A story in which rosy pony, Roseluck, is tired of the oppression she must face in everyday life. Will she overcome her greatest fear? Will she defeat the Highlanders?
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~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ Like this is Roseluck is your favorite pony
~~~~~~~~~and that she deserves a char tag ~ ~ ~~ ~ ~
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Roseluck is indeed my favorite pony and I do believe she deserves an character tag, as well as more stories involving her.
Yes! Finally, a Roseluck story!
So what do I do if Roseluck is my least favorite pony and deserves a chartag specifying she's not in the story?
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You must suffer then.
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Wait, this is marked as complete?
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Just so you know, there is now a Roseluck tag ! I asked for it !
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Aww Yiss!
I... I love this.
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First AHA review, how exciting!
Name of Story: Roseluck Learns Puns
Grammar score out of 10: 10, I did not catch myself stopping to question sentence structure or word agreement.
Pros: It was funny, witty and well written.
Cons: The story was short and there wasn't much characterization of Rosy in that short time other than her need to make puns.
Notes Section: I think this should have been a bit longer, fleshing out everything a bit more. Descriptions of characters and locations would be appreciated from a reader's standpoint. A bit more depth to everything would be nice as well. Why did Rosy have to cuss at Olive? That was rude. :|
All in all, an enjoyable quick read. Wanna do me a solid and give Forlorn Ascension a look?
This was actually pretty clever. I got some good LOLs reading this
. Well done!
AHA review (my first time reviewing in this format)
Name of story Roseluck Learns Puns
Grammar: 10/10 technical (I didn't see any errors) 6/10 style.
Pros: No wasted words, genuinely funny, and cute as a button.
Cons: TOO FAST, somewhat weak characterization, choppy sentences, abrupt ending.
Notes: Overall, a really great, fun, cute read. I think your two biggest flaws can both be summed up by saying TOO SHORT. Your voice/ writing style feels rushed and choppy. Most authors on this site are too wordy if anything, this feels a bit like an over-correction for that. Slow down. Use some adjectives. Appeal to all five senses. The other change I would like to see is: use some of the potential left on the table here, specifically with Olive. It felt to me like there might be some proto-shipping there, which would have been delightful, but you left me hanging. Which leads us to the ending: I feel you didn't end the story so much as... stop. Like I should follow and watch my notices for an update. Updates are cool, unless you've played out the idea as much as you want to.
I never read a Roseluck fic before. I want to read more of them. In that, you have achieved success. Bask in it (it feels good).
Enjoy your review! Please read my story! Princess of the Night
I guess first time doing a real AHA review. Cool
Name of Story: Roseluck Learns Puns
Grammar score out of 10: 10. I didn't notice any problems
Pros: It was funny or perhaps should I say "punny"? So much randomness somehow streamed into one story with one plot, that as a whole don't make it random
Cons: Characters weren't really well-written. Not much motivation. Roseluck tried to attack Olive and he's just okay with it? The way Twilight acted... I can deal with that. Ending gives off the feeling that there would be another chapter. Random cussing.
Notes Section: It was enjoyable read but like I said, a bit random. Out of character though not much for other ponies. Not much reason. It seems fast and the way you ended story made me think that there's more to this. Why did you have to add swearing to this for no reason at all? It simply raises the rating.
However, it is a short funny read. How about you will check my story Bonds Beyond Species?
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"Random cussing."
To give an answer to why Roseluck says "fuck" is because I had a giggle when I wrote it, and I got a giggle when I had to reread it to see where the random cussing was.
And yes, I have an idea to make a story about the pungeon.
Ohmigosh you have just said one of my favorite words you get a read. Oh what roseluck that I have happuned upun this story.