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Mitslits


I am new at fanfictions, but I really enjoy writing so here goes nothing!

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The Cutie Mark Crusaders are all grown up. But along the way, something happened that tore them apart. What was it? And can they possibly overcome it and salvage their ruined friendship? Based off of and inspired by the song Friendship by Aviators.

Chapters (6)
Comments ( 33 )

This ought to be good! Can't wait to read some more. :ajsmug:

awesome idea i will be watching this sound really interesting

Hmmm I think I see where this is going. And I like it.

Oh my. This is very interesting. Will be watching for more!

Like. Favorite. Track.

Ohmigosh, omighosh, omigosh! I thank you, all of you, for your generous compliments! Thank you so so so much! :heart::heart::heart:

I want more, this story is great!!!

AAAAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHHHHHHH, i want to read more its just getting to the good part!!!!!

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:ajsmug: I see what you did there. :trollestia:

:applecry::fluttercry::fluttershbad: oh this story just makes me so bronymotional so sad when friends split. but the peices are coming together can't wait till the next chapter... well i gess i have to:pinkiegasp:

did NOT see all that coming!

:pinkiehappy: it waas beautiful I love it:heart:

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I would like to thank you for reading this whole story all the way through and commenting on every chapter. :pinkiehappy: Thank you so much, and thanks to everyone else who commented also! :heart::heart:

i like what i see so far :scootangel:

very moving piece you have here. each chapter was short and sweet. im glad i found this randomly tonight :pinkiehappy: in the end i think Scootaloo said it best “That was awesome!” :scootangel:

I love how Apple Bloom looks in that picture.

Ooh. I likes dis. Now to read it all at once. :twilightsheepish:

I'm crying after reading this. And I'm not sure if they're good tears or bad. :fluttercry: I think it's a mix of both.
This fanfic was short and to the point, well written, and kept my interest all the way through. Because of shortness and it already being complete, I was able to read it all at once as well.
I also have to say that it brought back fairly recent, bittersweet memories of a now-broken and lost friendship of mine. I lost my best friend in a totally different way from this, but still I think that's the reason I'm upset now. :fluttershysad:
But the ending, especially that sweet song, gave me the smallest bit of hope that when school starts again I might be able to fix things up with him. It reminded me that if you were once close enough and cared enough about someone (or somepony) you always have a chance of getting them back, even when it seems you've lost them forever. :pinkiesad2:
Or something like that, I pretty much just woke up so I probably sound stupid, oh well...
Anywayyy... my own personal problems aside... please write more stuff like this. I love it. I love stories like this. And even though I still have 27 stories I need to read, I'm about to go through all of your stories and if I like what I read, I'll probably start watching you. Thank you for the awesome story. :'D

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You're welcome for the story. :twilightblush: I really appreciate you taking your time to read my stories and to write the comment, both. Most people who read don't share personal things and I am glad you did. I hope you and your friend are able to get back together. :twilightsmile:

You made Scoots' special talent dancing?
Have you read Scootaloo's Dreams by any chance?

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No, I don't believe I have. Why?

1696483 Read it :3
It's really good, and Scootaloo dances in it :D

Wait, the last song wasn't Friendship by Aviators. Wtf.

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No, you're right, it wasn't.

Good job! This is awesome so far!
(Aviators Friendship is one of my favourite MLP original songs.) :pinkiehappy:

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Thanks! It's one of mine too.

This is the first Story to make me happy and SQUEE!!
:pinkiehappy:

It's cute and sad at the same time. I LOVE IT. MOAR. MOAR!!!!! uhm....i-if you don't mind....*squee*:twilightblush:

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