I'm going to start off by saying: F*** Sweat Goblins. They're rude, they're loud, they break into you lab and touch things without asking, and they teleport you to alien worlds right as you're about to get your engineering career going. But, most of all, they sweat a lot, and that's just gross.
Thanks to one of these foul little things, I have now been hurled into some place called Equestria, that's inhabited by Pastel colored ponies and is completely devoid of any modern technology.
Oh, and I'm a robot now. Why? I don't know, ask the Sweat Goblin that sent me here.
Chapters (6)
I was thinking about this idea, but you're doing it a lot better than I would've done. Nice pace, a bit fast but still good.
Well, that was eas-VOICE HACK!*squeaky voice*GOD DAMNIT STEVE THIS WAS SUPPOSED TO BE A REGULAR COMMENT!
Wow. I am very impressed and can't wait for more! Take a like and a favorite!
The dots are a bit too long in some areas. Just three would be fine. But this story seems to be going in the right direction.
what does pastel mean?
I like it so far.
Can't wait to see more.
One thing- too little lore about our protagonist. I honestly want to know more about him. I know i might be grumbling, but all of the COTG stories have very little about roots of our heroes.
3441592 i'm fairly sure those are strong colours
Does he have an easy button too somewhere?
me gusta
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Colours that have "a soft delicate hue"
Basically the colours that MLP uses in the show.
this seems epic for me :P
But then again,Nothing is Epic for me.....Imma pyro hunter and I am Epic for EVERYTHING
I like this.
This... I like this... I like it a lot.
Accept.
I’m going to pay him a… oh, what’s that word again?”
“…Visit?”
“Beating, I’m going to pay him a beating
im not sure were thats from but i've heard it before (i think it might be DBZ abridged but not sure) tell me it if i got it wrong or right
Someone's a fan of Dishonored, I see.
Jug Street Gang - Bottle Street Gang, Lockjaw- Slackjaw, even holed up in a whiskey distillery.
Bravo, sir.
3449774 That's not it, (hint: it was dragged along several paragraphs)
good catch though.
3449791 where was that reference that i said from anyway?
So how about those updates?
3449779 Thank you, But that's not the "Special" reference I had in mind.
(that reminds me, I should probably finish up my No kills, no detection play-through, Sokolov's Manor is killing me T-T)
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DBZ abriged, season two, vegeta taking about Guru, after his rage broke.
3449839 I KNEW IT
I was gonna rewatch DBZ abridged to see if I was right
Or, you know, he could make himself a robo-dick.
'Oh my god! They killed Kenny!' ' Those bastards!' – South Park
Nice story. I have nothing else to say.
DBZ Abridge reference. South Park reference. Assassin's Creed reference.
You mean the fuck-massive refrence to Dishonored?.....Slackjaw,Bottle-street gang,Old whiskey distillery......Yep,Its a Dishonored easter egg
3449829 Its a shit ton easier if you have the ability to possess rats....Stop time and blink II help aswell
U havin a gigle ther m8?
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*Virtual Back pat*
congrats
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This guy got it
Oh this story plays heavily to my interests. Instant favorite and like. Please continue this.
This is most excellent
Hmm. Very interesting concept!
I wonder if he'll be creating any upgrades to his body. Maybe infared vision? The possibilities are endless!!!
nice touch with the Bowler hat, very classy
3452191 ill bash ye fookin ead in i sware on me mum!!
Interesting, I'm expecting some heavy humanized robocop justice.
VERY exciting story! I cannot wait for the next chapter!
Robotics stories are my favorite kind!~
Freaking hurry up man!
Doun't tazse me bro'a!!!
(don't tase me bro!!!)
Dishonored is a great game, I hope you update this soon!
Kidney punch is a DBZ abridged reference
the title is a markiplier reference if im not mistaken
It's been a long time since I've seen a new fucking CGotG story. I thought they died out after LoHAVs made it easier to do the same thing without having to coordinate story lines.
Sadly, I was mistaken.
the doorman seems like a reference to the one in Men In Black, if i'm not wrong.
5291979 CGotG?
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Yes, yes the CGoTG verse is old and overused as fuck, but to be honest I never intended this story to fall within that universe;
I don't even think this really counts as a chess game fic. If anything, I just used the whole: " human is sucked into equestria via Deus Ex Machina" thing as more of a writing prompt to start off the story, so I have no real desire to fit into that cluster fuck of a mass colab.
But I do see your point
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Eh, I might try it out, then.
can any one spot the reference in the chapters name? thumbs up if ya do