Just a guy that writes fan fiction from time to time.
Samuel is a young man with a good life, but that is changed as he is transported to Equestria. He meets and befriends the inhabitants but is taken back to his world by a strange, well dressed man, and given a simple choice: Pick one world to live in for the rest of his life. Can he choose a world without losing himself in the process?
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I HAVE IDEA! its DISCORD! What do I win?
Ah another HiE. Its always cool to read these. No matter what people say no two HIE fics are the same, they all have differences in character and plot. A damn good start to a good story.
Definitely needs some editing. Tons of misspellings, grammar errors, verb tense issues, awkward phrasing, etc. That distracts from enjoying it, but aside from that I would say pony characterization was fairly well done and the premise could be interesting.
Only thing is that I don't currently see the reasons why he would want to stay in Equestria. Seems a bit lonely to be the sole human there.
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Yeah this is my first attempt at a fic of any sort. For the editting ill be going over it all in due time. And for as why he would stay, well its only chapter one. More to come.
MMMMMMMOOOOOOOOOOOOOAAAAAAAAAAAAARRRRRRRRRR!!!!!!!!!!
This isn't getting NEAR the attention it deserves.
Interesting...
ooooh this is interesting
this totally deserves more attention then its getting.
Putting aside the few grammatical errors, this story is quite good, the concept of a week to decide in which world the main character wants to live is interesting, this is really not getting near the attention it deserves, as someone already pointed out
I'm really looking forward for the next chapter
i know right, im loving this.
DWAAA
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Hmmmm, for some reason, I am imagining Mister as the Millenium Earl fro D-Gray Man lol, but good story nonetheless.
That's so adorable
D'AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAW has been achieved. have a moustache
That is just so cute
Keep the chapters coming
Well that was short but interesting celestia + discord I'm guessing
Bravo, bravo. Hmm, I always wondered, why is it 'bravo', or 'brava'? Who came up with the words to accompany applause anyway?
Loved it
It was good while it lasted
Great fic, I really like it
Good luck with your future and current stories
A heartwarming story. Exactly what I was looking for. Bravo sir. You are a better author than I. I will have my eye on you
Awesome story I liked it alot
YOU BROKE DA RULEZ SAM
YOU ARE WALKING SHIRTLESS
adorable THAT WAS SO AWSOME
i loved it. you did a
terribleterrific jobdl.dropbox.com/u/31471793/FiMFiction/Luna_lolface.pngGreat story! it was well done. the way you wrote this is fantastic it could be made a series because of the way you wrote it. i hope you do another story like this one.
I love rule two.
Lol, "Run for it!"
She kissed him on ze cheek... I see where this is going
I have a feeling somepony is going to ignore that it's meant for Luna
I want a hug from Woona...
Darn i thought it was discord too
Very well done best i've read of all the fanfics i have read so far
call the medical team, he was just hit by a ICM.
huh..so discord created the equestria universe..explains why he doesnt want to kill and maim
2321348 we all do..we all do..
his choice just got over 20% harder
I hope you do a sequel some time when you have time
I think you meant memorize not "mesmerize". Other wise good so far.
This story really doesn't have the recognition it deserves. It was one of the first fanfics I ever read and is still one of my favourites to this day
I hope you make a sequel for this, because I would love to see how Luna and Pluto's relationship continues
Anyway, amazing story, keep up the good work!
Not bad. Very good. Did like. Sequel?
The whole traversing between two different worlds for a human is an interesting concept. More so, since he has a choice to choose whether to live in Equestria or Earth. I would like to see this take the less traveled path, with the human choosing to live on Earth, and living his life out there, rather than the easy near utopian world Equestria is portrayed as. (Unless the stories I'm reading have some Stu/ Sue elements to them.)
well worth the time i spent to read. it was simple and well written. bravo i say. will there be a sequal?
ppplllleeeeaaaasssseeee
3454580 There might, I've had this idea of following Discord and Celestia for a fic.
very good well done
That was absolutely fantastic. A few minor complaints here and there, but overall it was a great read. Defiantly needs more recognition, that's for sure!
Im not gonna lie but i was reading this chapter whilst listening to some nights by fun
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=jYWZPBmvldY
I agree this story is not getting the attention it deserves. That said something I have noticed is that you trust spell check too much
here are two examples that I noticed in this chapter. just remember it doesn't care if it is the right word just is it spelled right.
Keep up the good work
B.D.
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