Chapter 10: Fluttershy and Snowflake
It was a few days after the Ponyville hurricane event that Fluttershy received a visit from somepony she never expected. It was Snowflake, the beefiest pony in all of Ponyville. Despite his massive size and tiny wings, he was actually a very good flyer.
“Oh,” said Fluttershy. “Hello, Snowflake…um…what brings you by?”
“Well,” began Snowflake, a bit nervous. “I wanted to say how great you did the other day with the hurricane and all.”
“Oh, thank you very much” said Fluttershy. “Although I already got a lot of thanks…including from you I think.”
“Yeah, I did,” he said. “I just wanted to see you again.”
“But why?” she asked.
“Well, you probably don’t remember,” he said. “But we were in flight camp together. I looked a lot different back then. I was a lot smaller and didn’t have a cutie mark. My mane was shaggier too.”
Fluttershy looked at him for a moment, and she did begin to remember.
“Oh yes,” she said. “I remember now…you defended me one day when some of the other ponies were picking on me. You ended up getting beaten up and seriously hurt…I’m really sorry about that.”
“No no,” he said. “Don’t be sorry. If not for that I wouldn’t have found my passion for lifting weights. Obviously that’s what my cutie mark is for. I overdid it some I admit, but I was determined to not be weak anymore.”
“I can understand that,” she said.
“And while I got aggressive and thought about causing harm to those who picked on me,” he said. “I never acted on it. I thought about how you always remained a kind hearted pony. My appearance eventually got ponies thinking I was some sort of brute.”
Snowflake got a sad look on his face. He then looked at himself in a mirror, letting out a sigh. Fluttershy’s favorite animal, Angel bunny, approached him and started nuzzling up against his leg.
“Oh my,” said Fluttershy. “Angel doesn’t do that often with strangers.”
“He’s a cute little guy,” said Snowflake, patting him on the head.
“So why did you come here,” she asked. “Just to tell me all of this?”
“Because,” he said. “I wasn’t sure if you’d talk to me otherwise. It wouldn’t be the first time somepony didn’t want to talk to me because of how I look. And I defended you in flight camp, because I always liked you.”
“Oh,” she said surprised, beginning to blush. “I see…why didn’t you ever say anything?”
“I was shy,” he said. “Ironic I know. Also it wasn’t long after I got beat up that you ended up in Ponyville. I didn’t know about that at the time, and I was finishing up flight school…I’m sure a pretty filly like you gets asked out all the time. I know we haven’t really seen each other much…but I was hoping you’d like to get t know me better.”
Fluttershy went over to Snowflake and gave him a hug.
“That would be wonderful,” said Fluttershy.
It was a few weeks after casual get togethers and chitchats that Fluttershy and Snowflake decided to start going steady. But they didn’t want to announce anything to anypony till they knew it was something that was going to be long term. Snowflake, despite his large frame, was a very gentle stallion who had a great love for animals. He couldn’t communicate with them like Fluttershy could, but they still warmed up to him quickly. Once Angel showed he liked him a lot the other animals knew that he was somepony they could trust. It was a couple months into their relationship that both exchanged the words “I love you.” Even so they didn’t really tell anypony that they were together. It was the spa trip with Rainbow Dash and Rarity that Fluttershy told them about her relationship with Snowflake.
“I…um…I told Rarity and Rainbow Dash about our relationship during our weekly spa trip,” she said in her usual timid tone. “I hope you don’t mind.”
“Fine with me,” he said. “I’ve actually told a couple friends myself.”
“You did,” she said surprised.
“Yeah,” he said. “But I told them not to tell anypony else about it. But I had to tell somepony. I’ve been super excited to be dating one of the sweetest, kindest, prettiest mares in all of Ponyville.”
“Aw,” she said with a bright blush. “You’re such a sweetie. I suppose we don’t have a reason to keep it a secret anymore. And I’m sure Pinkie Pie would love to throw us a party.”
“A party does sound nice,” he said.
Both gave each other little smiles and then a good, long kiss on the lips.
“I love you, Snowflake,” she said, hiding her face a little in her mane.
“I love you too, Fluttershy,” he said.
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Chapter 10 will hopefully be the only real short chapter. I didn't think it needed a whole lot of elaborating. Hope you all enjoy it. Also I really wish they just had a smiling Fluttershy emoticon on here. Oh well, I'll just go with this one
And then they f&%ked.
1571383 So crude. But hey I'm not gonna lie and say they don't have a sex life. I just don't feel the need to flat out say it.
1571466 You're on the Internet, buddy. Best get used to it. At least I censored it. If I hadn't said it, someone else would have. Another generic platitude.
1571490 No I didn't mean it like that. And you didn't have to censor it. Shit I curse all the fucking time. See? lol And since this is the internet, and I'm all about the power of free George Carlin's Seven Dirty Words You Can Never Say On Television: shit, piss, fuck, cunt, cocksucker, motherfucker, and tits.
1571518 Well at the moment I don't have a lot going on, till I get a job at least, so these ideas come to me pretty quick. I don't usually have any of this planned out really. Originally this was gonna be more a direct sequel to my previous story, but the more I started working on it the more I started thinking about how to include more of the mane six. Now the romance with Rainbow Dash and Bookworm was always planned.
1571517 I wasn't offended either. But intonation is lost in text... so...
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Snowflake scares the shit out of me.
And everyone got together and had a massive orgy.
The End.
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Rule 34!
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Love the story so far. Love the fact that you gave Snowflake a sensitive side. Can't help but wonder if you're going to put a chapter in where Applejack and Pinkie will find a stallion. Hopefully you do.
1572431 I'll hopefully think of something for them, there's already a lot going on. Though this one will have more chapters than the last story, I may have to save their romances for another story. But we'll cross that bridge when we get to it.
1572431 Also I'm a fan of the gentle giant. Probably because of the Princess Bride (one of my all time favorite movies) but I love the idea of a big intimidating looking character turning out to be a big ol softy.
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Sweet, though I gotta say it's gonna be tough for Pinkie cause she just loves everyone. Because you're right there is a lot going on. F.Y.I. I also love Princess Bride.
1572488 I'm sure you and others have already noticed I've made a reference to the Princess Bride in both of my stories. Yeah, Pinkie would be a tough one given her friendly personality. I guess the key would be to find a pony who's about making sure she's happy. True she's happy making others happy, but I bet she'd love somepony to do all they can to make her happy as well. I hope that's not too much of a tongue twister there. lol
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Not at all it makes sense to have a stallion like that for Pinkie. The question for you is will it be an OC or will you add more to a character like snowflake.
1572520 Well there aren't many notable male ponies in the show. I'll have to look through a list of male ponies in the show, which thankfully there's the MLP Wiki, to give me some ideas of what to do.
Fezzik is one of my favorite characters in that movie!
I love this exchange especially!
So we have TwiMac(which seems to be taking a backseat this story), Rainbow Dash/Book Worm, and FlutterFlake.
Do go on.
1583544 I still plan to have some things going on for TwiMac, but for this one it made sense to focus more on the others.
Ya know, I usually only comment on new chapters, but I've been thinking about this one. I post on this chapter because I FINALLY figured out who Snowflake reminds me of!!
If he talked more in the show, THIS is what he'd sound like!!!
1572520 do Breaburn
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And a