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I thought it was just going to be a regular Thorsday morning. At least I did when I went to sleep last night. I never planned on waking up in a familiar yet alien body. Then again, you never really do plan that without the proper technology or magic ready.

I will make references to plenty of things. Some will be subtle, others blatant. If you can manage to figure out what the title references, you get 555 free internets (redeemable absolutely nowhere!). Firebirdbtops won the 555 internets. Congratulations.

Part of the PonyEarthverse.

While this may be my second fanfic (my other one's on dA), I will consider it my first one due to wonderful inspiration and a better plan. All advice is appreciated.

Cover image is fanart of Technia done by Pascal when she got a spot in The Invisible Brony Defense Force.

Chapters (13)
Comments ( 125 )

Thorsday. The day to worship our god thor! ALL HAIL THOR!
Anyway, no, thorsday's spelled wrong. lol

1621812
You... did read the relevant information thread for this story group, right?
Made up days:
Marsday, Thorsday, Wagnesday, Threesday, Fried-zucchini day, etc.

Seems like an interesting fic, may as well let this be my inaugurational entrance to the group.

1621812 Nah, from what I can tell of the group this story comes from. The names of the days are all mixed up, though I did think that too when I first read the intro.

I think you used the wrong word here, if I'm reading your intent right:
to the exposed side, and pull. - to the exposed side, and push.

I like this quite a bit, hope to see more!

1621923 Nope. My bedroom door opens into the room, and thus I would have to apply pressure to the exposed edge and pull back to get it open.

1621956 Thanks. Would you like to know why it's also my text tone?

1621994 You know, I was happy that this got the reception that it did. But then you just had to come along and compliment me further, making me even happier. It's a good thing I'm not allergic to happiness, or I would die happy.

Oh. My. God. This story has the most epic cover art of all PonyEarth stories yet, with the writing to match!

1622091 I'm secretly (well, not so secretly) hoping that you have your own adventure outside of the whole mane 6 thing, just because itd be more entertaining hehe

1622098 I thank thee for the awesome comment.

1622108 I probably will, but some interaction with at least some of the mane 6 would be nice too.

"Thorsday". Hmm, not sure if intentionally misspelled to reflect it's an AU or a spelling error.

1621907
I did, but I still find Thorsday ridiculous. :D

1622311
Read the "Relevant Information" thread in the PonyEarthverse group.

1621956 I completely agree, that alarm is awesome. Heck, it even had me dancing a bit and that almost never happens.

I'm not entirely sure how to put this, but I think I want to say this is a better start then my own story. Also if there's any kind of advice I can think of, then it would be to try not to doubt the direction you're going in, that and second guessing your ideas. I know from personal experience that those will make your mood spiral in directions it shouldn't.

Anyway, good luck to you!

1622379 Dark grey and red. There's a difference.

1622656 Thanks for calling my alarm and text tone awesome. Also, thanks the advice and wish of good luck. I wish you luck in your own story.

Odinsday (wensday) THorsday ( Thursday) Friggday ( Friday)

Actually they were days in the viking age.

Who would shoot a black pony?... On second thought, scratch that question. I guess I could see how hunters could confuse creatures of similar build to deer.

Make sure not to reply to heavily on TVtropes, it is great to reference for ideas but it can get out of hand very quickly.

1624035 I will keep that in mind. Most of the links though were (intended) for reader benefit.

Going pretty good so far, great fic. Not to mention that your cover art is simply gorgeous. :raritywink:

I'm really enjoying this fic. It seems like since your not trying to force your story into the personality of one of the Mane Six, it has more room to grow and seems more natural. I actually like your fic better than the ones that started this group! Here's hoping that you continue bringing us this ponified crack! sphotos-c.ak.fbcdn.net/hphotos-ak-ash3/533771_492700707430591_843711878_n.jpg

It's called Neighpon! NEIGHPON! Japony is a racist slur, mumble grumble grumble mumble...


((Also, all the OCs are presumably from show-era Equestria. Just in case you were trying a Fallout thing.))

Another day, another awesome chapter.
Keep up the good work, I'm really enjoying this.

Dang. I wish I could read Japonyse ninja.

1634046 They might call it Neighpon over there, But we call it Japony. Also, I've never been interested in the whole Fallout thing, so any similarities are entirely accidental. Also, is the show era related to the Showa era?

1635278 Is that a separate written dialect of normal Japonyse?

BONUS STORY ABOUT JAPONYSE NINJAS HERE!

Since I can't read the Japonyse ninja story, I wished that I could. I didn't even know that there was a different dialect from normal Japonyse.

1635467 They're frickin' ninjas. That's all you need to know.

Epic.:eeyup:

The sad could have been worked a little bit more, but that probably would have overdone it.:raritywink:

Thanks for the update for my regularly scheduled 'Pony Time', below are a few corrections for your editing pleasure. :trollestia:

see what was could help - see what could help
picture of Technia in front of a picture of her in front of the house - (Just an opinion, but you may want to revise this, repeating sentence is repeating)
While was thinking, I - While I was thinking, I
I knocked the door a - I knocked on the door a

Meh, it's not a sad story overall, so you don't really need to go out of your way to force one chapter to be sad.
Pillow.exe? :rainbowlaugh: That's a unique take on the pillow after lucid dream rule. I like it. :pinkiehappy:

1639646 I've edited all of those except the second one. Think Inception on that one.

1639649 Any sad bits will be few and far between. Pillow.exe may be unique, but I say that I have not had the true lucid dream. All the others are initiated by the pony, whereas this one was initiated by me. That aside, it's still the first day for me, so it's a tad soon for the real lucid dream, which will, as tradition dictates, have a real pillow. I still don't have much of an idea on what Pillow.exe will do on the computer. At least it wasn't a micro SD card. That would be some really small writing.

Complete.

And now that you have henshined it makes the reference even more entertaining.

1641228 Wait, you know exactly what the title references? If you do, please say so.

1641581 Can you name the exact thing? I'll wait.

Using the faiz phone and blaster in conjunction with the smart brain satellite, he goes from normal faiz to blaster mode. Awakening...555... Complete. I think. It's been a while since I went through Faiz. :twistnerd:

1644662 Good enough. You get the 555 internets, as promised.

Oh good. That is more than W what I had before.

pillow.exe should be a program that just shows a rotating pillow. It looks really complex like it might hold a code or something but its just a pillow. Thatd be amusing.

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