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Boy, this was pretty fun to write. I may do a sequel. :rainbowlaugh: A Happy Nightmare Night to everypony who read this! Thank you all, and if you enjoyed, don't forget to fav and thumbs up. :twilightsmile:

awesome...:ajbemused:

happy Halloween/Nightmare night chain...

1542546 Happy Nightmare Night bro! :pinkiehappy:

I felt my blood run cold by the last bit of this story. Well done. Love it, love it, LOVE IT.

1542658 Hehehe. I'm glad you enjoyed it! :pinkiehappy:

Damn nature YOU SCARY!!!! just like this story! that ending had me in chills, but i wasen't afraid!....okay i was a little

still a great chapter!!! perfect way to end my nightmare night!

HAPPY NIGHTMARE NIGHT! HAPPY NIGHTMARE NIGHT TO ALL!

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And a Happy Nightmare Night to you too, bro! :twilightsmile: Don't forget to fav if you haven't.

There aren't many horror stories that have sent shivers down my spine.
This one did.
Bravo sir, bravo.

1542769 Thank you so much! That makes me happy. :twilightsmile:

Wow, that was actually scary! Made me shiver especially at the end.

1542923 Yay! :yay: Thank you, my friend. :twilightsmile:

1543141 I may write a sequel or a collab sequel. Don't know yet. :twilightsmile:

DAm mna now that was petty scary.

1543316 Are you still buzzed? :rainbowhuh: I'm coming down off mine, and I've not even slept. Either way, thanks bro. :twilightsmile: Make sure your drunk ass hits the fav button. :rainbowlaugh:

Those stories were actually pretty well done, especially that last one. '

Silver out!

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Damn, that was quick! :rainbowlaugh:

Anyways, it set the mood really well.

Silver out!

1543656 I'm pretty fast on the gun. :raritywink:

I am glad you enjoyed it.

Chain, out!

God I adore these gory scenes, They give me a warm feeling inside of me :pinkiecrazy:

Oh yeah, I like this, ALOT

COLD CHILLS ABOUND!!!:derpytongue2:....but not scary to me but i did smile my ass of though :pinkiecrazy:....funnier than scary to me:twilightsheepish:.... but awesome anyways:pinkiehappy:

i have a couple scary stories if you would like to hear them...i told you one name already

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hey.....i don't know why ok....but i did laugh my ass of when the colt showed up.....they fucked up.....thats prolly why i did laugh and stuff.

You sir, deserve more everything on this story. (I may be a couple days late, but;) Happy belated Nightmare Night/All Hallows Day.

Bucking chills man...

1548635 Yeah, I am a bit upset it didn't get more views. :fluttershyouch: Oh well Thank you and Happy late Nightmare Night! :twilightsmile:

Haha I wish they could have shown the pic of the colt with his eyes gouged out. *devil laugh*:pinkiecrazy:

1580381 Look in the top right corner of the cover art...

Ohhhhhhhhhhhhhh. ew:pinkiesick: But it isn't like I haven't seen a pony with no eyes. crying blood.:pinkiecrazy:

I wasn't scared at all :fluttershbad:


oh my freaking god....that freaking gave me chills....and its the middle of the day and bright out and I am covered in goose bumps....please write more stories like this you have a gift! Also the one who posted about the cover art.....they are right! That only made the chills worse damnit!

1885063 Thank you. :twilightsmile: I do plan on making a sequel(ish) to this story when I have the time. Maybe when Act II of Feral is over.

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please please do, I know a few ghost stories you might like, but your the writer not me ^^

:pinkiehappy:

Great story! I hope you do add to it.

At first I thought Twilight was pulling a "tell them it's true to make the story scarier" move, but then... Wow. You're good. :twilightsmile:

:moustache: Spooky... :twilightoops::raritydespair::applejackconfused:

good luck having another sleep over after that lol
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Very nice! :twilightsmile: The ending was the cherry on top! :raritydespair:

Wow... horror story, its awesome if this is a movie

Hello there! I did a reading of this awesome story!

I'm not usually a fan of dark/horror fics, but in the case of this story (or rather, STORIES), I am making a HUGE exception.

I like that this fic is unique in the fact that it tells not one, but three stories within the same chapter, and each one of them was quite entertaining and unusual. I really like how open-ended the ending was as well, with that ghostly prescence literally haunting in the background.

Anyway, keep up the good work. :twilightsmile:

Just finished reading this holy crap the cover art in the top right corner is terrifying did you make "sent" because I recognized that colt with missing eyes.

I have to say Twilight wins on the most creepy. Geez, now that was awesome. I felt like Twilight, Rarity, and Applejack were acually telling me the stories! I still have shivers going up my spine!:twilightoops:

6304750 yep "Don't be afraid," what a creepy end.

5329692 the meaning of life.

When I saw the pony in the corner that I think is Day Shine, I crapped my pants and fell off my chair and died.

holy crap, that was scary as hell. :twilightoops:

I think I need some milk, cookies, a blanket, a hug and a new pair of pants...

Song that might fit this story well: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=RGwzwL4wovI

Meh. it’s alright, I guess. The ending was corny and cliche, yet the other stories told by the characters were fairly interesting. I did feel like the characters were a bit strange, though. They didn’t feel entirely natural or true to how they usually behaved. The inspiration for this story’s setting is fairly obvious, and I have no problems with that. The ending was really my biggest gripe with it. Hope to see your work in the future! You’ve certainly got some neat ideas, you just need to communicate them a bit better, is all.

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