When Alphion, the spirit of darkness erased Rainbow Dash from history he went to the spirit of time, Temporaz. He fooled Temporaz into erasing Rainbow Dash from history. Her removal screwed up the timeline and the temporal flow. This caused the worlds of Equestria and Earth to slightly merge, transforming Anne Halavan into a pony. She meets up with Rainbow Dash and Blitz, who work together to find out how this happened. With Temporaz weakened from the merging timelines and Angealla weakened from resurrecting Dash and Blitz, Alphion's power continues to grow. Yet again, he plans to strike at Equestria....
Chapters (10)
feels as rushed as the end of the previous story which I finished reading 10 minutes ago
479401 I seem to get that a lot that my stories are rushed. I'll do my best to work on it but I'm having some difficulty but I"m working on it :)
480185
still its better to have a rushed story than an unpublished story >_>
...Well, we're screwed.
Can't wait to read more! 
498670 lol don't worry we're not screwed, oh and just as saying in case you or any pony else was wondering, this isn't going to be as grueling or scary as what you saw in Alphion's nightmare previously, but theres still gonna be some pretty freaky parts.
i just dont see how they will get out of this one
:D
hoping for more chapters later on
638237 TBH i still need to fully develop in my head a logical escape but thanks for reading hope you enjoy it
now, if you could just work out the grammar mistakes, itd be perfect...
638560 I didn't notice any (i'm a write not an editor) but i'll get someone else to read it and have them help me correct them. thanks for pointing that out ;)
not bad not bad
:)
lets see...
mweehehehehh
CLIFFHANGER!!!!!
wait, Im thinking something up right now....
Angealla and Temporaz have been deleted, never to come back again....
Rainbow Dash and Blitz do not belong in any timeline.....
I feel like that if this story has a "good ending", that Blitz and Rainbow will become the new spirits
695035 You know I've actually never really thought about that, but it doesn't seem like a bad idea, grrrr now i need to do some more thinking lol
FUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUU
CLIFFHANGERS!!!!!
698672 =P
and its over...
there were some errors
but an ending to a story is another celebration just waiting to happen
:)
not sure if should be sad that the story is over or happy that it actually ended before being wrecked more....
after all, this ending was RUSHED like hell.....
I like the good ending, but it seems a bit rushed. I mean what happens to Anne? Or what about the other 5 EoH? What about that human filly, what happened to her? It's a good story, bit I'm still left with questions.
O.o
memory wipe?
governer of time can do that?
nice to see that this story is coming to a close :)
good work
811918 don't say governor, it makes me think of temporaz as a politician. xD
812500 god of time can do that?
...
then again he is god...of time
im not even going to ask now
814476 well Alphion was able to remove RD from existence. I guess you could say each spirit had like there own special ability so that none of them became more powerful kind of like checks and balances (fuck more politics) i guess. Because Alphion was never supposed to be evil. But it's never smart to make someone rule over the plane of darkness and expect them to remain a good being.
This series was great, only thing was I'd like a bit more closure if this is the series ending, if not I can't wait for the next story