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Vespa luctuosa


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Spike has secrets. Secrets he isn't proud of. Secrets which clog up his thoughts to the point of needing to shout them out... This is why he has a diary. He converts all rage, hate, worry, fear, embarrassment and even crushes to simple text on a page. But this has continued to the extent that he is paranoid of anypony reading a single word of it...

So what happens when the diary mysteriously disappears?

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Comments ( 89 )

Hey there! Read!

Here's a short little story which I had a sudden urge to write in my many hours of free time... While I should have probably been doing something... But never mind!

It's a little idea which just came to me today, I'm not sure if it's been done... Probably has... But it might be quite interesting!

"Celestia raising the moon. The back was similar, but instead featuring Luna raising the moon." Did you want it to be Celestia raising the sun instead? any way fun story thus far.

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Woops, thanks for spotting that out. Funny thing is I made the mistake of Luna raising the sun at first.

Can't wait to see the next chapter!

Thanks for the great responses to this story, I'll keep writing and get the next chapter up as soon as possible.

"So what happens when the diary mysteriously disappears?"

It gets optioned as a major motion picture, with Huge Ackman playing Spike?

Alright, I'll be sure to read this! :) Spike shipfics all the way, dude! Yeah!

Celestia totally has that book, I'm on to you sun butt.

Interesting, but you missed capitalizing Spike at least twice in the second chapter.

Interesting... :duck:

-Kiryu :moustache:

AL

hhahahhahahaah pooor spikeeeee niceee fic !!!!!!!!!!:pinkiehappy:

Like.. Dislike.. WHERES THE LOVE BUTTON!!??? :heart::heart::heart:

Hello there!

There was such a splendid response to the first two chapters of this story so I was awesomely excited to write the third! This is the result... If you like it then great! If not then... Sorry... It's slightly disappointing, but there's still more chapters to come!

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SWETIEXSPIKE :pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy:
great story we need nore spike historys and more Twimac but that doesn`t matter now :twilightsmile::twilightsmile::twilightsmile:

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Thanks, I'm glad you're pleased with the story. :twilightsmile: <--- (First time I've used one of these!)

MMMMMOOOOOOOAAAAAARRRRR:flutterrage:

Spike you are SOO toast.

Spike is in no way the same age as the CMC. Twilight hatched Spike when she was younger than them. If Twilight was say five when she started school, and their six, for Spike to be six, Twilight would be eleven. Spike is probably closer to twice their age than the same age.

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That partly depends on how old Twilight is now. I've always considered her to be about seventeen, and for the CMC to be about 10, so I thought Spike was kind of around the same age. It's really not easy to tell what ages any of them are, as far as I know the only thing which has been revealed about the pony ages was that Fluttershy is a year older than Pinkie Pie... So I'm not sure, but you could be right about that.

1758653 Spike's age is directly related to Twilight's. Based on the Cutie Mark Chronicles, the fact most kids start Kindergarten, and Magic Kindergarten, at 4-5 as Twilight is defiantly advanced I tend to assume four, they do have entrance exams into advanced schools at Kindergarten age. I tend to think the CM are 6-9, Twilight around 17-19 and Spike 13-15. The whole greed growth happens, "Because he is growing up," so dragon puberty, and people think the human version is awkward.

Spikes a player, if he can't get with Rarity, then get with the sister. Nice move Spike:moustache:

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Okay, well you're probably right there actually. But still, I doubt everything in a world of ponies works exactly the same, so there's probably some space for our own creativity.

Ohhh man i loved it... more please :D

faved it :D:heart:

awesome story, I wouldn't worry about the age thing it's a fanfic for a reason.

the story is prety good

And here is chapter 4! It's a short chapter, and after many hours of distractions I managed to think of something! It's short because I thought it was a great place to stop... On some sort of cliffhanger... I think... Sorry...

Dam spike got lucky.

KEEP GOING I AM AMUSED WITH THIS WORK OF FICTION NOW I WILL STOP HOLDING THE SHIFT
great story hope next chapter comes soon:twilightsmile::twilightsmile::twilightsmile:

LOL awsome i love this story keep up the good work man!:moustache:for spike!!

Continue your work good sir:pinkiehappy:

AL

nice chap :DDDDDD :twilightsmile:

this is one of the better stories ive read

cant wait for the next chapter

Spike should have just eaten the book and got a new one later...

Ohhhh man...i need more :)))

Is this the end of the story or is there more

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