This started off simply as a Troll fic to clear my mind and get rid of some writer's block. But after watching the Season 3 Premier I realized it could easily be reworked into a legitimate AU Crystal Pony Fic.
Note: I started writing this Pre-Season 3. I've redid it a lot. I might upload the original under a different title sometime later.
Second Note: I suck a summaries, so bear with me.
What did I do? Why did I do it? I really don't know. Up till now I didn't even know I did something.
I'm Twilight Sparkle, Student to Princess Celestia and Element of Magic. I've been Banished for reasons unknown to myself. I hope to get back to Canterlot and clear up this whole mess.
Chapters (2)
I'd like to see this completed. Have a word with your editor, I spotted a few grammatical errors. Watch how you word sentences, some of them were a bit strange. Sorry if this sounds negative, I just like things to be polished and well presented. Please, carry on with this story, I'll definitely read the rest!
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Thank you. I'm sorry about that. I was in a rush this morning when a submitted it. I'll take a look at it and see what you mean. Now that its up I dont feel the pressure of writing it as much as i did before.
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Don't be sorry, its absolutely fine. I just got confused with how you worded some of the sentences. For example in the first chapter you wrote, "Sometimes it was a death". I don't really understand what you are trying to say. The death of whom? A family member or a random pony? Does it imply being accused as of murder?
In the second paragraph you wrote, "Never seeing those you love even again". I assume that "even" should be "ever".
I did this in a few minutes just to highlight the type of problem you should be looking for. Again, I'm sorry if this seems very negative, (and I assure you it isn't supposed to be), but I just like to be helpful.
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Oh I understand. I'm not offended in the slightest. I thank you for helping me out.
Now I'm off to fix stuffs.