“Yes about that, you aren’t the first alien life form to settle here on earth and I doubt you will be our last. We just do a background check on them to make sure they aren’t a danger and since you’re not then I won’t bother you or do anymore checkups.” I smiled and both the nurse and the other girl left the apartment.
1845344 again I must say this is just the beginning and to me this chapter isn't all that special in fact I find it in a worst state then my previous ones since I had to rush to finish it. But I did read it before hand so that I could fix most of the errors so you could say I paid extra attention this time
1826155 Well it was a hard decision. Think about it your people or another nation, I ultimately choose that rather than genocide she would eliminate the sudden threat of the army. It effectively broke the spirit of Chrysalis at the time and got rid of her so she couldn't rise and fight again.
1846711 Your welcome I find that if I did that it would bring people to want to in fact hate on the chapter. Oh and I was thinking of making a cliffhanger just to create drama But again that would be senselessly cruel.
1858132 from what i can tell your stories are in fact doing better than mine, hope you get lucky man and get featured. i know for a fact that my stuff is not the greatest and is below mediocre story and writing wise.
1858160 You kidding? I ate this story up like I was starving. Kinda...... Kinda waiting on the umm.... ahem..... A certain scene. I'm just hoping it will be true love and passion when it happens; I can't stand eroticism.
hello i was wondering if i can add your story to my group "villains of Equestria" you see i am the only member so if i add a story the group might get some notice so i would love to have this story in the group . o and feel free to join if you want to
1862097 Sure I'm always okay with anything that this story goes through and if you want your own chapter participate in my disccussion blog post and see how many likes you can get
1862684 I should be thanking you for being so kind to ask permission to do it first although it wouldn't matter to me what happened. I should also thank you for having an interest in my fanfic as I don't see anything I do as good. It's again mediocre at best. So hope to see you later somewhere in this fandom and peace!
Comment posted by Ultra Sonic deleted Dec 29th, 2012
“Yes about that, you aren’t the first alien life form to settle here on earth and I doubt you will be our last...
"I mean yeah, there's this obnoxious fuzzy brown alien that eats cats that lives in the suburbs, there's the one that looks a lot like Robbin Williams and there's even this semi-retarded one with spiky hair that wears an orange gi, who thinks he knows karate. Shit be crazy."
1873073 Everybody makes the reference but honestly I wasn't thinking about the movie until I read what I wrote after it was published. But I assure you that they are not the MiB but just a federal government agency that handles situations such as these where the alien is either never harmed another being on the planet or has been proven safe by personal transport.
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Excellent chapter comrade enjoy you're vodka
like it so much
1845344 again I must say this is just the beginning and to me this chapter isn't all that special in fact I find it in a worst state then my previous ones since I had to rush to finish it. But I did read it before hand so that I could fix most of the errors so you could say I paid extra attention this time
1845450 I thank you for your support and I hope you enjoy the later chapter as it's going to get a lot more interest from here on out.
1845291 Ya I was actually kind of thinking about that after I wrote this but I though that no one would notice. You caught me on that one mate.
1826155 Well it was a hard decision. Think about it your people or another nation, I ultimately choose that rather than genocide she would eliminate the sudden threat of the army. It effectively broke the spirit of Chrysalis at the time and got rid of her so she couldn't rise and fight again.
I appreciate you not leaving us on a cliffhanger right before your vacation like a lot of douche bag authors do.
1846711 Your welcome I find that if I did that it would bring people to want to in fact hate on the chapter. Oh and I was thinking of making a cliffhanger just to create drama But again that would be senselessly cruel.
I hope at some point they play Lollipop Chainsaw and Chrissy recognizes the voice.
Wait... If she's not the first to arrive.... I wonder who else showed up to the party....
1854770 oh you will be in for a big surprise on chapter 9 and 10
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I like it. And why did you follow me? What did I do that you found remarkable?
1858118 i just follow my favers it's my way of saying thanks for finding an interest in my story.
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Oh, okay.
1858132 from what i can tell your stories are in fact doing better than mine, hope you get lucky man and get featured. i know for a fact that my stuff is not the greatest and is below mediocre story and writing wise.
1858160
You kidding? I ate this story up like I was starving. Kinda...... Kinda waiting on the umm.... ahem..... A certain scene. I'm just hoping it will be true love and passion when it happens; I can't stand eroticism.
1858185 i'm not kidding and i will not tell you the true love chrysalis has for tyler until i'm ready
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....Fine.
1858185 oh and ya that scene your waiting for aint coming that soon
hello i was wondering if i can add your story to my group "villains of Equestria" you see i am the only member so if i add a story the group might get some notice so i would love to have this story in the group . o and feel free to join if you want to
1862097 Sure I'm always okay with anything that this story goes through and if you want your own chapter participate in my disccussion blog post and see how many likes you can get
1862668 thank you for your time
1862684 I should be thanking you for being so kind to ask permission to do it first although it wouldn't matter to me what happened. I should also thank you for having an interest in my fanfic as I don't see anything I do as good. It's again mediocre at best. So hope to see you later somewhere in this fandom and peace!
I wasn't expecting MiB to show up.
"I mean yeah, there's this obnoxious fuzzy brown alien that eats cats that lives in the suburbs, there's the one that looks a lot like Robbin Williams and there's even this semi-retarded one with spiky hair that wears an orange gi, who thinks he knows karate. Shit be crazy."
1873073 Everybody makes the reference but honestly I wasn't thinking about the movie until I read what I wrote after it was published. But I assure you that they are not the MiB but just a federal government agency that handles situations such as these where the alien is either never harmed another being on the planet or has been proven safe by personal transport.
did the MIB just show up