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There are not nearly enough Roseluck fics out there. she is my favorite background pony.
Normally I'm not into this kind of story. The part about Roseluck being in it, though, convinced me to read it.
Damn, am I glad I did.
Awww, that is so romantic.
thumbs up!
this is awesome. i love these fics that aren't just sex.
1829387 same here... because derpy is a whole different kind of pony :P
oh and i made an account just to follow you ;)
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Yippee! I'd never written one of these before, but I've read enough of them to form an opinion on how they should be written. I'm very happy that you're happy with the result.
That was a really sweet fanfic,
plus I love anything with Roseluck.
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Thank you. When I started writing, sex wasn't on the agenda. The premise was, "Write about Roseluck because she's awesome."
I liked it, and I'm really glad you made it an actual story and not just a big pile of clop. However, I think you could have easily stretched it to triple this length to develop their relationship and dynamics more naturally, and give some more insight into each pony's internal state during the trip, when they got exposed to the pollen, afterward, and when Rose pulled the tea trick. I felt that the tea trick in particular was far too rushed, and you didn't really indicate how Rose figured out the tea wouldn't do anything.
I also wasn't clear whether she actually ground up and drank the Ambrosia (which seems a weird thing to do), or if that was Lily's flower that had sat under the pollen all night. But, you know, either way.
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While my pacing is indefensible, I can clarify the last scene. Roseluck kept the ambrosia flower after confronting Daisy and used it for lack of teabags. When it left her unaffected, she concluded the pollen was the psychoactive part.
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Oh, okay. It seemed to me like she brewed it up but got distracted by the knock before she had the chance to experiment.
Really a warming story, for the cold weather out. Roseluck is a rare find, and I thought you did a terrific job.
Keep writing more stories with Roseluck!!
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Thank you. I have no plans for another Roseluck story at the moment, but I'm inclined to focus on background ponies from now on for the creative freedom they provide.
Man this needs to be on the featured box just for being the best, well-writen story staring Roseluck and Lily with a unique plot and a unique name. (Roseluck is my all-time favorite pony from now until forever
) ((Grammar may be wrong but I don't give my damns away for free you know 
)) (((Your the best around, nobody is going to let you down!)))
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I'm glad you think so, but I'll settle for being featured on Equestria After Dark. I'm tempted to write a sequel starring the two on an actual adventure.
A well written clop, for sure. However, it was a little confusing at times... I still thoroughly enjoyed it^^
I didn't realize until about halfway in that Roseluck wasn't actually giving Lily a hoofjob, it was just a dream. Some of the more confusing bits of setup are this story's biggest failings.
Still, I really enjoyed the atmosphere and I've always been a sucker for Rose and Lily doing it, so I can't be too hard on it. I also never knew vagina had a plural form, so you got that too! In all seriousness, the anatomical description was good enough to carry the day.
Have another thumbs up!
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I'm glad I've got the anatomical description down, at least.