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Sounds interesting enough, I'll give it a read when I have more time.
best line in the whole story. congratulations.
i know it was only a matter of time before a clopfic featuring rarity and a diamond dog would be written
I was thoroughly amused. Good work.
This reminds me of my story already, Lumber Jacking. A diamond dog, I'll read it now.
I wish there were more diamond dog romance stories out there and while this may not be the most heart warming love story its still a good read
I love you so much right now
Very nice.
Best part, the Diamond Dog doesn't care one way or the other.
In other words, he doesn't give a fuck. This is delightfully ironic.
Now THIS was a well written story, perfectly written, I bucking loved it, while I HATE Rarity with all my heart, her getting bucked by a Diamond Dog was very amusing, you did really, really well on this would not be suprised if it got featured
I liked it. The cover picture is sooooo cute
P.s. maybe you can read my story, my day in Ponyville
You should write stories of the rest of the mane 6 getting banged by diamond dogs
Haha, David Bowie!
That was a delightful change of pace from other rarity clopfics. Perhaps now you'll consider a Trixie X Changeling, or a Fluttershy X Gilda redemption/clop fic?
One error I noticed in the story:
… “The mental imagine” – It should be ‘image’ instead of ‘imagine’.
That aside, this was very impressive. Short, sweet, to-the-point (not usually indicative of a good story, but for what it has, it worked!), characters being believable, story itself really doesn't NEED anything to be any better.
If I had to, at gunpoint, find a flaw, it would probably just be how casual Zippy sounds. Not with the sex, but with his description of Rarity. It's hard to imagine it in a Diamond Dog voice, but I guess 'vocal immersion' isn't really a flaw, per se. Besides, calling his voice "gruff", "husky", or "gravely" gets rather old after a surprisingly short period of time.
Great work, nonetheless. I find myself admiring how well-written this is... I wonder if that says something about me.
I now want to see a picture of someone toasting bread on a pony's heat
Now this is something I don't see every day, added to the reading list!
Hot! I like it thumbs up!
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I can imagine a romance between a diamond dog and a pony being a good angle from which to examine xenophilic relationships without having to bring humans into the mix, but I doubt Rarity would be the best candidate.
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I wish it was featured, and I like at least some interpretations of Rarity, but I'm content knowing you and the others appreciate the work that went into portraying this one. I'll have another, unrelated clopfic out in a few days that should blow this one out of the water.
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Maybe not diamond dogs, per se, as that would get repetitive, but perhaps other sapient predators. I can see the adult red dragon Fluttershy confronted coming back to, shall we say, make amends.
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Celestia damn it! I'm very careful about those things, but thank you for pointing that one out. I was in a rush to get this published, you see. As for Ziggy, I have to agree that his phrasing didn't feel entirely natural, and having put greater emphasis on the actions and descriptions is no excuse. As for nonstandard voices in general, I usually mention them once or twice and expect the reader to remember, but I didn't do that this time. Curses!
2162107 Right and well hey, to each their own brother, no judgement here. Oh, I'm hoping to read it if it's something I enjoy, you done very, very well on this so I doubt that
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I have three on the drawing board, one of which I know you won't like on account of its being Twilight/Celestia, but while I can't tell you why this other one is so awesome without giving away major plot points, I have a feeling you'll find it to your liking.
2162879 Awesome, yeah, I'm not a fan of Twilight/Celestia but I'd be more then willing to give your other fics a shot....can you at least tell me which pairing?
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I can do better than that! Here's the description: "For as long as Fleur and Fancypants have been husband and wife, their sex life has been tame. He's not into the kinkier stuff, and neither is she, or so she says. In truth, she has a scandalous secret, one that will either end their marriage or rekindle their love."
2163026 Now THAT seems like something I would read
Badass, can't wait to read it
2163026 Some things need to be read in the voice of Don LaFontaine.
That plot synopsis is one of those things.
2162107 In your defense, I actually read the line NORMALLY, got interrupted, then went back and read it again before I noticed the error. Normally I'm very careful to point out any possible error so that future readers don't get their immersion ruined. Thankfully, you are a very well-written individual! Kudos!
As for Ziggy's voice, the real problem is how inconsistent it is with regards to the show, itself. He has vocal mannerisms, but they're inconsistent due to him being a character who was essentially 'made' for a single episode, with 2 others. The three blend together upon recollection. I normally wouldn't even make a comment about him, but among the plethora of fics I'm working on, he has a bit part for one in particular, and I'm procrastinating in order to wait and see other authors' work in order to get a better idea. Heh...
He's STILL easier to write for than fricken' ZECORA, mind you, at least to me...
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I like the technical side of writing in that most things are either right or wrong. The same can rarely be said for content.
Though I occasionally have rhyming zebras play minor roles, I don't think I'll ever write Zecora as a main character. Writing in couplets is hard enough. Trying to keep her in character all the while is indicative of masochistic tendencies. Worse still would be writing a first-person story with her narrating.
The only disappointment was that right at the end there I was expecting Rarity to try to leave only to find she'd been quite firmly knotted.
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Am I admitting to great ignorance by saying that I don't know what you mean by "knotted?"
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You obviously haven't been in the porn-writing scene long if you don't have any idea about dog anatomy. You see, when a dog first gets it up, it's extending a literal bone. When it actually fills with blood... like a human male does when getting an erection... there's a much thicker 'knot' that forms at the base to lock it into the female so it can have time to properly inseminate her. It's believed this was evolved, much like the flare at the end of a horse's dick, because they find it so hard to aim, and if it gets out, it's probably not getting back in without significant trouble.
Now, for Diamond Dogs, you could say they evolved out of it once they got something like hands. Or, for this story, you could just say they didn't get it that deep. But I still think it would have been funnier if Rarity tried to escape only to find she was stuck. Though it also honestly would have been hard to miss, as we're talking a ball of flesh two to three times thicker than the rest of it.
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When you put it that way, I'll admit it would have made for a rather different tone of story. If I understand correctly, the knot forms post-penetration, so while her already being stretched to her limits might not pose an immediate issue, she would inevitably pull off once the excruciating pain began.
For the record, I considered researching dog penises for this story but didn't think it was worth the trouble. I assume most people reading my stories are more interested in pony vaginas, so I can probably get away with just getting those right. Even then, these being magical-talking-pony vaginas excuses a few artistic liberties.
I know the feels, Rarity
Admittedly, I was expecting the knot, would have tied it up nicely(har har).
Great story.
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[makes monkey noises while flailing arms and jumping in place]
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Like a Boston creme filling.
That made me laugh so hard!
2158375 The one thing I don't get, you were downvoted into oblivion.
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I can't stop listening. . .
Have fun.
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Oh, dear God. I'm not sure I can do this.
Oh. Well... Here's another reading, someone wanted it.
Also I love your creative vocabulary.
You sometimes use really, really long sentences but that isn't too much of a big deal.
I enjoyed reading this.
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You guys are killing me. I suppose I am flattered, though, and thank you for your kind words.
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