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Distrance


Started from the bottom now we're still at the bottom.

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:moustache: : I am spike's moustache, and I approve of this fic.

I am EricKilla, and I approve this message.

Spacecowboy
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Halo crossover.... /facepalms.

That said, from the description alone it seems like you are going the heavy comedy route here, and it might get rather interesting. I'll keep my eye on it and toss any feedback your way if any comes to mind.

Still... Halo crossover. No offense to you, but seeing a new one of these every few hours is uuugh. Damn franchise spitting out games faster than a Mormon spitting out kids.

Your description got me. I'm gonna take a look at this shit.

1818833

Not satirical enough for ya?

1818833
Psst! You might wanna take a look at this thingy :twilightsheepish:

I can't even. My ability to even is dead. That's an observation rather than a complaint, but... I'm gonna miss that ability.

Spacecowboy
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Rofl, plenty much, I understand the reasoning behind it, cause, well, it's the truth. Gotta facepalm regardless, even if this is a comedic attempt to put another Halo crossover up in the feature box. : )

More satire though, please?

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I did, but I am still allowed to complain at the number of Halo crossovers popping up I believe. xD Regardless of the reason.

Cursing does not equal comedy, just so you know.

Tenouttaten!
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1818911

Oh silly me! Thank you for pointing that out.

Best Halo fic out there! It's the fucking best!

1818833
Why do you think he wrote it?

My reaction throughout reading that entire description and chapter
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and
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:rainbowlaugh: Sooo many stereotypes XD.

And the ponies are so fucking OOC it's giving me AIDS.

anyone see my ass I just laughed it off

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I think that accurately portrays what this fic made me feel... or something. To use words to judge this masterpiece would be an insult to its glory.

Regidar's gonna be all over this like shingles.

On another note: wat. I can't, I just can't.

That was genuinely funny:rainbowlaugh: I found myself literally LOLing several times, especially in the beginning.

If you are interested though, a little word of advice? Don't make these one of those parodies that starts great, but in the end, ends up becoming the very thing they parody, except for the fact that the characters constantly lampshade how stupid the plot is.

A well placed lampshade can save a somewhat contriving event, but a dumb boring plot, where the characters constantly point out how dumb and boring the plot is, is still a dumb and boring plot

1820446

That's called lazy writing, and there are plans to change that. :twilightsheepish:

Made me smile and give a small silent chuckle.
So yes, it's pretty good.

1821345
Ok, cool. I was just pointing that out because you were kinda going in that direction there at the end. A little bit is fine, but this one time, I read a One Piece fanfic that was similar in spirit to yours (it was a parody of common clichés in One Piece fanfics), that was funny and insightful and sometimes downright hilarious for like 5 or 6 full chapters and then just descended into that...it was a huge bummer:fluttershysad:

By the way I couldn't help but notice:

Steel Ironfist thought as he fucked the shit out of some alien whores with his dick.

Which I first thought it was you know...a metaphor. But in the light of the zipper "incident", realized it was not...anyways the point is:

Did Ironfist say "No Homo" before all of that? Cause otherwise, unless I'm missing something here, your lead is totally gay!:twilightoops:

after reading the intro, I thought that the rating should be immature instead of mature... just saying...

Join Alpha Sqaud as they take ass, kick names, and spout hilarious one-liners and clever swears!

:^]

"SHEEEEEEEET, where the hell is Tex?" McMelon asked, shifting around to inspect the room.

Wait is this a red v blue fic

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