1822536 wow I never thought that when I released it I thought I could have worked on it a bit more to make it a little longer but I found this easy to write once I got in the groove of things.
1822312 Okay you're going to have to explain your comment because I don't really understand it Something about a nurse and what possible visitation. And I don't even want to get started on the 3-way part, so please good sir explain
A little net picky I have heard of stomach injuries, especially those involve gun shot, and usually end in the organ explode and the victim, having to be very careful with what they eat. Did that happen to Tyler or Chrysalis just use her magic, to heal him faster? Also, the part of the sex, is a for shadowing for what will happen in the next chapter, I think they already know each other very well at this point.
1823252 Chrysalis saved his ass let's just leave it at that. And the foreshadowing is for chapter 7 not the next chapter as Tyler still needs to recover.
Ok, no more drinking cheap scotch while reading FIMFIC.
Now sober me, after reading my own post, I think I was trying to say that the nurse, the one that came out to tell Chrissy that he made it through surgery, asked her in her "pony" form to fill out info on her species not being of this planet. On condition that she (the nurse) is not to disclose any information about them, and that the nurse is the only one allowed contact. (wink,wink, nudge nudge)
1826406 Okay I get but no I don't plan on him having eyes on another girl in that kind of way. Maybe as a friend but no not anything sexual. It's just really hard to have three people in the bed without it getting awkward. And as for your dirty mind, well let's just say the story went through three stages and the first two had clop in the second chapter so my mind is very dirty as well
A new chapter hope you all like it
im always happy to read new chapters of this.
An interesting spin on a villian on Earth. So far it's a good read.
Gonna be a interesting angle with the nurse(iirc) with all of Chrissys info and possible visitation (3-way?)
Hmm, proceed my good pony. Proceed.
cool a new chapter, thank you bro /)
by thw way i have nothing to say about this one, it wa perfect
1822536 wow I never thought that when I released it I thought I could have worked on it a bit more to make it a little longer but I found this easy to write once I got in the groove of things.
1822142 Good to hear always great to write them as well.
1822312 Okay you're going to have to explain your comment because I don't really understand it Something about a nurse and what possible visitation. And I don't even want to get started on the 3-way part, so please good sir explain
1822583 you did not understad
but its easy to understand
1822673 okay I get it now after my brain pooped and restarted
1822688 finally
A little net picky I have heard of stomach injuries, especially those involve gun shot, and usually end in the organ explode and the victim, having to be very careful with what they eat. Did that happen to Tyler or Chrysalis just use her magic, to heal him faster? Also, the part of the sex, is a for shadowing for what will happen in the next chapter, I think they already know each other very well at this point.
1823252 Chrysalis saved his ass let's just leave it at that. And the foreshadowing is for chapter 7 not the next chapter as Tyler still needs to recover.
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Alien sight, ring all alarm bells!!!
Something is about to happen...
1822583
Ok, no more drinking cheap scotch while reading FIMFIC.
Now sober me, after reading my own post, I think I was trying to say that the nurse, the one that came out to tell Chrissy that he made it through surgery, asked her in her "pony" form to fill out info on her species not being of this planet.
On condition that she (the nurse) is not to disclose any information about them, and that the nurse is the only one allowed contact. (wink,wink, nudge nudge)
Drunk me has a very dirty mind. My apologies.
1826406 Okay I get but no I don't plan on him having eyes on another girl in that kind of way. Maybe as a friend but no not anything sexual. It's just really hard to have three people in the bed without it getting awkward. And as for your dirty mind, well let's just say the story went through three stages and the first two had clop in the second chapter so my mind is very dirty as well
Dead Island.... I beat that game so fast even I was dizzy after. Once I get Dark Souls..... The real fun begins....