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Star Wars: The Old Republic- Conflicting Elements - Barrobroadcaster



In a galaxy divided between darkness and light, a discovery is made that may change the war forever.

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The Treaty of Canterlot

Voss, near crash site of Imperial Dark Destroyer-class vessel Venomous

Brazon was relieved as he spotted the two dropships fly towards them. This time, Republic dropships. General Tethra stepped out of one of them onto the Voss soil. Brazon and Carwin saluted her as she approached. "Ma'am." they both said. "At ease, at ease. You both just captured an Imperial flagship, rescued an entire alien civilization and survived a crash landing from high orbit." "We had a lot of help ma'am." Brazon said. "No doubt. Now, how to get these..." "Ponies ma'am." "Ponies home, who is in charge of them?" "I believe I have that responsibility." Celestia says walking over.

"Miss, on behalf of the Galactic Republic, we would like to apologize for your peoples' involvement in this crisis." General Tethra says, a hand over her heart. "I am relieved that none of our people were harmed." "That's not entirely true." Celestia said, looking to the stars. "It is our desire to cooperate with the Republic in creating a lasting peace for both our universes." Celestia said. "Peace is a lie." They all turned to see Lahk approaching from behind them. "We must all work to make it true." he said. "Agreed. Let us all work together to make peace true on every world." Celestia said. "And I know exactly how to start." Lahk said with a smile.

Canterlot Castle, live holonet broadcast

"This is Barroh Catasbrod for Republic Action News. The conflict on Voss has ended today following the discovery of a new dimension a week earlier. The inhabitants of this parallel universe were captured and taken aboard an Imperial cruiser but have since been rescued and returned to their world by Republic Special Forces. The leader of this new world has prepared an announcment for the galaxy, we now go live to Canterlot Castle for the report."

The courtyard of Canterlot was packed with ponies and members of the Republic, diplomats and representatives from across the galaxy and across Equestria had filled the castle town. Cameras pointed at the stage as General Tethra and Princess Celestia came into view and took the podium. "People of the Republic, ponies of Equestria, honored guests from the far reaches of existance. We are gathered here today to make a historic announcement." The crowd grew quiet as the general spoke.

"Our galaxy has become a much larger place. We now have new friends, new allies from another dimension. As we look to the future, peace doesn't seem like a dream anymore. It is my pleasure to announce that the Republic and the sovreign world of Equestria will work together to make peace a reality across both our universes." Applause erupted from the audience. "It is with that in mind that the Republic has passed a new legislation, the Treaty of Canterlot, to signify our goal to work together towards peace!"

"This treaty, signed by representatives of Equestria, the Republic and the Empire and ratified by the Senate establishes Equestria as a sovreign world and an official member of the Galactic Republic!" The crowd erupted with joy. Darth Karux took the stage with a smile on his face. "As a member of the Dark Council, I would like to announce that the Empire officially recognizes this treaty." Derpy flew near him. "The Empire would also like to announce that it offically apologizes for attacking Equestria and will aid in the reconstruction of Ponyville on the neutral planet of Voss." The Wonderbolts flew overhead at the announcment. Princess Celestia took the podium. "We are also happy to announce that we have chosen Princess Luna to represent us in the Galactic Senate! Presenting, Senator Luna!" "IT IS MY HONOR TO ACCEPT THIS POSITION ON BEHALF OF ALL EQUESTRIA!" Luna said in the Royal Canterlot voice. The crowd was momentarily deafened to be followed by outbursts of laughter. Princess Celestia returned to the podium. "Thank you Luna." she says into the mic.

"And finally, this treaty allows the people of Voss free passage to Equestria and establishes Voss as neutral territory in the war between the Galactic Republic and the Sith Empire." Celestia said. "The Republic and the Empire are two conflicting elements. This war has taken a toll on us all. We may never know a galaxy without conflict but we can know a galaxy with peace. Peace is not the absence of conflict but merely the times when conflict is resolved enough that we are able to enjoy tranquility. For now, our conflict is too big to ignore. We must work together to resolve it so that we may all enjoy peace once again." Celestia concluded her speech to more applause.

Brazon sat at a stone table in the back with Carwin, Zequill and even Lahk. He sipped on his drink, some kind of purple concoction the locals made. It tasted sweet and he was happy he didn't crave some form of alcohol. "You really think there can be peace between the Republic and the Empire?" Carwin asked. "Well, I represent the Republic. Lahk, you represent the Empire still right?" "Don't remind me." Lahk said. "What I mean is, we're getting along just fine right now. Isn't that peace between the Republic and the Empire?" "I'll drink to that." Lahk said. They clicked their glasses. "I'm done with the Sith though. I've joined the Jedi. They made me Master Zequill's padawan. Besides, he needs someone to see for him anyway. At least when he's here." Zequill nodded. "I don't need sight to tell me you still cry at night." "Hey!" Lahk said. "There is no emotion, there is peace. Fear not my apprentice, we will work on it." Zequill said as he patted the big Sith's back.

General Tethra approached along with Princess Celestia, Luna, Twilight Sparkle, Applejack, Fluttershy, Pinkie Pie, Rainbow Dash and Rarity. "Gentlemen, I'd like you to meet the newest members of Donair Squadron." Brazon and Carwin turned to look. "You're going to be taking on missions directly from myself and the princesses from now on." Brazon and Carwin stood and saluted. "It will be a pleasure to work with you Sargent. For peace on all our worlds." Twilight said. "For peace." Brazon said. "Peace?! Who needs peace and quiet? Right now it's time to PARTAY!" Pinkie said, wheeling the Party Cannon into the courtyard and launching it. The group laughed as fire lit the sky above Canterlot, fire of peace.

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* Aboard the Freighter "TRAITORS LUCK"*
Talak watched the proceedings at Canterlot Castle from the Comm system in his bridge. He knew other smugglers were already taking bets on how long the Empire would keep their word, and he was much less optimistic about the outlook than most others. Still, it was an extraordinary business opportunity. A new dimension had just shown up on the map, and many wealthy people would pay a killing on the black market for goods from this new world. And he would be happy to deliver.
Smiling to himself, Talak set a course for Nar Shadaa.
"No rest for the wicked," He said to himself. "But a big paycheck for the bold."

Meanwhile, in another part of the galaxy...

Quiotous: I feel a Pinkie in the Force...
Kin-ta'hiil: What?
Quiotous: What?
Kin-ta'hiil: You feel a Pinkie in the Force?
Quiotous: I didn't say that...
Kin-ta'hiil: 4.bp.blogspot.com/-9B5oDjm1wgM/T3gFww7jqlI/AAAAAAAABoY/c79rs-PrfPM/s1600/ORLY+Wallpapers.png



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We need more chapters please.

Meanwhile, on the Defender class corvette, R.S.S. Firefly (R.S.S. standing for 'Republic Starship), Jedi Knight Donnaa is disturbed from her meditation as she senses a great disturbance in the force, as if billions of people cried out in confusion, and suddenly began to party.

Still banging head on wall.

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Shakes head in disappointment, slowly closes the door on you and walks away.

6915247 I'm sorry that I insulted you, It was late and I shouldn't have been so harsh on your story, Obviously people enjoy this story and to be honest I Love the Idea that you have, and your the only one who agrees with me that the Force and Magic are not the same thing.

However, what ticked me off last night was the fact the writing, and how you displayed your characters. All of the dialogue was within the same paragraph, making it almost impossible to tell who is talking. On your characters, they seemed so bland, while they did had their own opinions, I didn't feel any emotion at all from them and that is a mistake that I, admittedly, am getting tired of. What I was most upset about was the loss of potential, you had great Ideas an example is the fact that neither Jedi nor Sith are able to use the Force in the pony world, That is genus and It could of been both exploited and explored, But it was manly used as a plot devise for a sudden reformation for two of the villains, which I will say is clever but again sudden.

But, I do want to reinforce my apology, What I did and said earlier was immature and inexcusable, and I hope you can forgive me now that I've finally given a proper reason of why I do not like your story.

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