• Published 23rd Nov 2012
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In Your Eyes - FlutterDash777



Intrigued by the appearance of Derpy, Vinyl tries to gain the trust of the insecure pegasus.

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In Your Eyes

-In Your Eyes

Derpy was confused. She never had a pony touch her muzzle before with their own. What was this? Some sort of hug? A friend thing? She was't sure, but it made her feel happy. Is this a thing that friends do together? Did she finally have a friend? Was Vinyl her friend? Her best friend?

Derpy didn't have any answers. She just stood there and let Vinyl continue her strange friendship hug with her mouth. Derpy thought maybe it was something friends did to comfort each other, because if that was the case, it was working. She no longer felt sad about her past. Everything started to disappear. All she could think about was Vinyl. Vinyl. Vinyl.

Derpy closed her eyes. Vinyl's eyes were closed as well but she couldn't see through her shades. Derpy just felt as if she needed to close them. As if she couldn't get the complete feeling unless her eyes were shut.

It must have been true. She felt every little feeling as her eyes could no longer see. It felt as if nopony else was there but her and Vinyl.

Vinyl slowly released herself from Derpy. She opened her eyes to see that Derpy was still sitting there with her eyes closed, mouth still parted. Vinyl smiled, and pet the ponies mane. She moved her bangs over to the side, and softly touched her face.

Derpy's eyes opened. She couldn't feel her blissful world anymore, but seeing Vinyl, she knew it was still there.

Vinyl was glad to see that Derpy no longer looked sad. Does this mean she liked her? Did Derpy ever even kiss anypony before? Was that her first kiss? Does she even know what a kiss is?

Vinyl decided to speak.

"Derpy, I think....I think I really like you."

Vinyl was glad that her eyes were covered by her shades. She didn't want Derpy to see how flustered her face really was. Her white coat made it easy to see her blush, but only slightly. She tried to hold back all visual emotions.

"Friends?" Derpy said with a smile on her face.

'Friends? Just friends? Did she think that was some friendly gesture.'

Vinyl was starting to hurt inside. Was that all she was to her? Just a friend? After that kiss? She felt nothing but friendship? Maybe Derpy didn't understand love. Maybe those fillies were right. Maybe nopony ever loved her before. Maybe Vinyl was the first pony to ever love Derpy.

"No...Derpy....I love you."

Vinyl had did it now. There was no escaping what would happen. Derpy would probably not know how to react. She barely knew her. How could she already love her? Did it even matter? Maybe it was fate...

"Wubs? Wubs! Wubs!" Derpy started to giggle, and laugh, as if Vinyl had not just confessed her undying love for her.

'Wubs? No, not wubs!' Vinyl was starting to get frustrated. But she couldn't be mad. Derpy didn't understand. She had never felt love before. She just needed to be showed. She could show Derpy love, and then everything would be great between them.

"No, Derpy. Not wubs...I LOVE you. As in...I have a lot of feelings for you. Derpy I just kissed you because I couldn't help myself from doing so. I love being around you. I love you being with me. I never want you to leave my side. You could live with me, and we could listen to wubs all the time. I could show you how to DJ! You could help me out when I go to work. We could always have fun together! Don't you want that?"

'I sound so uncool right now...' Vinyl thought to herself, but she didn't care. She didn't care if she seemed like a loser, not in front of Derpy anyways. Derpy was different from other ponies. She felt as if she could be herself around Derpy.

Derpy looked at Vinyl in confusion. Her smile had faded away, and she seemed as if she didn't know what Vinyl was talking about.

"Love?" Derpy remembered what she had been told in the past.

Nopony will ever love you!

That's what she was told. But was it really true? Or had somepony just told her...that they loved her? Somepony finally loved her?

"Love." Vinyl said.

Derpy still didn't completely understand what kind of love Vinyl was feeling. Vinyl knew this. Vinyl knew that Derpy couldn't completely understand the sexual, and emotional pull that Vinyl felt towards Derpy. She had never been exposed to anything like it before. Vinyl could only go but so far with Derpy. But Vinyl didn't care. She only loved Derpy, and nopony else. Even if she could only be her friend. Vinyl would still love her.

Derpy was different than other ponies. This was something Vinyl knew from the start. Derpy was like a child, playful, innocent, and she carried something that Vinyl wanted. She carried a heart that completed Vinyl. Something that Vinyl was not going to give up.

Derpy and Vinyl are always together now. The live together, work together, hang together. Everything.

Vinyl sometimes wished that she had never met that pegasus though. She wished that she would have just stayed at work that night, and never had seen her. She wished that she had never fallen in love with her, but she knew fate had already planned it out.

Vinyl still harbored those loving feelings for Derpy deep within her heart, but she never brought them out ever again. She knew that she couldn't do that. It wouldn't happen, it couldn't. Derpy was different. But she would never lose those feelings, and she would always protect Derpy, and stay by her side.

Vinyl had never been more happy with her life than now. Derpy completed her. They were meant to be by each others sides. She knew it was so.

In your eyes, I see my reflection, and I know that I am deep within you. Within your heart, forever.

The End.

Comments ( 15 )

is that really the end?

Yes :ajsleepy: I wanted the end to be one of those....I need more! :flutterrage: Kind of endings :fluttershyouch:

Plus I thought it needed a sweet and simple ending. I don't feel Derpy is the pony up for a full fledged romance. A bitter sweet friendship fits it best. That is how I feel anyways :twilightsmile::heart: I do hope you enjoyed it though, even if it didn't meet your full expectations, and I apologize for any disappointment :fluttershyouch::fluttershbad::fluttercry:

OUCH! Friend-zoned!

Yep! That sucks sometimes, but it's okay :twilightsmile: Vinyl is going to get her romance with Octavia in my next fic! :heart: Hope you check it out! :yay:

ehh it was ok:unsuresweetie: but the ending made sense:twilightsheepish:

Hm. I think I prefer stories with Derpy as a much more intelligent pony. Good story though.

1782803 It's not that she's unintelligent, it's just she's very high-spirited, and kind of ditzy of course :twilightblush:

GAH!! Why did I let this story lay in my "Read Later" box for so long? This is really good :pinkiehappy: I actually kind of like how there isn't quite a "relationship" between them :derpytongue2: Really good work :twilightsmile:

1901259 I'm glad you liked it! And I thought that it was best they didn't. I just don't see Derpy as being the relationship type :twilightsheepish:

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