Made a few changes to chapter 2 of The Edge of Darkness. I personally thought a lot of the lines were corny and awkward, especially Sombra's dialogue. In order to procrastinate before going to bed I edited most of the story to make everything seem more realistic and dark. Feel free to read over it or not.
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The Edge of Darkness is interesting, I like your take on his past.
6020 The Forgotten Pegasus, near the end where Sonic Spark first appears in the story
Where could I see Sonic Spark's picture?
6010 yea i made her a few hours ago and posted her awhile ago
6009 I have seen Blitz but not Sonic Spark yet. I would like to see her