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You're welcome.
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Thanks! I had it last time, but I forgot the link.
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Thanks for crediting it. I'm totally cool with the image being used for this, especially since they didn't crop out my signature.
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Cover art's great. Sweet and unassuming picture of Budding Rose's two main characters, same art, must mean a continuation of the previous story right, showing how things are progressing?
Lily, you sly devil
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She's a rascal! I'll probably have an actual, non-clop sequeal because I love them two wayyyyy too much
Looking forward to the next part of this story
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I love her for it tho' :)
She is, isn't she?
You write whatever sequel you have in mind. I'll read it because these two have shot up in my fave pairing list due to these stories
The pacing felt right, little by little Rose fell under Lily's spell and oh look, how fun! A hotel! The clop wasn't bad at all, and you should write some more & keep improving. Heck, improve just so you can blow Rose's mind more!
I can barely think well enough to blink so soon after waking up, especially after a night out...
I believe that should be "On."
I believe "candles" only needs to mentioned once.
Just a few typos I found, nothing major. Great story by the way!
On to the next chapter!
I thought Roseluck in this chapter went really overboard. Even if the magical dong was messing with her mind. I find it very hard to believe she would say such things. I look forward to your next chapter. But where do you plan to take this story? So far it seems like mindless porn to me. Which isn't a bad thing really, just a little plot to go with the awesome sex would be nice.
Other than that you have earned a follower and a spot in my favorites.
I look forward to seeing what else you do next. Hopfuly something with me in it, but it's best not to get ones hopes up.
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None can resist the magical dong - Confucius
It's definitely got some plot going on in the next chapters, that's for sure.
Wow. You definitely are in new territory with this sequel.
I think you did a good job. I am not a very good literary critic, but I will give you my two cents. The sexual part was done pretty well, however I can't really say if it could be done better or not. My favorite "classy" sex scene is the one from "University Days". I suggest checking it out because the author does a good job switching between sexy and silly while very cleverly hiding a little dirty joke that Vinyl calls out at the end (by the way, the author kept the scenes separate from the story, so they are easy to get to if you don't want to read the whole story. It is one of my favs. Here are the two sex scenes in question)
As for the poem, I thought it was very well done.
Sorry it is not much, but if it makes a difference I did enjoy your work so far.
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Other than the minor nit-picking with the spelling errors, I have to say I really enjoyed this.
I think the pacing here is a little quicker in the sequel, not that it is bad, but I feel a more emotional charge to this writing style. Maybe it has to do with the content change, but even before things got sexual, the events of the night before and her getting drunk were actually very fun to read. I thought it had a nice flow to it.
I like this idea of Lily, I was considering writing a story with Lily having a relationship with an OC but now I'm not so sure she's to clever.