When Twilight, Fluttershy, Rainbow Dash and Pinkie Pie try out an experimental spell that goes wrong they're transported to Earth... Straight into the life of a teenager, turning his whole life upisde-down! Rated Teen for quite a bit of swearing and violence.
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I like it but shouldn't they know what clothes are since Rarity owns a boutique? They might be confused at the concept of wearing clothes all the time perhaps but not completely unaware of it's existence.
1663010 Yeah I might change that later on thanks for the feedback :D
Wow, Your lucky that this is getting some good reads, a Human fic i posted a while ago got Slammed by bad comments, And that was my first one
Nice story for a first try!
You might want to change some parts like the "elderly woman of 40". You could say something like "older woman of 40" or "40 year-old woman".
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heh I remember that
AUSSIE AUSSIE AUSSIE! OI OI OI! Finally an an alternate universe fiction involving Australia
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What about this one? It plays in America at the moment, but a guy who found the Crusaders made contact with a guy in Australia and they are about to travel there. Give it a shot.
Bronydragon
Ok. Read it now and it is really fun to read. I hope you will keep going like this.
Bronydragon
1664589 I'll give it a read. I just got excited because this was the first one that I found
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And I think you could go on searching for a while. There are so many fics on this site and I bet there are several more with Australia in them.
I don't think we will find them all, but one can hope. Oh and by the way, the chapter "The Yellow Brick Evolutionist Flies Bubble Gum" is a bit crazy, so watch out.
Dragon
Pinkie = Page
Twilight = Theresa
Rainbow = Victoria, Ramona
Fluttershy = Cecilia, Fiona
That's what I think would maybe fit.
Dragon
I could help with some Ideas!
1668654 I've changed the names to some that my friend gave me but trying to decide between his and yours is pretty hard!
I've sort of added some history of their adventures linked to Twilight being mad at her new name so I might keep it as it is. Thanks anyway though.
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No problem. If you need anything just ask.
Dragon
That was a great chapter!
But... what about the editing job?
Ok. First of all thank you for mentioning me.
I appreciate it.
Now for the chapter. Some errors:
Rainbow said(,) making Twilight role her eyes. Should be roll not role.
Thanks you very much Tracey. Only: "thank" you very much Tracey.
The room became calm once more the room is not calming it's becoming quiet.
ponies in a magical land of Equestria The magical land of Equestria.
he heard saw a bright flash outside Heard or saw. Decide.
Outside 2 minuted earlier Two minutes earlier.
Aaaaaaaaaand finally you have to look out for punctuation a bit more. The missing commas are interfering with the reading flow.
Hope I wasn't too harsh.
Dragon
1804671 Thanks, I guess I was in a hurry to finish it and I don't think you were too harsh those are pretty obvious mistakes.
If want help I could help
I want to see more :)
This is really good, you sure it's your first fanfic?
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Same here but try to keep focus on kyle and the girls
I love it so much
Let's see. What was it I wanted to say now? Oh right.
MAN IT IS TIME FOR A NEW UPDATE!!!!! LIFE OR NOT!!!!
Dragon
2319722 New chapter up! :D Your words inspired me. And sorry it's shorter than the others EVEN THOUGH I said I was gonna try and make them longer. I've been really short on imagination lately and I just needed to finish this chapter and get things on a good roll again.
YES Finally it's here
that hoof is probably applejack's
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Yay!
It doesn't matter if you take a long time writing a new chapter, but over a year is quite a time if I remember correctly.
Doesn't matter though. At least it's there. Hope to see it updated a bit sooner now. Lenght is not everything by the way.
Dragon
dont mean to be a necro but will this be updating again or is it canclled