
2137535 Hmmmm, I have the feeling we will see a confrontation between Fluttershy and her mom. First her friends have to find her first. Assuming she wants to be found.
2140913 Yes, but that much is obvious. I was rather hoping for specifics.
Anyhow, I did figure out a name for where Fluttershy goes next. Tell me if you like it: The Tearstone Caves. It's supposed to be relatively like the Crystal Catacombs (without the crystals). That would be why Twilight Sparkle is dreaming of the Catacombs while Fluttershy is sleeping, and that's why there's so much dripping water.
2141095 Heh sorry I was a bit tired last night. I like that name. As for where I think this is going to go. I'd like Fluttershy to stay distant from here friends for a while. Travel about. Maybe have her friends catch up for her, only to tell them she can't come back and disapear again.
So I'm here, though I'm not so sure how long it'll last, but I think I'll have a lot more time to be online. And great job, you pieced everything together perfectly for this scene, I would like to know if there's any info that you can tell me about when you may be back to the story. I believe that Twilight will have a lot more to cope with in the future, cause this news might be quite the blow if he tell her what I think he will, and I'm quite worried for Empty Sound for when she'll evidently want to make it up to Shy with Rainbow like this and all.
2298412 I'll probably had an update by next Wednesday, but robotics is taking up a LOT of time right now. Sorry. Once my busy-a** week is over, I'll get to it.
2301246 Okay :), and you have no need to apologize. C ya!