1921689 Mostly beacuse celestia didn't just incinerate him for hitting her. And that he could accept herd pretty fast, even if he thinks them as his children.
1921738 Remind you that only Michelle and Chrysalis are here and what happened was I had a foreshadowing with the mention of pheromones in the earlier chapters. (in fact it was a while back) If a male that the queen wants or wants for her drones does not comply then they will release pheromones to make them more loving and complacent. Celestia had to do this so that she could make Chrysalis understand what true love is and if she incinerated him what would that do? It would make everything worse so I found her plan pretty decent. I had this idea from the beginning so it was leading up to this, although I never expected to have Michelle, the drones, her family, the agency, or him getting shot in here. This was originally supposed to be a ten chapter story but I upped it up to twenty or so. So you should be happy about that.
1921806 I'll keep it simple and stay with Equestria, now comes the fun political situations and doing favors to for Celestia *cough* Maybe more fun involving trying to fit in with the ponies. You know racism , xenophobia , and all that smexy stuff
1921831 Mmm... smexy. Confound all of you authors and your ways of making fics that keep me reading them. I should've been asleep hour ago, but what can you do when there is so many good fan fics.
1925735 I wanted her to act out of character, what people need to remember is this is an alternate universe which means this is not the same Celestia we know, she will act differently and do different things.
1921886 Well, aside from an ever-present occasional lack of punctuation, I'd say you've done good so far. And I loved seeing him punch Celestia. Fuck yes.
1942557 This is pretty much how I would react, I am not really fazed by anything. You could point a gun at my head and I would just ask if you are going to shoot. I am also trying my best to slow down and improve on how i describe everything so it doesn't feel so rushed.
Oh, that was... hmm... Can't find right emotion to describe this. i guess i'm happy and bit confused.
1921458 why are you confused?
1921689
Mostly beacuse celestia didn't just incinerate him for hitting her.
And that he could accept herd pretty fast, even if he thinks them as his children.
1921738 Remind you that only Michelle and Chrysalis are here and what happened was I had a foreshadowing with the mention of pheromones in the earlier chapters. (in fact it was a while back) If a male that the queen wants or wants for her drones does not comply then they will release pheromones to make them more loving and complacent. Celestia had to do this so that she could make Chrysalis understand what true love is and if she incinerated him what would that do? It would make everything worse so I found her plan pretty decent. I had this idea from the beginning so it was leading up to this, although I never expected to have Michelle, the drones, her family, the agency, or him getting shot in here. This was originally supposed to be a ten chapter story but I upped it up to twenty or so. So you should be happy about that.
1921738 hope that clears everything up
1921798
yeah it clears things pretty good.
Are they going back to earth or continue living in equus or whaterver that planet is called.
1921806 I'll keep it simple and stay with Equestria, now comes the fun political situations and doing favors
tofor Celestia *cough* Maybe more fun involving trying to fit in with the ponies. You know racism , xenophobia , and all that smexy stuff1921831
Mmm... smexy.
Confound all of you authors and your ways of making fics that keep me reading them.
I should've been asleep hour ago, but what can you do when there is so many good fan fics.
1921867 Why does everyone say I'm a good author. I don't write well I just do it for the fun of it and don't edit
so the hive drones are alive where are the earth drones are they back on earth
1922270 yes they are.
the chapter was interessing, but i found celestia out of her character
1925735 I wanted her to act out of character, what people need to remember is this is an alternate universe which means this is not the same Celestia we know, she will act differently and do different things.
I... What? This fic has fucked my mind with how random it is all the time
1921886
Well, aside from an
ever-presentoccasional lack of punctuation, I'd say you've done good so far. And I loved seeing him punch Celestia. Fuck yes.1942557 This is pretty much how I would react, I am not really fazed by anything. You could point a gun at my head and I would just ask if you are going to shoot. I am also trying my best to slow down and improve on how i describe everything so it doesn't feel so rushed.