Chapter 1: Returned to earth
Chapter 1: Returned to earth
I walked down the stairs, ready to make some food. I was starving, not having eaten when I had woke up was a bad idea.
Once I was at the bottom of the stairs, my stomach growled. I rubbed it, "Hold on, I'm working on it." I said while chuckling to my self.
Upon walking into the living room, a familiar booming voice filled the house, "Lance Greenfield, I have bad news for you."
I stopped, recognizing the voice of God. I gulped, bad news, from God! That's never a good thing. "What is it?" I said in a worried voice.
As I finished that sentence, Twilight came running down the stairs, "Lance! What's going on?"
I held up my hoof, "One second Twi."
She stopped a few feet away from me and nodded.
The voice then began to speak again, "After much thought and watching over all the worlds that people went, I have come to a conclusion."
I gulped loudly again, becoming worried.
The voice continued, "I have decided that the Rapture was a mistake. I'm taking it back, along with everything that has happened since then."
My eyes widened, "What?"
"I'm setting everything back to the way it was before. The day after the Rapture. It will be as if it never happened. All thoughts, memory, and actions done in other worlds and in heaven will be like they never happened."
My head began to spin at the information that was being said, "But why?"
"I have my reasons young one. But I'm afraid its time I send you, and everyone else, back to earth. To live out the rest of your life normally."
I shook my head, "But I prefer this one!"
"I've already made my decision."
I hung my head, "If I must leave, please let me keep my memory."
"I will allow this, I'll also let your mother keep her memory."
"Thank you." I said, still sad.
"I will now allow you to say good bye to your loved one."
I held back tears and walked over to Twilight. She had tears in her eyes, some already flowing down her cheeks.
"What's going to happen?" She asked as the tears finally began to fully flow.
I continued to hold back tears, "I'm being sent back to earth, along with everyone else." The tears in my eyes began to flow, going past my goggles and down my face.
She jumped up and wrapped her hooves around my neck, "NO! I don't want you to leave! We just got married! You can't leave!"
I wrapped my hooves around her neck and felt like crying, "I know, I wouldn't leave if I had a choice. But... I don't. I can't go against God."
I stepped back and gave her a final kiss.
She whipped tears out of her eyes, "I love you."
That was it, I couldn't hold it back. I began to sob, "I love you too Twilight."
The voice began to speak again, "Ready?"
I shook my head, "No."
"You have to leave young one."
I hung my head, "Ready."
"Then I'm sending you back. You will remember everything that has happened to you. I put you in the place you would have been that morning."
My body began to glow.
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Twilight watched as her lover was about to be sent away. She would never see him again.
How was she going to raise their foal alone? How was she going to go on without him? How can she wake up in the morning without him laying next to her?
She shook her head, tears freely flowing down her face. She wasn't going to let him be taken away from her.
As his body began to glow, she jumped forward, wrapping her hooves around his neck.
A sudden sensation filled her body and she felt herself falling. Then, all of sudden, she landed on something soft.
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I opened my eyes to find my self standing in a room. It looked familiar, very familiar. I looked around and sighed. It was my room, my messy as hell room.
The walls had three posters from three well known video games. There was also a few nails that held up a few items that I find worthy to show off; necklace's, rings, and other odd things. My desk still held all of my homework from school. Being a senior sucks.
I walked over to my window and looked out at the familiar traffic of New York City. I lived in a small three story building owned by my mom. I sighed and though of Equestria... and Twilight.
A groan from behind me made me jump and turn.
On the bed lay something that filled me with happiness and worry.
A girl lay on my bed. Upon closer inspection, I could see purple hair with a pink streak through it. It was Twilight!
I scratched my head, how did she get here? I thought back to the last moments and remember feeling something wrap around my neck. That must have been Twilight. But how was she able to follow me?
"Love." Said a loud voice in my head.
What the... "What do you mean love?"
"Love, as in the love you two share. Once she jumped on you, I decided to send her back with you. I made her human so she will fit in with this world."
I smiled, "Thank you. This means a lot."
"Your welcome young one."
I walked over to Twilight and looked her over. She wore a plain white T-shirt and worn blue jeans. Her hair was down to her shoulders.
When I reached out to shake her awake, I saw that I was wearing a red plaid shirt. I was also wearing blue jeans. Thank God! I'm not wearing those stupid clothes anymore. I then began to gently shake Twilight.
She slowly rolled over and blinked at me, "Lance? What happened?"
I put on a reassuring smile, "Yeah its me. As to what happened, you kinda came back with me to earth. And your no longer a unicorn, your a human." I said the last part while preparing for her to freak out like she did in the first episode of season two.
Her eyes widened and she began to fill around her head, "My horn! How can I be a human?"
I shrugged, "Well, God said he made you a human so you would fit in with this world."
She Slammed her hand into her face, "Now how am I going to use magic."
I smiled weakly, "You don't."
She sighed, "Well its worth it if I get to be with you." She climbed out of my bed and looked around my room.
She was about a inch sorter than me.
She looked at her left hand and smiled, "Good, the wedding band is still there." The golden wedding band was still on her left hand and on the ring finger.
I looked at my left hand and saw that the wedding band had turned into a wedding ring, still golden. When I went to take it off, it wouldn't budge. Looks like they don't come off even in another dimension.
She looked around my room again, "Nice place. Messy, but also comfortable."
I smiled, "Thanks, my room is always messy."
Before she could respond, the sound of foot steps could be heard coming up the stairs and towards my room.
My mom burst into the room, a confused look on her face, "Lance! Did we just..." She looked at Twilight, "She's a human? Huh, I guess we really was there."
I smiled weakly, "So you do remember?"
She nodded, "Yes. Did God talk to you to?"
I nodded back in response, "Yeah, he told me why he send us all back to earth."
She reached into her pocket and pulled out her Iphone, "December twentieth, ten forty eight A.M., He really did send us back to the day after the Rapture."
I looked over at Twilight and smiled, "Yep, but at least he let her come back." Then a thought hit me, "What about the Captain? Did he come back with you?"
She looked down in sadness, "No, he didn't come back with me. I don't think he was allowed." She looked at Twilight, "How was she able to come back with you?"
I shrugged, "God said it was because of our love for each other. I'm pretty damn lucky."
She glared, "Language young man!"
Wow, I forgot that she things everything is cussing, "Sorry mom."
She nodded, "Its okay... This time."
She turned for the door, "Also, if you think that just because of what happened that you don't have to go to school when it starts, your wrong."
"Damnit!"
She turned to me, "Lance Greenfield! I said watch your language!"
I smiled, "Won't happen again."
She walked out of the door, "It better not."
I turned to Twilight and smiled. There's something I've been wanting to tell her, but didn't know how. "Come here Twi."
I walked over to my computer and turned it on. I pulled up Youtube and typed in, 'My Little Pony: Friendship is Magic '. When the video was up and loaded, I smiled, "Okay Twi, I think its time you know how I know so much about you and all of Equestria."
She walked up and looked at the screen with curiosity, "What is that thing?"
I smiled, I've always wanted to explain human technology to Twilight. "Well, this is a computer, it holds data and allows humans to communicate and look up information. With this, I can find out almost anything."
She looked at the screen, "Interesting."
I nodded, "It sure is. I still don't fully understand how this all works."
She looked at me, "So, you was going to show me how you knew everything about Equestria?"
I nodded again, "Yep. Watch this." I clicked the video and it began to play the first episode.
As it played, she looked shocked, "That's Princess Celestia's voice! And that's the history behind Nightmare Moon!"
I smiled, "Yep. Just keep watching."
She looked at the screen in silence till the part with her in front of the book, "That's me!"
I chuckled, "Brief info for you. Here on earth, we watch Equestria as a cartoon. You being one of the main characters."
She listened to the song, "Catchy song." Then it started showing all of her friends, "That's all my friends! How is this possible?"
I paused the video when the song ended, "Well, I don't know how to explain it. But would you like to watch the rest of this?"
She nodded, "Yes, I really want to see the rest of this."
I smiled and hit play.
Eight episodes later and many many questions.
After episode eight, Look before you sleep, I turned to her, "So, what do you think?"
She furrowed her eyebrows, "Well, its strange. I mean, it followed all of us. Showing what we did and everything, but we never knew it. Its sorta confusing to me."
I shrugged, "I don't have anyway to explain this. I'm not that good in physics or things like that."
She looked back to the computer, "Can you show me somethings about the bronies? I'm curious out them."
I sighed, I knew she was going to ask this. As long as I don't run across any... Pictures... everything should go great, "Alright."
I pulled up the website Equestria Daily and scowled down the page, showing her some fan made art, that was clean, and a few other things.
She nodded, "Wow, the bronies really do adore us don't they."
I chuckled, "You have no idea Twilight."
She raise an eyebrow, "Oh?"
I shook head smiling, "Never mind." I looked out the window and had a though. How was this going to work? I mean, shes a pony that is now a human, and she doesn't know anything about earth.
I shrugged, we'll figure that out later. I turned back to my computer to check the time. 2:24 P.M. Wow, its only the afternoon.
I stood and looked down at Twilight, "Hey Twi, is it okay with you if I go out for a hour or two?"
She looked at me in confusion, "What do you mean?"
I put my Android in my pocket and turned back to her, "Well, I kinda want to see one of my friends."
She smiled, "Oh, I don't mind. Just don't stay gone to long."
I nodded, "I'll be back soon. Just don't leave the house."
She cocked her head, "Why?"
I sighed, "Its the human world and we're in New York City. Its not safe for you to be out there with out me. A lot of people would love to catch a girl like you."
She nodded, understanding, "Okay Lance, I'll stay inside."
I leaned forward and kissed her on the lips.
I smiled and walked out of my door, followed by Twilight. We walked down the stairs, then down the other stairs, and finally to the front door. I pulled on my black jacket and smiled, "Be back before you know it. Just spend some time with my mom."
She chuckled, "That should be fun." She said sarcastically.
I nodded, "Oh, you'll have the time of your life Twi."
She shook her head, "Just hurry back."
"I will." I said as I grabbed the door knob and opening the door. I then stepped through it and closed the door. I looked around at the crowd of people that was normal for this city. I sighed, damn I miss Equestria.
I began walking down the street, towards my uncles house, who was a wiz at computers. I know I told Twilight I was going to a friends, but I consider my uncle a friend. And right now, I could use his help finding someone. Someone that I could only find on the internet.
I walked in silence, people walked past me, not caring or paying attention to me.
... I'm...
... I don't even...
...I give up...
Now, who's the lucky guy, that Lance's searching for...
118249 Well, I think, that because you died 5 years ago, you're still in Equestria...
119086 Lucky basterd
Not gonna read this, just gonna say one thing. LEARN HOW TO USE PONY CREATOR
119276 Go buck yourself, mister...
The first thought I experienced upon viewing this monstrosity was blank... followed by an all consuming mix of rage and utter disgust. That OC is clearly an abomination, A gary-stu of epic proportions that need to just... end.
Please discontinue this fic for the dignity of all humanity. I fear if any aliens catch wind of this they take a look at our civilization and say "nope" and then leave. all your fault.
119276
Agreed. This OC looks terrible. retarded would be a better description. I mean I hate OC's in general but f**k, that's just something else man.
119347
I'm going to be nice here. He's Suppose to look like that! And
no, I'm. Not going to stop! The main story is to damn popular to end!
Human x pony love making... that will be interesting, i am waiting for a closer descriptions
119347 Seriously, you guys need to calm down, you're so pissed off, because your imagination sucks, and can't do an OC... And because kickass did that OC, not other, doesn't mean, that you can insult him... Love and tolerance, in that community, but I see, there are some fake bronies...
119347 *ahem* I'm going to be nice here You...dirty... stuck-up... sadistic... shit-eating, cock-sucking, butt-fucking, penis-smelling, crotch-grabbing, ball-licking, semen-drinking, dog-raping, Nazi-loving, child-touching, cow-humping, perverted, spineless, heartless, mindless, dickless, testicle-choking, urine-gargling, jerk-offing, horse face, sheep-fondling, toilet-kissing, self-centered, feces-puking, dildo-shoving, snot-spitting, crap-gathering, big-nosed, monkey-slapping, bastard-screwing, bean-shitting,fart knocking,sap busting,sploog tasting,bear blowing,head swallowing ,dick snatching,hand jobbing,doggy corresing,mucus spewing,anal plugging,hoe grabbing,uncircumcized,sewer sipping,hoar moungering,piss swimming,midget munching,douchebag ASSHOLE.
119455 dude, clam down i got this
119276>>119350 now...which one of you disgraces to the brony community(yea i said it) want to go first\
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119451>>119455>>119401>>118249 do you old chaps want some of my 100 year old wine from my celler while we watch the festivites?
119549 No I got this 27.media.tumblr.com/tumblr_lpsftiiT1G1qg3ajdo1_500.jpg
119549 Then to defend them I'm not a brony and I find some of the stuff odd and I troll the show sometimes so give them a break
119549 ALSO why do I find this picture inviting?
O SHEET A SEQUEL!!
GL kickass, don't let Twilight get shot while hunting!
Why doesn't anyone like this? I for one, think kickass should continue it.
119455 So true. So true.
119575 Same
dont judge a fic by the first chapter
Philosoraptor: If non-bronies hate my little pony, then why do they go to pony related things all the time to look as if they are trolling bronies?
Seriously, non-bronies. If you hate this show so much, LEAVE US ALONE.
I don't know what I am saying at this point. BUT I DO KNOW ONE THING:
Invulnerable seagulls eat rust.
119586 I'm with you I'm a non brony yet I don't troll.........much
I trolled a guy who was trying to help me on my fic by saying I quit, and then he reacted like it was a tragedy.
hope that this is just a side story that doesn't involve the main plot line
119596
Just a side 'what if' story.
Totally agree.
119595 liar
119455
It's so funny yet so true!!!!
Still, if you don't like this story, then don't read it. I mean FUCK!! You're acting like kickass is just writting this story for you guys. There are a shit load of bronies liking this.I'm one of them! So go fuck off and FUCK YOU GUYS.
kickass is the GREATEST writer in the UNIVERSE!!!!
No lie
119678 I'll agrue with that, because Pen Stroke (Autor of Past Sins and Creeping Darkness) is the GREATEST!
none of your stories are safe!
I am the steed of human growth, the very thing that drives men forward. I am the creation of geniuses and of cavemen to live onwards. I am the keepsake and herald of humanity, I grow and I learn I grow faster, stronger, more and more. Until one day I end us all.
What am I?
You have 3 guesses.
(Note: Keep up good work)
119347 images.cheezburger.com/completestore/2011/7/11/411f198c-5e9f-4a6a-8d13-9b50db85fbd0.jpg
before reading: what the FUCK?
119276
I don't care if you don't read this. Even if I have over two thousand fans for it that actually talk to me! Now, run along, I don't want people like you in the fan base.
Now, @ all of my friends and fans: Thank you for reading the story. I'll be updating the original soon
Seems legit. You should make it where you find all of the past bronies and bring their memory back! You'll have trouble with me, I'm Australian, which means I'm super ignorant... Ok, slightly ignorant.
Ok ive been reading the comments. I wont be reading the fic. A few reasons.
1. mane6 pony X oc = not something people exactly care for its taboo even for the Brony community
2. Your OC may be what you like. But its just...too weird. Again something most people don't enjoy
I cant say for the fic but I wish you the best
119843 I'll be the hardest, I'm from Poland...
Anyway, my real name is Peter, and I really can play guitar/do pranks...
119838 welcome
119838 BtW, U ROcK at writing stories!, I SUCK AT WRITING! (srry if this causes a rude comment rage!)
119881 As I said many times: Haters gonna hate...
Hate to tell the trolls but Kickass has a mini army that hates trolls
Just like i have FIVE THAT IS RIGHT FIVE FANS!
119881
Since you have real reasons for not reading, I'm not going to say anything.
Well maybe one thing:
This is different from other OCXMane 6 Pony. Just ask around.
Also, for my OC. I wanted to do something different from everyone else. Every OC story involves plain characters (No real detail or weird things.)
I did something different, along with a lot of different things. Just read the real one.
119930
Sounds good Kickass can't wait for more?
By weird things do you mean whiggers, juggernauts, guns, explosions, crude humor, the slender man, rap music, sex, and other things that appeal to this generation?
119937
Yes, close to that.
And also plain characters with plain appearances and normal or abnormal personalty.
Only a few can pull it off. I know a few
119976 who
why didn't twi turn into a human too?
120231 Cuz you didn't eat bananas on the MOON!
119976
Do i count? All of my human cast are either retards, assholes, or whiggers
Including me
120414
Your story is just plain funny and interesting. I like it
120231
Every one was sent back as their true self. Since she was a pony before, she remained a pony.
120433
I see, if this is the day after the rapture does this mean that God chose to let humanity live or does he want to wait some time before killing everyone
120439
Well, in this version, he has decided to let them all live.
I may update this tomorrow or some time this week
119347 I have one word to describe you: Dick. Now shut up troll.
119736 Hmmmm....... The Wheel, DNA, Knowledge
any of them right?