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Sitting together on a warm summer's night, the Mane 6 lay back, stargazing, wondering about the world around them and the true meanings of life. They inflect upon themselves, pondering on their flaws, trying to teach themselves to be better friends. The name is a tribute to PinkiePieSwear, one of the greats in pony-based music making.

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Comments ( 8 )

That was... very good :pinkiehappy:

Hopeful for more like this :twilightsmile:

It got posted, bro. :pinkiehappy:

I was a little skeptical of the premise at first, but when I got to Applejack's section, I loved it. It was a good read, short, to the point, but also full of very vivid imagery. Wonderful night sky.

>"and not have Angel Bunny hold her hand the whole way." Ponies don't have hands. :twilightblush:

*looks at title*

giggity.

otherwise this is a solid 4 from me good work!

I hope there is more like this soon

I don't have time to read it yet... but i gave it a small over view. you may want to use more paragraghing, like oh say every 5 sentinces or so, and when a pony speaks(if they do. Sorry, it's just i shouldn't be on my comp right now so i kinda rushed)

123171 Oh, derp... Will change immediately. :pinkiecrazy:

NOw that i've read it, i have to say, it's really nice. :twilightsmile:

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