Hello? Is this thing on?
Hi! I’m Pinkie Pie! Of course, I bet a lot of you already knew that, seeing as this whole site is made for stories about me and my friends. How cool is that? I mean, it’s really super neat that you guys would want to write about me and my friends! Thanks!
Anyway, I’m just coming here to explain what happened! That meanie Discord pulled his tricks on EverSoNitro, so now he doesn’t want to write the story anymore! That means that me and my friends can’t go to stop him, so that means he can do whatever he wants now! It’s a really sneaky trick, I know, but don’t worry! I’m gonna get Twilight out here, so she can talk to EverSoNitro and try to bring him to his senses! Hold on though, it might take a little while!
Oh, and ESN, if you’re reading this, sorry about breaking into your account, but I just had to let everyone know what’s happening, because they might get super-duper worried! They really like this story, no matter what that meanie told you! Don’t worry, we’re going to help you out!
Hug and Kisses!
Pinkie Pie
...I didn't write that...
Welp, if someone's hijacked my account, I'd better change my password.
The story's still cancelled.
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well. that's one way of canceling a story
Is it canceled, or is in on hiatus? There is a difference.
NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!!!! &
You can't just cancel this great and wonderful storyline, you just can't.
I think that you have made a mistake in classifying this as cancelled when it should be classified as on hiatus.
Also, I can't tell if you really want to write this story but won't be able to, don't want to write this story but don't want to make us feel like you're just quitting on us, or if you're legitimately schizophrenic. (Okay, well, it's not the last one, but I can't tell between the other two.)
YOU CAN WRITE THIS, ESN! THE POWER OF CELESTIA COMPELS YOU!
Aww, i loved how this was going to. It was nice to have not to long short chapters to read on my phone, espicaly with a fun mario in it.
Hurry Pinkie! Get Twilight and fix this guy so that we can see Discord's scrawny ass kicked!
Hello? Pinkie told me that somepony really needed my help, is somepony named "EverSoNitro" here?
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...Yeah, that's me...
Are you friends with whoever it was that hacked my account? If so, tell them I really don't appreciate them messing with my stories, even if they are garbage.
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Oh, hi there! My name is Twilight Sparkle; Pinkie was going on about an author or something helping us on our adventure, and without you, we can't stop Discord. I don't think I've ever actually seen you, but if you're as important as Pinkie seems to think, then you've got to keep writing! Equestria, the Mushroom Kingdom, and even the rest of the world is at stake!
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Wow, really? You're going to go RP on me to try to get me to start again? Whatever, it's not gonna work. It's a terrible story, from a terrible writer. I don't think I've ever written anything that isn't complete and utter garbage. I suck, plain and simple, now leave me alone.
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now lookie here... read my megaman crossover.
i personally think it needs a barrels full of shotgun rain...but several people seem to like it, so for them, i shall write it till the end.
349482 Can I be Laughter? I LOVE jokes! Or are they a different set of elements? (i.e. The Elements of Fandom) I never roleplayed before though, so I don't know anything about it.
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Don't say that! I'm not going to question how you seem to know everything we're doing, and even thinking, but I looked at your story. You're a great writer! Just look at all the people who want you to keep writing!
Hmm, okay, yes, I do like your little meta ploy here, but it will be useless! Lord Discord's stratagem won't be so easily-
Get off my account, bub.
Why should I? You can't stop me, anyway!
No, but this account...
Oh, hi! Theeeere you aaaare~ I wonder how many pieces I can make out of youuuu~
...Eh, nevermind, you'll figure it out soon enough.
H- hey! Stay away from me with- Careful! That looks sharp! Watch it! Whoa!
Sorry I was bored and wrote this
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I'm done talking to you, alright? I've made up my mind, I'm done writing this story, and nobody's going to change my mind on that! So cut the RP BS, it's getting annoying.
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Seriously, this is not the place for this crap. Take it somewhere else.
>> EverSoNitro
http://www.youtube.com/watch/?v=sYf64O-tsy4
Edit: Whoops I did reply wrong
I refuse to listen to this foolishness. If you want to stop writing the story, that's fine, but I will not have such a great writer put himself down.
You've effectively combined two of my favorite things in a fantastic and creative way, and have done an amazing job in writing the story so far. You are, by no means, a mediocre writer. If you want to drop this for something else planned, by all means, go right ahead, but stopping a story because you think you're doing a BAD JOB? Does the fact that this story has 59 like and 3 dislikes mean anything to you? This is a pretty tough to please crowd you're dealing with, and you've held our attentions for 13 chapters, which is a lot more than I could say for most other books I've read.
Although it disappoints me to see that one of my favorite stories is ending before a conclusion is reached, it breaks my heart to see one of the few people left in the world with a talent for writing throw that all away.
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Come on! You've got to keep writing! You're a great writer, don't let anyone tell you otherwise! Especially not the likes of Discord! You've just got to put your heart into it, and it's sure to come out great!
>>EverSoNitro
That's Discord Talking! If this was bad, Why are there so many people who are sad at you stopping it? If you won't do it for yourself, do it for us.
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You know what? You're right. It's wrong for me to put myself down like this, and after reading everyone's comments, it's clear that the story isn't as bad as I was making it out to be. I have no idea what came over me, all I could hear was this voice going "You're a hack" and "You should stop writing forever". Weird thing was, it wasn't even my voice.
Sounded a bit like Q from Star Trek.
Well, anyway, thank you all for your kind words. I'll have the next chapter up as soon as I can.
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I'm glad you came to your senses. It would have been a tragedy for us to lose a great writer such as yourself.
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I'm glad I could help. Now, I've got to get back to my friends, we've got princesses to rescue and kingdoms to save! I'll be sure to tell Pinkie that you're okay, she seemed really worried.
̇͊͛ͤͪ̓̐̓̉ͤ͏̭̱̳͙̙̞̰͙̘̬̫͎͢ͅ ̸̵̱͚̱͇͙̪̖̹̮̥̺͔͕͔̼̱̭͈̰͒̆͐̊̆̎͊̔̑̑̈́ͩ̓̀̾̍̀́ ̸̡̢͛̍̾ͯ́̓̈̚͏̧̗͙̣̤͖ ̵̢̀̅͗͐̃ͣ̐͢҉̯̼͖̼̟̟̥̼͖̻͎̲̰͕̱̳͇̜͜ͅC̥̖̝̪̮͖͚̼̠͎ͮ͌ͤ̏̂̑̎ͫͣ͌͋ͩ̿̑͆͗͂̓́̀͘͟H̷̟̮̩̘͉̥͈̳̬͔̻͇̱̙̥̫͖̺̄̊͗̇͑́͡ͅĂ̡̞̭͔̲̤͖͉̗̬̞͚͕̙ͥ̾ͨͪ͂̎͛̇ͧͮ̿̀̈̊͌ͭ̚͟O̐ͤ̄͛ͫ̈͒̚͢͢͟͢͏̖͙̤̖S̴̶̘̙͕̖̜̗͔̣͗ͩͥ̏͂ͩ̏̔̾ͮͦ̀͡
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͛ͧ̄̉҉̴̴̨̩͕̪̳̤͚͍̭̘͓̙̬͘
̬͈̯̘̩̜̦̫͙̦̣̖̬̦̫͆̇ͭͫ̎̈́̌ͬ̑̑̓ͯͤͮ̿ͬ͢͞͝ͅ ͓̹̰̱̪͕̠̑͑͐ͤͬͨͨ̊͐̍̏̐́͜ ̷̸̧̼̖̙̖̭̬͉̠̫̣̲̩̙ͮ̾̅ͯ͐ͣ͛̾ͦ̄ͫ̀͠ ̸̥̗̣̰̙̫ͦ͋͊̽͂͢ ̌͛̈́͛ͤͬͥ͐̾̊̀҉̴̨͖̟͙͚̥̘̝̜̮̪̝̼̦̞̫̖̥͢͡ ̷̸̳̯̱̞̻͙̞̮̬̯̤̬̮͈ͦͤ̅̍͊ͨ̎ͮ̅̎ͭ̔͗ͩ͊̇͟ ̮̭͎͚̘̪͍̭̣͎ͯͦͦͧ̚͡ ̵̛̗͈̫̼͖̞͈̭̞͖͍̹̙̞͍̠̺̲͑ͥ͋̿͊͆̎̿ͫ̑̊̊̑͊̈́̇ͯ̚ ̴̶̟̠̘̻̞̥̱̱͎̟͎̥̤͔ͭ̓͐ͨ̅̀̍̈́͐̄̌ͫ͗́̋̊̚͘͝ ̸̛̪͇͉̠̜̠̲̤̋̉ͭͧ͐͊̕͡͡ͅDͨͦͧ̽͊̑ͦ́͏̸̨͓̘͈̦̗̮̲̤̮̬̺̩̗̦̪͖͔̩̜I̛ͩ̃͆̏ͧ́̾̓ͩ̀̚͡͏̵̥̙͖̮̫̦̦̮͎̜̞͇͈̳S̶̼͍̫̱͎͚͕̦͇̫̱̺͕̳̪̭̜̖͙͆ͮ͌͐ͫ́͜O͗ͤ̌̎ͦ͒͏̮̥͈̺͙͔̲̼͕̰͓̼͈̻̪͈̱̀͡R̸̝̣̹̟͎͔̱̜̲͎̪̲͍͓̲ͯͦ͌͂̏ͪ̒̍͛̆́ͭ͐ͣ̀͘̕Dͪͯ̍̓̈́ͩ̋̈́͏҉̺̠̖͙̟̲̳͓͇̬̻͍͇͇̩̝̞̀͡Ȩ̛̬̱͓͓̜̙͚̤̰͕͔̗ͨ̈͒̾ͮ̂͒̄̏̈́̒̈̂̎̀̌̆̈́R͉͕̼̝͓̘͉͉̤͇ͦ͂͗̎̈̈ͨ̿̈̅ͯ͆ͪ̿̑͆ͣ̚͘͞
You're like the only other writer that is doing a Mario crossover besides me...I think. If you go then I'll have a monopoly and that is just sad.
Wait... could it be? I was just looking through my stories, trying to figure out if there were any that I should de-track, when I noticed that the status on this gem had been changed from "cancelled" back to "incomplete". Knowing that you've picked the pen back up has absolutely made my day! Thankyou so much for having the courage to share your talents with us.
Just stumbled upon this little gem of a story.
I must say, from one Mario/MLP crossover writer to another, this is really well done. I don't get how you thought this was bad.
Carry on and don't get discouraged.
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I call Discord
>>EverSoNitro
I see what you did there.
Nice play around with the RP in the comments area.
Discord going as far as messing with the author, nice
Somehow... the story chaining to the comments made it about 300% cooler.
Now if only there was a sequel to this with more expansion... you know what? I think I'll sit on that thought and wait for this one to finish. From there... I can decide how best to tribute this incredible... THING.
It's not quite a fic, not quite a crossover... it's like a game script. All we need now is the game.
finish this story or PERISH
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i was thinking the same thing while twilight was doing that tutorial thing with mario ever i picture it like a video game every action every dieloge everym movement like it is one
Now that's an original idea if I've ever read one! Discord breaking through the Fourth Wall to discord zhe author and make him stop writing in order to win. Bravo, good sir, bravo! Have seven (7) mustaches for this wonderful bit of storytelling:
well, things took a turn for the random
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I found the Elements of Fanfiction if that helps.
Let's see, there's
Crossovers
Slice of Life
Clopfics
Human in Equestria
Comedy
And finally, the key Element,
Editing!
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WOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!