remember episode where Rarity told about her cutie mark? and now i will tell you it in more description...
Hello! and i am Rarity!i am beautiful and geneorous!i am the best but still i have a lot of stories which yu must read! Bye!
remember episode where Rarity told about her cutie mark? and now i will tell you it in more description...
WHAT?!?BLOOD!!
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Another amaznig musya_musya fa nfic!![:yay:](https://static.fimfiction.net/images/emoticons/yay.png)
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hope to se more1! Rsrity is my favirite pony and I want ot read about her pasdt!
99367 THANK YOU VERY MUCH AND I TRY TO MAKE PEOPLE ENJOY MY STORY LIKE YOU
BUT I HAVE BAD EDITOR AND IF SOMEONE WANTS TO EDIT MY STORY JUST WRITE TO ME!
I WILL BE REALLY PLEASED![:raritywink:](https://static.fimfiction.net/images/emoticons/raritywink.png)
cool story bro!![:pinkiecrazy:](https://static.fimfiction.net/images/emoticons/pinkiecrazy.png)
I love it. Very tragic
A few grammar issues but nothing to worry about!
is this your first fic or is there more?
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Commas. I absolutely hate people who don't use commas.