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  • T My Little Panty

    A My Little Pony/Panty and Stocking with Garterbelt Crossover
    6,026 words · 1,889 views  ·  58  ·  1
  • E A Friend Like Trixie

    Trixie becomes a genie, and aims to take revenge on Twilight Sparkle, while stuck serving Pinkie Pie
    7,044 words · 1,396 views  ·  36  ·  1

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  • 125w, 2d
    The Downtime Explanation You All Deserve

    First off, let me just say that I'm sorry to have just dropped off the face of the Earth on you people. I know a lot of people want me to continue writing Of Ponies and Plumbers at the very least, so let's start from the beginning.

    Initially, the break from all my stories came from a bout of Writer's Block. I was going to re-focus my attention on My Little Panty for a bit, but the chapter I had drafted up just became way too asinine for me to stomach, and I was trying to find an alternative method. I had the next chapter for OPAP in my head, but I didn't want to touch it until I reached a certain point in My Little Panty.

    From there, I hit exam season at school, and I was forced to turn my attention to my studies, as well as applying for college, so all my stories, including the ones on my profile, took a back-seat.

    Which brings me to the present. I'm at a rather sensitive time in my life right now, I've been forced to leave my apartment, and I'm currently staying at the Men's Mission. I'm currently looking at rooms to rent, and once I find a place and move in, (which, god willing, shouldn't take longer than a week and a half from now), I'll try to get to work on my stories again.

    I've actually been penning up some drafts for some other (non-pony) stories, and I've been thinking of how to move forward with OPAP and My Little Panty, my two main focuses right now. So sit tight, you should be getting something this summer.

    -EverSoNitro, The Homeless Romantic

    1 comments · 208 views
  • 135w, 5h
    Mario & Luigi: Of Ponies and Plumbers: The Equestrian Soundtrack

    After reading Sweetie's Mansion, a phenominal story that everyone should go read after finishing this blog entry, I realized that M&L:OPaP could greatly benefit from having a soundtrack as well. So, I got together a few songs to make up the Equestrian side of the story. I'll be putting together a similar soundtrack for the Mushroom Kingdom as well as I progress, and I'll be dropping these music links within the story itself, so be sure to read through after I've done so to get the full effect.

    Carousal Boutique (Introduction)

    Mareshroom Beach

    Princess Peach’s Arrival

    Arrival in Canterlot

    Bowser’s Troops


    Uninvited Guests

    Equestrian Battle


    The Great and Powerful Trixie (Overworld)

    The Great and Powerful Trixie (Battle)

    Diamond Dog Mountains (Overworld)

    Diamond Dog Mountains (Underground)

    Equestrian Boss Battle

    Everfree Forest

    Pinkie Pie’s Peppy Pepper Party

    Derpy and the Doctor

    Vacant Ponyville

    Fake Nightmare Moon (Overworld)

    Fake Nightmare Moon (Battle)


    Bowser’s Castle

    Sweet Apple Acres

    Everfree Acres

    1 comments · 205 views
  • 138w, 4d
    Story Concept: The Stars Will Aid in Her Escape

    So, before I continue with my stories, I've had a bit of a brainwave. I've come up with a sort of bridge story that would connect some of my other stories, such as My Little Panty and Of Ponies and Plumbers, centering around the Nightmare Moon Prophecy from the first episodes. Basically, certain characters in the stories would claim themselves to be one of the "stars" that helped release Nightmare Moon, and once all four are revealed in their particular story, I'd write the bridge story, titled above, as sort of a climax to the story woven between the other four.

    So far, I've decided that My Little Panty will definitely be a part of this, being the story to kick off the plot line, though I'm not sure of Of Ponies and Plumbers' inclusion. And I'm not even sure if I want to be the sole author behind this little project.

    If you're interested in becoming part of this, let me know in the comments below, and if I respond, send me a personal message detailing the characters you might want to include, I.E. a brief description of the character themselves, their "home story", their motivation for releasing Nightmare Moon, and any other information you might feel necessary. Keep in mind that none the four "stars" will be the leader of the group, and that a separate character will serve as their ringleader in The Stars Will Aid in Her Escape. Also, keep in mind that one "star" doesn't necessarily mean one character. Two characters can be one "star" if they work together in their role as such.

    If I do choose to include others, The Stars Will Aid in Her Escape will be a collaborative story, with all authors getting input. It will be posted under my account, however, though I will give credit where it's due.

    Looking forward to hearing from you!

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  • ...

Princess Peach Toadstool of the Mushroom Kingdom has come to Equestria on important diplomatic business, bringing with her the superstars of the Mushroom Kingdom, Mario and Luigi. But, when Discord is released, and aids Bowser's forces in invading Equestria and kidnapping Peach, Celestia, and Luna, Twilight and her friends must work together with Mario and Luigi on an adventure spanning two kingdoms, to rescue the princesses, defeat Bowser and Discord, and return Equestria and the Mushroom Kingdom to their former glory.

First Published
31st Dec 2011
Last Modified
4th Mar 2013
#1 · 151w, 5d ago · · · Chapter 1 ·

LOL! The premise made me laugh. Sounds interesting, I'll give it a read.

#2 · 151w, 5d ago · · · Chapter 1 ·

This...does not look good.:twilightoops:

#3 · 151w, 5d ago · · · Chapter 1 ·

Oh my sweet Celestia this is awesome! Tracking!:pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy::pinkiegasp:

#4 · 151w, 5d ago · · · Chapter 1 ·

Sweet, I love Mario crossovers! Tracked. :moustache:

#5 · 151w, 5d ago · · · Chapter 1 ·

This is beanbean kingdom all over again.

I can see a few successful combos here:

Twilight/Mario: friendship's fire

AJ/Mario: hammer and anvil

Rainbow dash/ luigi: storm's fury

Fluttershy/Luigi: mesmeric stare. (weegee and fluttershy stares into your soul)

#6 · 151w, 5d ago · · · Chapter 1 ·

This looks good.

#7 · 151w, 5d ago · · · Chapter 2 ·

THIS. IS. SO. AWESOME! :rainbowkiss::rainbowkiss:

#8 · 151w, 5d ago · · · Chapter 2 ·

This is very, very well done so far. I was a bit skeptical, but this is just really good. 5/5. :pinkiehappy:

#9 · 151w, 5d ago · · · Chapter 2 ·

Oh, and I did spot a few minor typos. It seems like you're occasionally using the wrong orientation single/double quotes, which is probably just some bizarre problem with the editor you're using (I'm assuming you're writing this in another program and then copypasting, because otherwise it makes no sense. Oh well, I'll just blame Discord). It's not enough to detract from the story, but you should still look into it.

#10 · 151w, 4d ago · · · Chapter 2 ·

Loved the battle scene.

#11 · 151w, 4d ago · · · Chapter 2 ·

That battle scene was a replica of "superstar saga" and "inside story". Nothing new there.

Just the combos that will be pulled off that I can't stop thinking of: elements of harmony/starpower= good game.

Discord and bowser look like the classic brain and brawn combo. Like wario and waluigi... Oh snap, what about them! We need these guys to stir some crap up like popple and rookie (amnesia struck bowser) from superstar saga.

Make it happen

#12 · 151w, 4d ago · · · Chapter 3 ·


Wario and Waluigi will be showing up, don't worry.

And it will be in Equestria, so you won't have to wait quite as long for them.

#13 · 151w, 4d ago · · · Chapter 1 ·


"Fluttershy/Luigi: mesmeric stare. (weegee and fluttershy stares into your soul) "

#14 · 151w, 4d ago · · · Chapter 3 ·

This is awesome. That's all I need to say.:eeyup:

#15 · 151w, 4d ago · · · Chapter 3 ·

if this were to be a video game.......................

I would buy 3 copies

no wait...................

I would buy 300 COPIESS!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!11

#16 · 151w, 4d ago · 1 · · Chapter 3 ·


Will there be a Trixie/Wario/Waluigi alliance? Because it just seems natural for it to happen.

#17 · 151w, 4d ago · · · Chapter 3 ·


I second that motion... :twilightoops:

#18 · 151w, 4d ago · 1 · · Chapter 2 ·

That Letter is a Hotel Mario reference. My eyes! Curse you discord!!!:raritydespair:

#19 · 151w, 4d ago · 1 · · Chapter 3 ·


It would sound good. Nice to have them show up too.

Now I think about it: Mario and luigi are a fire/thunder duo. Bowser is fire and discord is known for using thunder. The double battle that would ensue will be gargatuan.

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#22 · 151w, 3d ago · · · Chapter 2 ·

Too many mario references. It ruins the atmosphere of the actual story. And for once I would like to see a mario crossover without having to imagine mario and luigi talking. but it is still a good story! :raritywink:

~ Fearanger, Master Shape-Shifter of Canterlot

#23 · 151w, 3d ago · · · Chapter 3 ·


Funny you should say that, because I'd actually like to make this a fangame if I can put a team together.

Nothing's concrete yet, but still, it's something I'd like to do.

#24 · 151w, 3d ago · · · Chapter 3 ·


I don't want to give too many details away. You'll just have to wait and see.

#25 · 151w, 2d ago · · · Chapter 1 ·

All I know is something better get stomped on, or goddess have mercy on your soul.:twilightangry2:

#26 · 151w, 2d ago · · · Chapter 3 ·

Part of me is hoping that the Koopalings make an appearance at some point.

#27 · 151w, 2d ago · · · Chapter 1 ·

Pinkie Pie in the Racoon Suit...pinkie Pie in the Racoon suit.....YES!!!! :pinkiehappy:

Best idea and usage of the Mario series ever. Please do keep puting up the good work. :yay:

#28 · 151w, 2d ago · · · Chapter 2 ·

MUST PLAY GAME!!! :pinkiehappy:

Still this was a nice chapter, as i cannot wait to see how the girls fit with the SUPER MARIO BROS.  :ajsmug:

I mean just Wow, Please do keep up the good work upon such a great tale like this one. :twilightsmile:

#29 · 151w, 2d ago · · · Chapter 3 ·



This is going to be a good laugh, given that like Pinkie Pie, Wario tends to break the fourth wall as well, given the whole Wario Ware inc. thing. :pinkiehappy:

Please do keep up this wonderful tale of yours.:rainbowkiss:

#30 · 150w, 3d ago · · · Chapter 3 ·

Very nice so far. I'd only complain that the story is moving so fast. I mean WHAM! Trixie out of nowhere!

Plus, I was imagining this to be a story with Mario and Luigi having full conversations, but I'm surprised you keep it simple and perfectly style it after the M+L games. Great work!

#31 · 150w, 21h ago · 1 · · Chapter 3 ·

I forsee Trixie, Wario, and Waluigi teaming up to be that group of idiots that don't leave you alone even when you've bashed their skulls in for the fifth time. Not that there's anything wrong with that.

My only complaint is that we need more Yoshi! :flutterrage:

#32 · 146w, 3d ago · 1 · · Chapter 2 ·

HAHA i love the reference you did for the cdi mario game :rainbowlaugh:

#33 · 145w, 1d ago · · · Chapter 4 ·



For someone like me, that have played all the Mario and Luigi games this is amazing!

It not only recreates the feeling from FiM, but also adds the quirkiness, the humor and the RPG feeling right into Equestria, all the classic parts like the initial fight with Bowser and the optional tutorial, the strange world, the fights with the mallets, everything was just like the games.

I loved the duet of Luigi and Fluttershy, those two would make amazing comedic scenes.

Also Trixie seems to be something to laugh about.

Would Fawful appear in this game? There is a lot to see and I'm here to read it with a big smile.

#34 · 145w, 1d ago · · · Chapter 4 ·


I think Trixie is filling his role in my opinion. Somepony to be used for comical relief and easy exp.

#35 · 145w, 1d ago · · · Chapter 4 ·

I knew Trixie would be the constant annoyance (aka Croco, Junior Troopa, Popple, etc.), but I'm still betting on a team up with Wario and Waluigi. Comedy ensues. In great (and powerful) numbers. :pinkiehappy:

#36 · 145w, 1d ago · · · Chapter 5 ·

WHY DOESNT THIS GAME ACTUALLY EXISTS!!!!!!?!?!?!?!?!!?:raritydespair:

#37 · 145w, 1d ago · · · Chapter 5 ·

I would buy this game in 10 seconds flat. Sorry couldn't resist.

#38 · 145w, 1d ago · · · Chapter 4 ·


I mean seriously this is a good storyline and it fits both properties real well. :ajsmug:

I wish to encourage you upon such great work as I cannot wait to see what next in this tale of yours. :yay:

#39 · 145w, 1d ago · · · Chapter 5 ·

I would so buy this game, just to see the combinations that the plumbers would make with the likes of Rainbow Dash and Pinkie Pie. :rainbowlaugh:

Please do keep up the good work upon such a great storyline like this one. :pinkiehappy:

#40 · 145w, 1d ago · · · Chapter 5 ·

I agree with the other commentators i really want this to be a real game.. i don't care if it's by nintendo or just fanmade i want this to be made a real game..

Oh great job so far.. sure i spotted some errors.. but it's still good :twilightsmile: keep up the good work :raritywink:

#41 · 145w, 1d ago · · · Chapter 5 ·


As I've said before, I'm trying to put a team together to make this a game.

I've got someone helping with music, but that's about it.

If you know someone that might be interested in joining the team, point them my way, please!

#42 · 145w, 1d ago · · · Chapter 5 ·


This is GENIUS.

>>221146 Wait, you're actually making this into a game?!

Depending on how you're making it, I might be able to help with the coding.

#43 · 145w, 1d ago · · · Chapter 5 ·


Hit the Newgrounds forums. There's loads of flash artists there to make it into a flash game.

#44 · 145w, 1d ago · · · Chapter 1 ·

"Fluttershy had spent her time and money at the Yoshi Shop, purchasing a manual on Yoshi care, as well as some food. She had also applied for a certificate allowing her to raise Yoshis in Equestria. The beast itself would have to wait for another visit, when she wasn't pre-occupied."

Fluttershy raises a Yoshi.....  Somepony needs to write that!

#45 · 145w, 1d ago · · · Chapter 2 ·

I nearly died at Twilight giving Mario the classic tutorial for these games.

#46 · 145w, 1d ago · · · Chapter 3 ·


:moustache:  I second this.

#47 · 145w, 22h ago · · · Chapter 6 ·


Drop me a line at, and we can work things out from there.

#48 · 145w, 17h ago · · · Chapter 6 ·

:rainbowlaugh:  Green Missile, poor Luigi!

#49 · 145w, 16h ago · · · Chapter 6 ·

I don't know, iare luigi and mario going to be able to use lightning and fire? that would be appropriate for the oncoming Discord/Bowser VS mario and luigi fight at the end.

#50 · 144w, 6d ago · · · Chapter 7 ·

Quick question.. about the game.. is it gonna be like mario and luigi super star saga?

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