Well these two chapter were certainly interesting. yeah, that just about sums it up. So i take it Chrysalis' comment about him being able to have more lovers means that those ten changlings will be a part of his future heram, and that there might be more royal changlings? I am glad he is human again, though i could do with him not having a horse penus. That is just wierd. Though if it doesn't constantly get brought up i could just pretend that he doesn't have one, and instead has a normal one. Still wish that that would change though. Anyway, good luck with all of your endeavors. And again, i am sorry if i caused you to doubt yourself.
1896829 Yes her comment is a hint at what COULD happen to their relationship and to clear things up for the worker changelings. They are the main group of a working hive but aren't royalty, therefore they can't choose mates but have to allow their queen to choose their mates. So since Gildus chose Tyler they are attached through the changeling culture. I chose for him to have a horse penis because I wanted to leave a scar on the character so he can't forget these set of events. Not that I'm saying it's a bad scar or not. I probably won't bring up the horse cock up that much (unless he visits a hospital ) Also I thought it would be a nice nod to My Second Life, where Coal gets himself more, umm....... equipped for his lover's sake.
1897845 Well, you could have just left him with an inlarged human penus. Plus if it is a bad thing or not is a matter of opinion. I know I wouldn't want one. I figured that, about the worker changlings. I am just wondering if there will be more royal ones coming up. You know assuming Equestria decided to hunt down every other hive in that world.
1897860 I thought the nod that he was going to have to live with others was a nod to this but to hell with it. Right now if I reveal anymore information it might spoil things for you sadly The next chapter is either going to surprise you in a good way or a bad way.
1897868 Okay then. That is okay. I wouldn't expect you to give spiolers anyway. There is only two things that ould surprise me in a bad way. One is permenant ponification/humanization, and the other is the death of a major character. I rreally doubt it is going to be any of those.
This was awesome! I do agree with some of the other posts saying it was a bit fast paced but honestly...i stopped caring cause the rest of it was and still is epic! This was a unique way to show chrysalis and i loved every word of it! I was skeptical at first because i don't normally read anything that is labeled as sad or tragic but i am glad i gave this a chance! Keep up the good work and I eagerly wait for more!
So…all of those changelings that sleep beside him are regular, and apparently females changelings drones? Drones that use to belong to Chrysalis mother? And I didn't get the the changelings sauses over Chrysalis and dog pile, what are does? Changelings in cocoon mode? baby changelings? Did Chrysalis just get birth already? I'm confuse
Also, if he mating with her, give him the right with other changelings princess as he want, why is Chrysalis mom, so desperately to mate with him?
P.S: Are we are going to see Chrysalis sisters in the future? Or more sisters for her family?
1901406 I'm sorry but that was all of them and I don't know what you mean by changeling sauces if you could give me a hint of where you see that then I will be okay. Gildus was desperate because she had no one left to love her and mate. If she can't create more drones how can she make sure she is always on top? Also you notice from this and the last chapter, she absolutely despised chrysalis and wanted her crushed and broken underneath her hoof.
1901965 The sauces thing is the scene when he enter the house, see plates disperse in all the house then see something in the middle and ask if Chrysalis is in that "Changeling sauce" Or whatever, that was, (sorry if I didn't writer right) She pock her head out, said she is tired, and ask him not to do much noise, and go to sleep, is almost at the end.
So I take those are changelings drones that now live with them and do their betting, correct?
1901982 "I walked up to my apartment and into the bedroom to find dishes all over the place and a pile of saucy changelings." I meant that they had bbq sauce on their faces and looked messy not that they were covered in some weird changeling fluids Ya but i am writing chapter 10 and honestly I totally forgot about the drones until you reminded me so I will write them in the next chapter.
So... his new job is to love Chrisalis and, er, "repopulate" a species. His shelter and needs taken care of.
Hell, what's not to like about that???
On an aside, punching his boss in the face. While that might have been cathartic, it's also assault and battery. I'm not quite sure he's got diplomatic immunity quite yet...
Well these two chapter were certainly interesting. yeah, that just about sums it up.
So i take it Chrysalis' comment about him being able to have more lovers means that those ten changlings will be a part of his future heram, and that there might be more royal changlings?
I am glad he is human again, though i could do with him not having a horse penus. That is just wierd. Though if it doesn't constantly get brought up i could just pretend that he doesn't have one, and instead has a normal one.
Still wish that that would change though.
Anyway, good luck with all of your endeavors. And again, i am sorry if i caused you to doubt yourself.
i love this story
1896829 Yes her comment is a hint at what COULD happen to their relationship and to clear things up for the worker changelings. They are the main group of a working hive but aren't royalty, therefore they can't choose mates but have to allow their queen to choose their mates. So since Gildus chose Tyler they are attached through the changeling culture. I chose for him to have a horse penis because I wanted to leave a scar on the character so he can't forget these set of events. Not that I'm saying it's a bad scar or not. I probably won't bring up the horse cock up that much (unless he visits a hospital ) Also I thought it would be a nice nod to My Second Life, where Coal gets himself more, umm....... equipped for his lover's sake.
1897845
Well, you could have just left him with an inlarged human penus. Plus if it is a bad thing or not is a matter of opinion. I know I wouldn't want one.
I figured that, about the worker changlings. I am just wondering if there will be more royal ones coming up. You know assuming Equestria decided to hunt down every other hive in that world.
1897860 I thought the nod that he was going to have to live with others was a nod to this but to hell with it. Right now if I reveal anymore information it might spoil things for you sadly The next chapter is either going to surprise you in a good way or a bad way.
1897868
Okay then.
That is okay. I wouldn't expect you to give spiolers anyway.
There is only two things that ould surprise me in a bad way. One is permenant ponification/humanization, and the other is the death of a major character. I rreally doubt it is going to be any of those.
Anyway, good luck with all of your endeavors.
This was awesome! I do agree with some of the other posts saying it was a bit fast paced but honestly...i stopped caring cause the rest of it was and still is epic! This was a unique way to show chrysalis and i loved every word of it! I was skeptical at first because i don't normally read anything that is labeled as sad or tragic but i am glad i gave this a chance! Keep up the good work and I eagerly wait for more!
So…all of those changelings that sleep beside him are regular, and apparently females changelings drones? Drones that use to belong to Chrysalis mother? And I didn't get the the changelings sauses over Chrysalis and dog pile, what are does? Changelings in cocoon mode? baby changelings? Did Chrysalis just get birth already? I'm confuse
Also, if he mating with her, give him the right with other changelings princess as he want, why is Chrysalis mom, so desperately to mate with him?
P.S: Are we are going to see Chrysalis sisters in the future? Or more sisters for her family?
1901406 I'm sorry but that was all of them and I don't know what you mean by changeling sauces if you could give me a hint of where you see that then I will be okay. Gildus was desperate because she had no one left to love her and mate. If she can't create more drones how can she make sure she is always on top? Also you notice from this and the last chapter, she absolutely despised chrysalis and wanted her crushed and broken underneath her hoof.
1901965
The sauces thing is the scene when he enter the house, see plates disperse in all the house then see something in the middle and ask if Chrysalis is in that "Changeling sauce" Or whatever, that was, (sorry if I didn't writer right) She pock her head out, said she is tired, and ask him not to do much noise, and go to sleep, is almost at the end.
So I take those are changelings drones that now live with them and do their betting, correct?
1901982 "I walked up to my apartment and into the bedroom to find dishes all over the place and a pile of saucy changelings." I meant that they had bbq sauce on their faces and looked messy not that they were covered in some weird changeling fluids Ya but i am writing chapter 10 and honestly I totally forgot about the drones until you reminded me so I will write them in the next chapter.
1901982 oh and think of them as children or dogs because they pretty much act like them.
1902036
got it, thanks
So... his new job is to love Chrisalis and, er, "repopulate" a species. His shelter and needs taken care of.
Hell, what's not to like about that???
On an aside, punching his boss in the face. While that might have been cathartic, it's also assault and battery. I'm not quite sure he's got diplomatic immunity quite yet...