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:rainbowlaugh::rainbowlaugh::rainbowlaugh::rainbowlaugh::rainbowlaugh::rainbowlaugh::rainbowlaugh: HELP ME; I'M CHOKING ON AIR

this is cool. I WANT MORE

Oh god, this is awesome.

Well, you made me laugh. Fave'd.

Interesting, but I don't think Tourrettes makes you write things.

My sides... I'm dying...

1556059 no, you're right, it doesn't. this is just exaggerated

Regardless of the fact that I'm pretty sure this isn't how tourettes works, this is quite funny.

1556262 well it is a disorder and should be made aware despite how it works. unfortunately my story isn't quite giving any hope

i....i can't... breathe!

Haha :rainbowlaugh:
I remember this from Fanfiction.net :scootangel:
(I think)

You deserve the nobel prize...javascript:smilie(':rainbowlaugh:');

Comment posted by Sorren deleted Dec 24th, 2012

I read it in Fanfiction.net a while ago. Loved it. I hope you keep working on this.

"INSTEAD OF MILK PINKIE PIE TAKES A PISS IN THE CAKE BATTER!" Cheerliee shook. "THAT'S WHY THEY TASTE LIKE SHIT!"

I knew it!

1556313 XD Have an e-cookie if you get this:

John? ...Breathe, John....

1556502 and i'll honor it fairly

Oh Celestia! Make her meet with Luna! Make them fight with the ROYAL CAPS LOCK!!!! DOOO EEEETTT!!!!

Every time she loses it, I imagine she gets a growley deep voice. :scootangel:

Comment posted by An A10 Warthog deleted Dec 24th, 2012

1557860 sorry to hear that, but i listed a warning

1557868
I didn't read. People with Tourette's don't really act that way either.

1557878 so i take it you didn't read the author's note at the end of the 1st chapter. if you feel offended, sorry to hear about it.

1557890
I'm not offended. I was just stating that it is, in fact, offensive.

a link to tourettes awareness site is posted at the bottom of the first chapter so people can get a better idea of the disorder and if wished to donate they can.

Took you long enough to start posting shit on here, nigga.

1558208

Don't worry bro, you're rolling with the kool kats now.

1558214 mmmm not really, i just post old stuff here. ff.net still gets my attention

1558232

Bah. Loyalty is for chumps, man.

1558399guess i'm a chump then

Very nice story! Humor, puns, and wordplay to have fun with. That being said if someone could give me a hand? Im trying to post my story but i dont know why, when im done editing my story says it has zero words! Is it my format im using, which can be word.txt or just microsoft word. If anyone can help with the advice I need Id really appreciate it.......And once again great story so far!

1559414 only advice i can offer is to back up your saves from microsoft word or whatever you use just incase that happens. copy and paste from whatever you're using and slap it onto the story by putting it in, make sure to keep pressing save often just incase, then go back to edit and hit publish if you haven't already. really i can't help that much because i don't exactly know what the problem is.

"PISS COMES OUT YOUR DICK BITCH!" Cheerliee shouted.

Scootaloo look left then right nervously, "Um... can you use it in a sentence?"

"INSTEAD OF MILK PINKIE PIE TAKES A PISS IN THE CAKE BATTER!" Cheerliee shook. "THAT'S WHY THEY TASTE LIKE SHIT!"

:rainbowderp: WTF, Cheerilee....

"HOLY SHIT THEY GOT FOUR CHEESE PIZZA ON SALE!" Cheerilee shouted.

:rainbowlaugh: I have the same exact reaction whenever the pizza is on sale.
Keep up the awesome work! :pinkiehappy:

this is the second funniest story i've ever read.(beauty of the beast.):rainbowlaugh::rainbowkiss:

"Cheri..." Little Pumpkin Cake tried to say.

"Awww..." Mrs. Cake coed her daugher, "She's trying to say Cheerilee."

"Cheri..." Pound Cake tried to say also.

"You two can do it." Mr. Cake encouraged his kids.

"Cheri... FUCK!" The cake twins squealed.

I was cracking up. My mom thought I was crazy.

"Skyrim!" Pip raised his hand.

Hand?

I need new sides. I made the mistake of reading durning school.

"Skyrim!" Pip raised his hand.

"Disneyland?" Snails asked.

"Ohio?" Sweetie Belle said.

Snails has best answer.

"Princess Zelda?" Pip questioned.

"Charley Sheen?" Snips brought up.

Pip gets a mustache for that answer. :moustache:

"New Jersey?" Sweetie Belle brought up.

"Neo Tokyo?" Scootaloo raised her hoof.

"The mall?" Diamond Tiara said out loud.

"Can I go to the bathroom?" Snips asked.

"Zombie land?" Snails said.

FUCK YEAH, TOKYO! Scoot gets best answer there. :scootangel:

I would give these children A's; Cheerilee is just being a bitch. :trollestia:

Wait...Snails can write that well?

Cherliee needs a new job. :pinkiehappy:

:rainbowlaugh: My sides! Please! Make it stop!

1569055 Nope, it was Snips.

1569952

Meh. I was tired. Yeah I meant him or whatever.

I think you made a slight mistake with the italics near the beginning.

How dare you make fun of Tourettes1!1!! Lol, just kidding.
I have a soft spot for vulgar humor, so I lolled. Also, I have Tourettes syndrome. Not the swearing kind though, more facial twitches and stuff. Gonna read the rest of this tomorrow, will drop another comment then :twilightsmile:

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