In high school and still a lover of My Little Pony, especially anything and everything to do with Big McIntosh.
A saga detailing the awkward unlikely love between Fluttershy and Big McIntosh, following the growth of their relationship from those first, fleeting moments that passed between them, to the more intimate pieces of their love. Follow the up and downs, joys and sorrows, smiles and tears that constitute FlutterMac. It all starts with a touch, and a blush...
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i liked it, it would be better if the story was in a slower pace as romantic stories tend to be and just one thing it's Big Macintosh.
hope you continue writing
1407154 Thank you for the feedback, I'll re work the pace when I edit it
Very interesting indeed.
like it hope more comes out soon
That last line
you better not force this relationship
cause if you do imma -imma - imma…sit here and do nothing 
Oh god rarity what do you have planned
I like your story. A nice start.
Too many comas though. Read it out loud, you can find where sounds weird.
I noticed its in a lot at the end of speaking. Nothing serious, doesn't hurt the story, but it does halt the flow too much.
Poor Fluttershy HAS SO MANY FEELS!
But what if Fluttershy doesn't want people to know?
ponies?
1436915 Oops, I hate commas so much. But I learned to type dialogue that way in English class, so then after I saw your comment I looked up the correct way and then my face met my desk... Anyway, I will go fix those, thank you for letting me know.
(royal canterlot voice) PINKIE AND RARITY IF YOU ANYTHING TO THIS RELATIONSHIP THAT IS DEVELOPING ILL BE THE ONE BANISHING YOU TO THE MOON FOR 15-20 YEARS
This is adorable! Keep it up!
Also, do you have it in the Fluttermac group? That could boost this story!
Pretty nice.
You just need to reread the chapter that starts with "As Big Mac bent down to grasp Apple Blooms tail in his teeth".
The Fluttershy? That part made me laugh so badly. Probably added the "The" by accident.
Can't wait for more.
1454739Lol, thank you for pointing that out. Also, as I was checking that... I realized that apparently they had 'internal' contact instead of initial or fleeting. Thanks for pointing that out.
Can't read anymore, to much d'aaaaaawwww.
Angel is in fact a boy bunny. Only thing that sticks out to me, the rest is just fine.
