A series of natural disasters has befallen the peaceful world of Equestria. Pegasi and Unicorn alike have both fallen, attempting to change the fate of their homeland. But the end draws near for the ponies of Equestria, but the journey, the journey is far, from over.
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Ok, well that took awhile. After my first sad fanfiction, I looked at the areas that were rusty, tried to fix them and gave it another go. I feel that the ideas here are presented stronger and the emotions and dialogue flows better. So tell me what you think, any and all criticism is appreciated
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I like it, this was nicely made.
uumm, why does it still say incomplete? that seemed like a pretty definite end to me.
1584870 crap, coulda sworn i changed that
I just finished reading this...at school, im crying and everyone is looking at me :(
Aww. This is so sad.
do you mind if i use the storm in my own story (the morale and events will be diffrent but i like the unbeatable storm idea)
1849888 Yea sure if the events are different no problem :)
Honestly when Rainbow started flying at the storm I thought/hoped that she would cause a sonic Rainboom that would push away and or destroy the storm