Sweetie Belle has a plan. A plan that she worked on for a whole five hours after reading a few pages of one of Rarity's romance novels. And this plan is all because of the upcoming school dance.
This story takes when the three fillies are grown up, and roughly the same age as the Mane 6.
Inspiration for this story came to me at 5 AM. I don't think this should be taken to seriously, as I see it as just a mindlessly cute one shot romance. Also the characters act the way they do for the convenience of the plot. The things my brain comes up with when I'm barely awake...
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Short, sweet, few grammatical errors. You're gonna go far, kid!
D'aww.
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"The things my brain comes up with when I'm barely awake..."
I know that feel, bro.
I read that title too literally
You caught my attention, to put it lightly...
*glares at author*
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Interesting story. Taking a line from Harold in Total Drama, you have intrigued and fascinated me, dear sir.
Unexplored territory; interesting concept, still uncommon but not entirely original. You get a thumbs up!
I actually had to Google that...
I'm glad this is more innocent than the title would imply...
Also, you've done something that I love when shippers do - you created a homosexual relationship and no one is acting like it's a big deal. I can understand when authors make note of how it's perhaps unusual, but not looked down on, but when characters are like "I'm gay, and I thought you would hate me" it just grinds my gears. I'm very glad you didn't do that. Thumbs up! And is this really incomplete, or did you just forget to change it?
Very cute story and I agree with what Vash the Stampede said.
"Sweetie Belle has a plan." Aaaand I'm in.
Lovely!
:'3
Bit repetitive, you may wish to clean that up a bit.
I believe you meant to say "mad."
Other than that, I couldn't really point to anything major. Another good show! And yeah, I could totally see the three of them growing from friends to lovers.
Oh, forgot to mention, but you have it listed as "incomplete." Not sure if this is a one-shot or not, but if it is, you might wanna change that.
Using my Freshman French Skills, I have roughly translated the title to either Manage Three or Managing Three.
Not a bad story.
Prefer regular Male/Female relationship stories, but eh.
Thumbs.
1447879 oops. Thank you for pointing those out. I went through and cleared some of the errors out. If there are anymore please let me know.
Also I now have the story listed as Complete. Thank you for pointing that out to me
1447195 Did I do something wrong?
1447524 And as for "those" kinds of fics, well I will never write one. I don't see the point in writing fics like that. Plus a fic with foals as center shouldn't be about carnal relations.
Thank you all for the comments so far. Love you all.
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Lol, no mate, this is just a theme I'm working with as well.
Keep writing!
That was sweet. I was originally concerned with the implications of this and the possibility of the CMC actually participating in a literal "ménage à trois" which would have moved this story deep into the ick zone.
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Well, you got the "three" part right but the managing part is wrong.
It literally translates out to "household of three" with the implication that there is sexual activity between all three participants.
Ménage, all by itself, means "household" and can refer to an actual household with a family or roommates where everybody effectively contributes to the household both physically and financially.
1449494 Right. I'm just starting to learn French, so I'm still a noob.
Three participants engaging in coitus, you say?
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That's the implication, yes.
And stop looking at me like that. It's creepy.
1450439 I'LL stop staring at you. THIS guy however...
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The things my brain comes up with when I'm barely awake. Huh, that's exactly how all of my story is written
I want moar =\
For some reason, I could not get this song out of my head the whole time reading this:
Great story btw, so cute!
I want another chapter of this story.
Im surprised that Rarity was so calm about Sweetie seeing her adult novels x)
Good story.
3273441 Thanks. I haven't gotten a comment on this story in a while.
Ah, the rare and elusive CMC triad romance. Sadly, just a one shot, but I'll take what I can get.
*after reading*
Some grammar mistakes, some dialogue felt a little awkward, the whole "becoming girlfriends through being dared to kiss" has been done for this pairing in at least two other stories (granted, there's only like ONE story for this pairing that has more than one chapter, so whatever). Other than that, it was a sweet enough one shot.
I just really wish there was at least one story for this pairing that actually took the time to develop their relationship from friendship to infatuation to love in a very believable way that could give commentary on the pros AND cons a relationship like this could have for the CMC.
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A nice and sweet story. :) Have a like.